Anika shivay FF(chapter 1- pg 2)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello there🤗
How are you all lovely people?😳
I am Tiara, a new follower to ishqbaaz.😉
After following for weeks and weeks last night a concept strucked me😆
And i have pen down the same below.
I hope to have two minutes time of yours for my story.I havent even done namkaran of it😆 so if you have suggestions i am open for it.😃

Waiting for your response and reactions😳

Thankyou.😛

Tiara⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prologue


Somewhere i have read this...

" what is life?- it's a journey to be complete from incompleteness. Till you are not complete, the journey is on"

Never have he thought, these words that were printed on a paper. Would define his life one day. This is shivay and his journey from incompleteness to completeness.

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He taps on the steering wheels as the car moved smoothly on hills. Dehradun is always the place that brought peace and serene to him. He being the talk of the town hardly got any time for himself. So to get the moment he steals himself from the crowd and came to dehradun.

It was not like the first time he had come here, he had experienced life's beautiful moments here and also the ugliest one's he never wanted to talk about.

The narrow alley made him lose his mind in his fond memories and he lost control over steering wheel. The sudden appearance of the truck right before him made the situation clumsy. He tried to control the car but it was too late as the car had hit the nearest tree off the road.

"Damn" he cursed. He got out of his car to examine the damage.

"Shit" he kicks the tyre spotting it puncture.

Shivay looks around to find anyone for help. But the fast moving car were futile to expect any aid. Cursing N- number of times he gets his phone out of his pocket. He taps impatiently as the phone unlocks. He brings his thumb to check on the contact list. Scrolling few times he finally sees the name he is looking for. Without wasting any time, he quickly hits the call button and gets the phone over ear.

" hello, Rudra. My car got broke down. Can you arrange somebody here to pick me up. I am near our old school."

His face brightens up when the school memories of rudra and him rewinds before his eyes.

Rudra assures to send him the help asap and they get indulge in their talking which involved everything right from their teachers to friends.

He was speaking over phone when he experiences a hard push on his elbow. The force was so tremendous that made the phone slip from his hand and breaks into pieces. It takes a second for him to absorb the situation. When he is back to sense the pieces of his favourite phone make him go mad. And with an intention to kill ,he looks up to see the culprit. The movement his eyes found the culprit it gets soften. The beautiful red dupatta flying in air looked like a barrier to see the face. The light sound of her bangles made when she twisted her wrist to wipe the drops below her eye. The curiosity of him to see her got the better of him and he absent mindedly started walking towards her. One step at a time, he could see the quivering of her lips. She was muttering something, as if talking to herself. The faint music of her words started to fall over his ears. He loved this whisper, he felt like listening to it more. Without thinking further he made a movement. The whoop of it made the girl alert and she turns her head around to see behind. The stone under her heel slips causing her trip and fall behind where the deep valley awaits to gulp her. She shuts her eyes thinking about the changes that happened in past days. She smiled thinking her misery is finally going to end. Holding her breathe she waits for her body to get collides on rock but few seconds past nothing happened. She opens her eyes to see a hand holding her . Her eyes roamed from the hand to the face of the person. A gasp escaped her mouth as she recognised the face of the man who saved her life "Shivay"...

And with that the deep ocean like eyes of hers broke the dam and tears flooded the land.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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woow...starting is awesome...
Its so beautifully written...
waiting fr next update...continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: arohiarsh16

woow...starting is awesome...
Its so beautifully written...
waiting fr next update...continue soon...

thankyou.😃 let just have few more readers to it. I will type the 1 chapter of it😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: afghangirl

very nice.continue soon please.

thanks. 😳 soon i may post a new chapter😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting...
Eagerly waiting for your next update...
Please pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's so beautiful
Waiting to know what happened in the past
You have defined Shivaay's emotions really well
Update the first chapter soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Interesting...

Eagerly waiting for your next update...
Please pm me

thankyou🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gotohelldil

It's so beautiful
Waiting to know what happened in the past
You have defined Shivaay's emotions really well
Update the first chapter soon

thankyou😳
Will unveil it slowly the past. I have already started the first chappy soon will post it😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: lolololol

Loved it. waiting eagerly

thanks you😳

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