Moving On (#2 I Still Remember You)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Strange is the emotion called love.
It separates one from the world in a way that you stand alone even when standing in crowd.
Once had I thought, If I could forget you.
Perhaps falling in love again could spark something that died in me.
Betrayed my heart maybe, in every face it looks for you.

Yes, some eyes are your chocolate brown, they don't shine with your gleam of mischief.
They aren't alive as yours.
Their hair too have texture,
But why do they lack your lustre?
Smile, they too but their laughter fails to fill life in my soul,
They aren't as bright as yours.

They don't spar with me or stubbornly defy me.
They won't fight my battles as their own.
If vivacious, they grate on my nerves.
If quiet, I am irritated with that too.
They aren't fresh and witty.
They aren't you...

There are so many willing to put their hearts on stakes for the one that's already lost to a heartless.
How can I forget you Sumo, when every breath I take reminds me of you?



Hope you liked it.
This second update is a result your encouragement. Thank you for appreciating the last one.
This one was for Dolly on her promotion to a Goldie. Keep rocking darling.
#Mission850

Thank you for reading.
Love,
Swarnima.







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Nik03 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Simply amazing dear... 👏
Loved it..❤️
Keep writing... 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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"So long as the memory of certain beloved friends lives in my heart, I shall say that life is good."
I loved this idea of 'moving on'...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sheer beauty ❤️
And the last line describes Shravan's love for me ❤️
Keep these coming!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ohmygaawwd!! Did you really dedicate that to me? Firstly thank you soo soo much for that and the second thank you for continuing this...will love to read more

The last lines were soo true.. there were many willing to be his but he just wanted his sumo

I really loved this to no extend swarnima👏👏...Thanks again

Waiting for next

Dolly😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Absolute beauty Swarnima.. loved it.
#mission850!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Soo nice.
He tried but could never move on.
True love it is.
Awesome.
Loving the rain of updates from you, Swarnima.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I have moved on...but you still find a way to sneak into my mind😳..

You have a way with emotions babe...this was touching!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hats off You girl...you nailed it...

Vinu
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Posted: 8 years ago
#10
Awww so painful yet so beautiful & meaningful dear..love it..


Thank you


Love,
Spandana

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