Ariya SS::Bas Mein Tere Kabil Nahi..(Completed)

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#461

Originally posted by: aashi24
nice update
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waitng for next part

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#462

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved It
Superbbb
Wonderfully Written
Finally Ariya are together by all means
Continue Soon
Waiting eagerly for next part
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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#463

Originally posted by: cuteangel32923
Oh god di!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This has got to be the most romantic part ever...
arjun ki vo lines were so god damn intense...
aisi updates pdke mn krta hai ki bs hmare saath bhi koi aisa hi ho...
hayeee...
update soon...

Thanks dear..

Glad u like it..

Lol..hope u will get someone like him..

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#464

Part 11:-

Next morning:-

Sam's home:-

Sam is taking breakfast n lost in thinking..

Sam(in mind):-Arjun ne raat ko baad me phone hi nahi kiya..yaha wapas bhi nahi aaya..ho sakhta he usake ghar chala gaya ho..pata nahi sab thik hua ya nahi..jab phone pe baat ki tab toh woh bada ajeeb sound kar raha tha..khatir ab office ka time ho hi gaya he..office me hi usse baat kar lunga..

Thinking this Sam left to office..

Etf office:-

Its 9:30 choree n Sam has reached to office..

Sam(in mind):-Arjun abhi tak office bhi nahi aaya..hamesha toh iss waqt tak aa jata he office..aur Riya bhi nahi aayi office..

He decided to call Arjun..

Here at riya's home:-

Both ariya sleeping hugging each other..

Riya's sleep get disturb due to sunrays..she open her eyes lazily only to find herself in arjun's arms wearing only the blanket around her..

She blush remembering how Arjun shower his love whole night n don't let her sleep..

She try to get up only to pulled back again by Arjun..

Arjun(in sleepy tone):-kaha ja rahi ho..?

Riya(trying to control her blush):-woh subah ho gayi he..

Arjun(make her lye on bed n get over her):-toh kya hua..?

Riya(blushing):-plz..ab uth jate he na..office bhi Jana he..

Arjun(caressing her hairs):-office ki fikar mere hote hue tumhe karne ki zarurat nahi..so ek baat batao..how r u feeling now..?

Riya don't answer just stared him..

Arjun:-tell me..

Riya:-aapne muze ehsaas karaya ke lust aur pyar me kya farak hota he..Sikandar aur mere bich Jo hua usake liye woh sab lust tha aur lekin ye hamara pyar tha..har pal muze aapke pyar ka ehsaas hua..

She stop abruptly n blush n trying to get up..

But Arjun dont left her..n kiss her lips lightly.. She blush more..

Arjun:-abhi toh tumne mere pyar ki bas zalak dekhi he..abhi toh bahot kuch dekhna he..

Riya blush hard..but he pull her in hug..n both remain on bed..

Same time arjun's phone rings..he received it seeing phone flashing Sam's name..

Arjun:-ha Sam bol..

Sam:-tu bol ke tu he kaha..?sab thik he na..?aur Riya ka phone bhi switch off he ..nahi woh office aayi he..

Arjun:-sab thik he mere bhai..n don't worry Riya mere sath hi he..aur sun ham dono thoda late aayege office..

Sam;-thik he matlab..? Riya maan gayi..?

Arjun:-koi shaq..?

Sam:-nahi koi shaq nahi..

He giggle n cut the phone..

Riya staring to Arjun..

Arjun cut call n look to Riya..

Arjun:-bad manners miss mukherji..

Riya look him with big eyes..

Arjun:-u don't wish me good morning..

Riya(confused):-good morning sir..

Arjun:-uppss..not this way miss.mukherji..

Saying this he kissed her lips passionately..

Arjun(after broking kiss,he wink at her):-this way..samze ya samzau..?

She blush..

Arjun:-now get ready ..hame kahi Jana he..

Riya:-kaha..?office..?

Arjun:-no..its suprize..

Riya smiles cover herself with bedsheet n walked to washroom..

Both ariya get ready..they took breakfast made by Riya..n then come out of riya's home..

Arjun drives away n stop car at one place..

Both walked little..its away from city n whole greenary is visible..

Riya:-wow..ye jagah kitni khubsurat he..

Arjun :-ha sach me..

Riya:-ham yaha kyo aaye he Arjun sir..?

Arjun(holding her hand):-kyo ki iss khubsurat jagah pe salo pehale meine ek khubsurat ladki ko propose kiya tha..(Riya smiles lightly, she realized he is talking about his wife roshni)aur uss khubsurat ladki ne meri zindagi bhi khubsurat bana di..par..woh muzse dur ho gayi..aur meri zindagi viran ho gayi..

Both stared each other emotionally..

Arjun:-lekin fir se kisi ne mere dil pe dasatak di..aur issiliye aaj issi khubsurat jagah pe mein iss khubsurat ladki ko apne zindagi me hamesha ke liye shamil karna chahta hu..(Riya staring him with big eyes..n he bend on his knees, forwarding his hand)kya ye khubsurat ladki muze iss Kabil samazti he ke meri zindagi firse khushiyo se bhar de apne sath dekar..?will u marry me..??

Riya(with tears):-yes..yes..

Arjun hold her hand..make her ware a beautiful ring in her ring finger..n kiss her fingers..

He get up..n both hug each other tightly..

Both remain in hug for sometime..n then broke off..

Riya(with blush):-so this was the suprize..?

Arjun:-hmm..kaisa laga..?

Riya :-I m so happy .

Arjun:-me too..

Both look each other with love..

Riya(with blush):-umm..kafi time ho gaya he..ab office chalate he..

Arjun:-hmm..

Both back to SUV..

Arjun is driving n Riya is sitting on codriver sit..

They goes to arjun's home..he get changed n then they again now moving towards office..

Riya is smiling n blushing to herself..

Arjun:-u know Riya..Sam will be most happy when i will tell him that we r going to marry..

Riya smiles more..

Arjun:-ha..shree aur chotu bhi kam khush nahi honge..I m dam sure they will..

Riya's smile get vanished n tears beaming in her eyes hearing about choree..

Arjun saw this..

Arjun:-come on Riya..

Riya:-jab se mein wapas aayi hu meine unse thik se baat bhi nahi ki..unn dono ne baat karne ki..manane ki..kitni koshish ki..par meine unhe ignore karke..rudely baat karke bahot hurt kiya..

Arjun:-lekin tumne aisa kyo kiya..?they are ur best friends..

Riya:-muze dar tha..muze dar tha ke agar mein unhe pehale jaise mili..pehale jaise unse baate ki..toh mein khud ko rok nahi paugi..mein tut jaugi..aur mein tutna nahi chahti thi..

Tears rolled out from her eyes..

Arjun stop SUV n cup her face..wipe her tears..

Arjun(remembering about his n Sam's friendship):-Riya..dosti toh hoti hi aise he..unke samne ham tut bhi sakhte he..ro bhi sakhte he.. Kyo ki ye dosti hi hamara sath deti he..hame hasati he..aur hame sahara deke firse khade hone me help karti he..

Riya nodded trying to control her emotions..

Arjun:-so..ab bahot ho gaya..ab jab ham office jayege..aur hamare bare me sab kuch batayege toh tum unse pehale jaise hi milogi..

Riya:-hmm..

She is trying to make up her mind..

Arjun starts SUV..n both soon reach to office..

In etf office:-

Conference room:-

Choree are doing their file work..n Sam is reading one file..

Arjun n Riya enters in conference room..

Trio boys look to them..

Sam get up from chair n come to Arjun n Riya .

Arjun:-umm..we r..going to marry..

Sam look shocked..n immigiately hug Arjun then..

Choree toh itne shocked he ke bas baithe baithe waise hi dekhe ja rahe he..

Sam:-congratulations yaar..

Arjun(smiles):-thank u..

Sam then hug Riya..n congratulate her..

Arjun(to choree):-sapna nahi he guys..sach me mein aur Riya shadi karne wale he..

Choree come out of their shock n then run to Riya n about to hug her..but stop abruptly..

Riya:-sorry guys..meine bahot hurt kiya na tum logo ko..plz muze maaf kar do..mein bas issiliye tum logo ko ignore lar rahi thi kyo ki muze dar tha ke mein tut jaugi tum dono ke samne..aur muze bas strong bane rehna tha..aur tum dono ke samne mein khud ko rok nahi pati tut jati issiliye..

But she couldn't complete ..choree hug her.. N she too hug back them..Riya started crying more n more her heart out..n they too had tears..

After some time they broke off..n wipe each other's tears..

Shree:-ri tu itna abhi ro rahi he..toh bidai ke time pe kya karegi..?

Chotu:-are woh bidai ke time pe nahi royegi..woh toh khushi se dance karegi..usaki shadi usake Arjun sir se so hogi..

She pout n hit both of them playfully..n they giggles..

Sam:-aaj sham ko meri taraf se sabko dinner..

Arjun:-are lekin..

Sam:-chup kar yaar..tere liye party mein nahi dunga toh aur kyon dega..

They smiles..

Same time Sam got a call about new case n they get busy in case..

Case investigation ke bich me choree n Riya ki masti bhi chal hi rahi he..aur unki investigation about ariya bhi chal rahi he..

Aur Riya unhe bata rahi he ke kaise Sam told her that Arjun reject her proposal to keep her safe..n how Arjun was trying to manoafying her these day..

Choree get shocked to know that samjun were best friends in past..n Arjun truly loves Riya..but they get happy too for their best friends..

On the other hand Sam Arjun ko bich bich me tease kar raha he Riya ke naam se..aur jaan buzke usse puch raha he ke raat bhar woh kaha tha..

(Arjun don't tell reason why Riya was not accepting his proposal.. He don't tell Sam that what Riya has done to stop Sikandar from going out of country..because he thinks ke ye Riya aur usake bich ki baat he..ye kisi aur ko pata nahi chalani chahiye..)

(Here Riya feel relax after crying on shoulders of her best friends but still she don't tell them about her n Sikandar.. Because she feels only Arjun have right to know it..)

(Sometimes some things are there which can be shared to only ur soul partner ..not even to ur best friends..hope u will agree to me this)

After dinner treat given by Sam,all are left for their home..

Arjun stops SUV in front of riya's home..

Riya:-OK..good night..

Arjun don't says anything just keep staring her lovingly..

Riya(with slight blush):-aap aise kyo dekh rahe he..?

Arjun:-tumse ek pal bhi dur rehane ka man nahi he..lekin puri raat tumhare bagair katni he..

Riya blush..

Same time Riya's phone rings..

Riya:-mamma ka phone..??

She received it..

Riya:-hi mamma..kya aap sach me aa rahe.?omg..?wow..no..no don't worry.I will come to receive u on airport..yah..bye..

After talking on phone she cut the call..

Riya(excited to Arjun):-mamma aur dad aa rahe he..muzse milane..wow..I can't believe this..kitne dono baad unse milugi..

Arjun smiles..

Arjun:-ye toh bahot accha hua ke woh yaha aa rahe he..mein unse tumhara hath manguga..I will meet them soon..

Riya's face fell..

Arjun(seeing her face):-kya hua Riya..?woh log hamare rishte ko manege na..?I mean mein shadi shuda hu ye jankar woh kaise react karege..?isse kuch problem toh nahi hogi..?

Riya (trying to smiles):-don't worry..mere parents ke liye meri khushi se badkar kuch nahi..good night..bye..

Arjun(kiss her forehead):-good night..

Riya come out of SUV.

N walked towards her house but her mind too have same doubt that Arjun had..

Arjun sigh..kyo ki riya ne bhale usse kuch kaha ho..par usaki aakho se usse pata chal gaya he ke ye sab itna easy nahi hone wala..

He drives back to his home..

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balan04

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Posted: 9 years ago

#465

Nice update di...
Loved Arjuns proposal and how he made her understand that she can be open to her friends
Ri is really lucky to have arjun in her life
And Sam... just loved him in this...
Now what twist is riyas parents gonna make
Fingers crossed
Thanks for the pm in advance
Continue soon 😊

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unisha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#466

Interesting. Loving it. Thanks for pm.

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GOLDIEE ABROL

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Posted: 9 years ago

#467

Beautiful update dear Sonu
Loved it
Finally everything settled 😊
Ariya told everything required to their friends
I think what ever they did was completely justified
So Riya parents are coming too
Even I too have same question like Arjun 😕
Let's see what happens next
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊