SHIVIKA SS: FOLLY

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Posted: 8 years ago
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HI! I have been a silent reader for the most part of being here on this forum and i always was fascinated and wanted to write a story. So here i am writing for the first time

Chapter 1:

With a cup of hot chocolate in her hand Anika sat gazing at the rising sun , sitting at the beach caf in Pondicherry . It has now become a habit of hers to watch the sun rise sitting there at the caf for the past 5 months and which is the only time in her day where she could relax before a hectic day of work at the art gallery to which she is the manager. The regular patrons of the caf greeted her and she just replied with a smile which did not reach her eyes since the fateful day 5 months ago.

She missed Sahil so much , but she had to leave because it was for the best and she couldn't stay there after everything that happened , she knew that Sahil would be fine Om had promised her of that and she knew that unlike his brother Om would not break this promise of his even though he had no idea at that time why she was asking such a ridiculous promise of him but he had laughed and told her Bhabhi why do you worry unnecessarily I know for sure that you would always take care of Sahil but don't worry I promise you that I would always take very good care of him' that was the last genuine smile she had smiled and after that it was all fake smiles which she had mastered that no one would be able to tell the difference. As she sat there pondering over her thoughts she failed to see a pair of shocked eyes staring at her .

"Listen to me O. I seriously did see her, it was Anika Bhabhi only and even you would be surprised or more to say shock at the condition she is in"

"Rudra are you cent percent sure it was her. Because we don't want to get his hopes high then to see them violently crashing down. And what do you mean by her condition? She is alright right?"

" I don't think so O "

Om what are you talking about' both of them heard Shivay voice questioning Om as Om turned around shocked to see Shivay standing there with expectations and longing in his eyes.

Om what happened to Anika she is alright right ? Where is she ?Tell me Om please' Shivaay begged desperately hoping that atleast this information about finding her were true.





Please tell me if i should continue...

Chap 2 - Page 2

Chap 3 - Page 4

Chap 4 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's so interesting...
Well written.
Plzzz do continue
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Awesome
Eagerly waiting for your next update

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting. ...continue plz😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 2:

Shivay's POV

I was sitting on my private jet to Pondicherry along with Om by my side after I had over heard Om talking to Rudra who has gone with his friends to Pondicherry. I had immediately packed my bags to go see her for myself.

I am seriously lucky to have Om and Rudra as my brothers as they were the only ones who stood by side and trusted me when my whole family were against me and was forcing me to accept Tia and her child even after I vehemently denied of it being mine , SHE believed me though but I couldn't honor her trust on me and I had let her down .

I am such a failure, I had failed as a grandson , a son ,a nephew , a brother, a brother in law, and most importantly as a husband to my Anika, my wife, my love .I couldn't even gain the trust of my parents who didn't even blink their eyes before accepting whatever bullshit Tia had told about the baby being mine when I know for sure I hadn't even kissed her . But my wife believed me she stood by my side when no one else did and look at me I being an idiot that I am failed to see what was going in my own house that to , to my wife . I did not even have an inkling about the way she was treated by my mother and Tia when I was not around and now i am paying for my sins of ignoring all those signs whoever said that ignorance is bliss is terribly wrong because it comes back to bite you in your arse.

I had finally managed to break the one woman who stood by side through thick and thin , sacrificing herself and protecting me and my family from my enemies. She had forgiven me easily when I had married her forcefully by threatening her with her brother's life , when I had accused her of sleeping with Daksh but I don't think she would forgive me this time because my ignorance had done what my words and actions couldn't - Breaking her completely , to the point where she left me, left Oberoi mansion and above all left her brother who she loved dearly and more than her life, on that day 5 months back. And I don't even know the complete reason of her sudden departure .

I wish I stood by her side

I wish I had not announced Tia as my wife in front of the media

I wish I had stopped my mother from taunting her

I wish that I had stopped Tia from living in Oberoi mansion

I wish I had stopped Tia's advances

I wish I had paid more attention to her words

I wish I had told her that I loved her

But I know it's all my wishful thinking, nothing could change what happened but I am not Shivaay singh Oberoi for a reason I would set everything right for her and for me , I will try everything and give everything just to be with her.

Now I know that name, blood, lineage and every other things has no place compared to Love and relationship. As the saying goes " your best teacher is your last mistake" and I am a shrewd man and I had learnt it the hard way so never am I going to give upon her or our future.



Thank you all for your support. It means a lot😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome..
Waiting for Shivika's meeting 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing...continue soon plzzz😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Love the way ur story is going...
Gald that anika has oms support to take care of her brother...
Waiting to see how shivaay makes amends for his actions
Continue soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting... waiting eagerly for next chapter
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely
Plz update soon Nd PM me

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