Yuvani short story..After leap part 1 and part 2.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Here my story begins with after the molestation ..No leap..
Here I write all emotions ie ki society n family members kaise react karten h. How Judge consider as it rape or wht?? Yuvani Scenes how yuvi support n take stand for suhani. N mostly how women gone through..N also rape child ko birth de ki nhi how dadi react on it wo BHI me likhungi..
Part 1 st

Sambhav arrested by police.
Suhani is in trauma ..Not reacting ..She is like live dead body .She just wants yuvi uske Saath rhe bas..
Bhawana MAA asked to yuvi Kya HOA suhani ko.. Yuvi Kya batayon me Kuch nhi kar paya MERI wajah se suhani. MAA Kya yuvi -yuvi cry badly n every one shattered..
Convo between children Krishna suhani aunty ko Kya hoa wo Kuch kyun nhi bol rhi. Mamma bhi Chali gyi .. Yuvani - me mumma se gussa hoon na isliye mamma mujhse baat nhi kr Rahi he. Yuvaan -hmm Mene mumma ko sambhav uncle ko papa banane ke liye bola tha na isliye wo humse baat nhi kar Rahi he.

MAA goes to suhani room Chalo bacho..Nhi hum kahin nhi jayenge.
Yuvi enters shout badly on children bola Bahar jao..Ma yuvi Kya kr raha..Tu asae react karega toot jayenga to suhani ko kaun sambhalega.. tujhe suhani ki dhaal banna hoga.. Mujh MERI suhani wapis chayiye Yuvi .. wwada kr mujhse ..

Part 2 cont

Yuvi ..Hmm maa me ase toot nhi sakta..Me suhani ki parchai banoga.. Mujhe BHI MERI bakbak . Halke bhikre Baal bolne wali suhani wapis chayiye. Yuvi MAA ye Kya he. Pratima -oil h suhani ke baalo me lagongi MAA hmm MAA mujhe de do ...Aap Gaana gao na lori wo wali jab suhani MAA banne wali thi -yuvi puts his hand on oil..N open suhani hair ye dekho ab tumhara sadu champi wala ban gya. He open suhani hairs n massage gently on her hair. N sing a song sir Jo tera chakrayen ya Dil dooba jaye. N smile with lots of tears ..Becoj suhani is not reacting. Kuch bolo suhani. Suhani just hug yuvi mujhe chod kr mat Jana yuvi.. Saware play... Suhani puts her head on yuvi lap n so jati he ..Yuvi kiss on suhani fore head.. Rolling his fingers on suhani hair's. Me hamesha TumhAre saath rahonga..He hold her hands .

Part 3 cont

Yuvraj ------ yuvi sleeps besides suhani ..He just recall all memories that he spent with suhani.He Mesmerized plse theek ho Jao suhani .Plse plse me promise krta hoon kabhi tumhe Kuch nhi kahonga..Plse suhani theek ho jao tum ase haar nhi sakti Tum sambhav ko jeetne nhi de sakti tumhe Krishna n yuvani ke liye inspiration baana he.. UN laakho hajooron women ki awaj banna h .Tum ASE darindo ko jeetne nhi de sakti. He hold his hand tightly n kiss her hands..

Pratima standing outside the yuvani room ..Saw all ie. She cry n goes to Pooja Ghar ...here she saw children and rags husband .. Trio children asking to him. .Bade papa baghwanji se bolon na mama ko theek karde ..
Krishna ---haan bade papa meri mama bhi Chali gyi.suhani aunty ko to Kuch nhi hoga na..Wo hi to thi Jo mujhe dadi se bachati thi..

Krishna-----chalo Yuvaan n Yuvaani aur golo bhaiya mere saath chalo.

Pratima and Saurabh----- kaha ja rahe hoon bachoon

Krishna --- ek min dadi

Pratima n saurabh follows children..

Krishna ----take all children to garden ..N aasman par dekhti he.. She asked to all ki tooten hue tare se Kuch mango..All children and even pratima and saurabh bhi .. wish karten he ki suhani theek ho jayen..


Yuvi---- standing on Window ye sab dekhta he..N his tears falls down on his cheeks.. Dekha suhani sab tumse kitna pyaar karten.. Mujhse to koi BHI pyaar nhi karta...He smiles ..



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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice beginning...plz continue😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you soon much I am waiting who will write stories on yuvani and continue and post as soon as possible😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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raniraj it is too short but i like it.kaash ssel m v aisa hota.agar leap nhi hota to ssel ka best track hota.pz continue m jaanana chahati hu ki yuvraj suhani ko kaise sambhalega .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: raniraj89

Here my story begins with after the molestation ..No leap..

Here I write all emotions ie ki society n family members kaise react karten h. How Judge consider as it rape or wht?? Yuvani Scenes how yuvi support n take stand for suhani. N mostly how women gone through..N also rape child ko birth de ki nhi how dadi react on it wo BHI me likhungi..
Part 1 st

Sambhav arrested by police.
Suhani is in trauma ..Not reacting ..She is like live dead body .She just wants yuvi uske Saath rhe bas..
Bhawana MAA asked to yuvi Kya HOA suhani ko.. Yuvi Kya batayon me Kuch nhi kar paya MERI wajah se suhani. MAA Kya yuvi -yuvi cry badly n every one shattered..
Convo between children Krishna suhani aunty ko Kya hoa wo Kuch kyun nhi bol rhi. Mamma bhi Chali gyi .. Yuvani - me mumma se gussa hoon na isliye mamma mujhse baat nhi kr Rahi he. Yuvaan -hmm Mene mumma ko sambhav uncle ko papa banane ke liye bola tha na isliye wo humse baat nhi kar Rahi he.

MAA goes to suhani room Chalo bacho..Nhi hum kahin nhi jayenge.
Yuvi enters shout badly on children bola Bahar jao..Ma yuvi Kya kr raha..Tu asae react karega toot jayenga to suhani ko kaun sambhalega.. tujhe suhani ki dhaal banna hoga.. Mujh MERI suhani wapis chayiye Yuvi .. wwada kr mujhse ..

thnq dear for coming in the forum n sharing a sweet story
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I like that part when yuvi said dekho suhani tumhara sadu champi wala ban gaya n suhani says don't leave me.heart touching moment.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I was very sweet plzz continue..N plzz try n make d dialogues separate from d other lines..I get confused which part is dialogue n which is not..Sorry if u felt bad
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjali33

I was very sweet plzz continue..N plzz try n make d dialogues separate from d other lines..I get confused which part is dialogue n which is not..Sorry if u felt bad


No... Thank dear

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