I believe.. help thou my disbelief

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JNDSD~31.1.17~ I believe.. help thou my disbelief

Even the strongest ones of us come across moments in our lives when our firm convictions can face our skepticism. Those are pressing times and we can be most vulnerable. Those of us with the good sense who put effort into combating the mistrust by tackling it headlong are the ones amongst us who succeed in seeing the light of truth at the end of our tunnel of mistrust. To have a supportive network of people who invest unflinching trust in us are a boon to have from the gods, as they too help in alleviating our existing doubts. The episode is a peep into forged relationships that can complicate due to group dynamics. After all the family unit, both closer and wider constitutes of individuals with views and opinions. These views can have a bearing on how individuals react and what decisions they make. We see Atharva and Vividha both have families that have an impact on their demeanor.

The episode for me overall shows how certain techniques are used in story- telling to engage the viewer . there are references to objects like medals that raise a person's stature higher than others. There is reference to objects that are personalized , like Vividha's purse, diary , letter. Atharva s laptop, his bike . All these props are used to bolster the plot. Vividha's diary carries the pictures of Ravish and her, is used to orchestrate further doubts about Vividha's exact relationship with Ravish in Atharva's . Atharva's out of fuel bike has its own significance..it creates delay in him and Vividha meeting to clear the questions rising in his mind. His laptop and her designs signify their reasons and motivations to bring out the best in others ,perhaps entrepreneurial skills? Ravish's medal for prowess is to indicate the respect and honor the peoples of a nation have for the soldier who guards the borders and freedom of the nation putting his life at stake. The letter that gets into Atharva's hands and how the words in first person tweaked by a evil hand changes the complete tone of the letter. A well thought out gesture, polite congratulatory words and , faith in another's understanding turns into a grim misunderstanding for the reader..

The Inclusion of events that aggravate an existing situation further rather than retrieval.. The episode also contains those moments in which things happen for a reason. Like Vividha's friend phones right at the time when her originally penned letter to Ravish is picked up by some invisible hand and replaced with the words I in singular , changed to us and we in plural. Then thought process is conveyed in hints. As seen in the opening scene where Suman half suggests Vividha coming to the award ceremony would delight Ravish. Sujata hints to Vividha to chivvy Atharva to attend. The episode further has moments when characters walk into situations at the wrong time and picking up only the tail end of the conversation .. like Atharva does when Sujata is all praises for Ravish who at this young age knows how to honor and respect relationships..thus seemingly as it is, getting the wrong end of the stick. Then there is to me, a symbolic situation to do with sewing and stitching ! and what do you know its uma who somehow stitches up her daughter Vividha .. invariably she puts down her daughter in around about way. In this episode too she hides her own possible collusion with her husband Kailesh regards the photos ending up in Vividha's notebook, but point blank suggests that Vividha is still suffering from Post stress disorder syndrome ! Thus uma's clumsiness in making loose stitches refers to her ineptness in securing her daughters future , doing enough!

However there are some positive notes in the episode that continue to be the ongoing ,so far unhampered power of the show .. the civil and amicable relationship between Suman and Sujata , though I feel Sujata is the god-fearing one. How she genuinely lauds Ravish as one of her own. Vividha s strength in declaring to all Atharva is the one she loves. Vividha's stubborn spirit in clearing misgivings with Atharva ,her ability to sense through his silence with a view to problem solving ,rather than let problems linger especially so between her and him . The bond of love between the girl and next door. The presence of Sujata and Indumati pointers of the right way out , the two who thrash things out for both Vividha and Atharva. Unafraid to stand up and be counted for the right thing.. The presence of three strong leads, Vividha, Atharva , Ravish seen by me as the trinity of virtue! committed to.. fighting vice in all shape and form! hamlet53 1.2. 17

Please to note I have skipped for now the necessity of throwing the spanner in the works technique by CV's and the aspiration to egg on the target rating point by introducing the much weather beaten track of separating the lovers...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Most of your post is on point. I have to agree with you that the story telling in this show has largely been careful. There is few instances that I can point out where the sloppiness has gotten in the way but I feel that there is a writer for this show that actually has a particular graph in mind and when this writer gets the chance to further the story in the direction it needs to take, the scenes are that much more meaningfully weaved together. And then everything seems to have some meaning, including the stiching that Uma is doing to the diary that was misplaced, he bike's engine malfunctioning, the slight but definite journey of Vividha to being her old self...not just in her appearance but in the way she asks her mother to help her find her missing diary...the way she forcefully tells Uma that all doubts are to be dismissed and she is tired of repeating herself...the strong stance she takes in telling Sujata that she is absolutely sure she is not joining her...all these are the indicators for Vividha returning to her true self. The confused and lost soul is finding its way back home.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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UnRes 😆
Ham will be back.

Yaar why is this take so short ?? 😆 I'm so used to the lengthy ones.

Hello Ham 😃 I'm back...Wonderfully written yaar ⭐️ Trust is such an important factor in a relationship, if the trust on a person starts to shake, the foundation itself crumbles down. This episode does test Atharva's trust in Vividha and already a seed of doubt is planted in his mind thanks to the Mummy.

And what surprises me is that VIvi's mother herself denies strange things happening and instead chooses an easy way to put the blame on the PSDS...When you do look at things carefully things are happening strangely n on its own without Viv's or anyone's knowledge. Glad that Vivi lets everyone know about her feelings.

I feel in this journey Vivi has to prove herself right over n over to Atharva n her family...Life is such when someone does put a blame on you, you do need to prove yourself, the lack of communication is already creating a barrier between the leads, on top of that KK the mummy man is leaving no chance to increase the rift between them.

You are right in saying, putting n maintaining the trust in a person during the difficult times is very difficult thing to do, if one does that, the people in their lives are in a way truly blessed. These episodes remind me of Ikrs days yaar 😆 there was so much of MU there na...Thoroughly enjoying reading your takes Ham...pardon me I can be late at times. Going to the next your next update...Till then take care. 😃


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Posted: 9 years ago
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ham my dearie, bestie.. Big hug for you 🤗
You remember I had quoted a friendship line for you on your stunnerz party that whether I see you or not, talk to you or not.. you will still remain my dear friend, worth keeping till the end??
I actually mean those..

It has been a long time since we met last but still Bhau baji ke dil mein hai.. samjhe nah??😆
That is still my first fav show and you are still my beloved partner in crime (partner in Laagi praises I mean.. oppss this is not my place to discuss all these😆 ok but tumko dekhi toh khud ko rok nahin paayi😛)
suddenly i came across your post in forum..
i did not know that you are writing updates for this show..
Great job hammie.. Happy to see you here..
unfortunately I started with many shows but could not stick to one for more than 3-4 months.. and now I am simply roaming around in the general sections of IF.. no show to watch and no forum to go and discuss about episodes and tracks😆😆


read your update.. kudos to your writing ability.. It has been been amazing since the first update on LTL.. And this one is no less.. beautifully written.
although i never watched a single episode of this show but still loved your write up..
So the leads are Atharva and Vividha.. right?

Seems like I need to watch a few episodes from now and then come here to read your takes..
Do you give updates daily??


Ok byee my dearie.. will come again😳
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Edited by Titli_KK3148 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hammie, hain????????
ye apke papaji k pant itnaaa chota kaise ho gya?😲😲😲
isme kitna scissor chalye apne?

I loved ur intro as usual and ur title.the content is very interesting , as u focused on The Story.

apke wajahse i finally started watching it.😊

My eyes were on the sewing scene, i knew d queen of symbolism will focus on it.so i too am trying to using my imagination. i dont know whether uma is helping her evil husband or not, but like every mother, she too wants the love of her daughter secured, which it at risk somehow, does a mother's heart know something bad is coming?She was making loose stitches, mistakes ?miscalculations?or bad omen?she fails to stitch her future.

Sujata-Suman bonding, getting sewed by the needle of forgiveness and righteousness, one day it can unite the two families of Ramakant? Atharva n Ravish becoming close as brothers? Another stitch to bring their hearts closer?is that going to happen?

Here comes our Mummy man 😆 kailash lurking around the darkness, he too is sewing, distrust in Atharva's mind against Vividha's love for him.Here no miscalculation, he succeeds to do what he wants.i m afraid, hope Atharva's faith doesnt end up like the loose stitches of Uma, very easily destructable .

Keep writing for us. U are a brilliant writer.we can see u r more into the story, and this is the best part of ur takes.
take care.


Edited by simpleAnna - 9 years ago
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I like how you pointed out how they're showing Vividha gradually coming back to her real self, she's getting enough stability to give it back to someone who might try to shake her again. That vulnerability is passing off & as they say 'time heals' - Atharv giving that space gave her that chance to clear out any ambiguity.

She's so ready to move on but the the works of evil eh! Atharv is trying to dismiss these clues but then they're coinciding with the gap which he missed so there's a sense of 'W*F happened whilst I wasn't myself'.

JNDSD has always had a story in mind and I'm glad they're following it up. I'm actually really glad that for once an Indian tv show bothered to look in to a girls psyche post a forced marriage and what not! Not romantic is it? So kudos to the writers for actually showing that.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@hammie
Meri dear ghazni.. I have commented on your last take too.. The 30th jan one..
Thought of telling you incase you dont open that post again..
You did not do any ghazni type harkat but still bata rahi hoon..😆 Check kar lena.. I think swat too had unress her comment there.. So you need to check both our comments😆
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Hammie whr r u gayab today.. see even the late lateef is here..😛 waaaooww only u can gve such a brilliant take of even the most bleak n frustrating epi ham.. great title as always..bt atharva's brain is successfully derailed by Mummy man..🤣 lol how can she come up with ths term is beyond me..bt it's too apt re..
I jst loved how u weave ur take around the silae kadhae of uma.. I'm suspicious of uma frm day 1.. 😛 remember. .??
How u use each n every prop so effortlessly in ur take jst like gems is the most amazing thing about the take ofcourse caz we kno now the separation track is knocking on the doors n situation seems bleak n grim frm now on.. the letter cv's used was last nail in the coffin..though I do think even in the baseline the letter was not vry pleasing to read... aapki vividha. .come on yaar...😆 I do think they can linger on with their reunion after 3 mnths of judaai yaar.. its hardly few days they come out of the previous ordeal..khair le6ts see wat's store in us ham.. I hope u remain positive n continue gving us ths food of thought jst like good old days..😉 love U..
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Originally posted by: -JC-


helooo mate! good to see you
Most of your post is on point. I have to agree with you that the story telling in this show has largely been careful. There is few instances that I can point out where the sloppiness has gotten in the way but I feel that there is a writer for this show that actually has a particular graph in mind and when this writer gets the chance to further the story in the direction it needs to take, the scenes are that much more meaningfully weaved together. And then everything seems to have some meaning, including the stiching that Uma is doing to the diary that was misplaced, he bike's engine malfunctioning, the slight but definite journey of Vividha to being her old self...not just in her appearance but in the way she asks her mother to help her find her missing diary...the way she forcefully tells Uma that all doubts are to be dismissed and she is tired of repeating herself...the strong stance she takes in telling Sujata that she is absolutely sure she is not joining her...all these are the indicators for Vividha returning to her true self. The confused and lost soul is finding its way back home. 👏
yes... so true.. but what I missed out is the frustration veiwers come across when situations seem contrived like vividha's friend phoning.. wonder if Uma had anything to do with it? she is not in my good books... vividha..,I like what I see assertion ! see I joined the forum recently.. didn't quite see what things were like before.. with her personality.. .. thanks for reading and giving an interesting comment ... love hammie

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Originally posted by: Titli_KK3148

ham my dearie, bestie.. Big hug for you 🤗 areee barbji roarrr!
about timeyou showed up.. hope examswent well.. gimmme a high five!

You remember I had quoted a friendship line for you on your stunnerz party that whether I see you or not, talk to you or not.. you will still remain my dear friend, worth keeping till the end??
I actually mean those..
nautanki 😆 humm, me knew, and gathered your delay wSINCES 24TH ould be due to a reason.
It has been a long time since we met last but still Bhau baji ke dil mein hai.. samjhe nah??😆
That is still my first fav show and you are still my beloved partner in crime (partner in Laagi praises I mean.. oppss this is not my place to discuss all these😆 ok but tumko dekhi toh khud ko rok nahin paayi😛) yes... barbji ,, same here.. just so delighted to see you
suddenly i came across your post in forum.. hain? you happened to be just wondering here? nice one... i was missing you barbs..
i did not know that you are writing updates for this show.. only since 24th january 2017..early days
Great job hammie.. Happy to see you here..
unfortunately I started with many shows but could not stick to one for more than 3-4 months.. and now I am simply roaming around in the general sections of IF.. no show to watch and no forum to go and discuss about episodes and tracks😆😆
watch this show then... will you.. cast is impressive ah ja barbji..

read your update.. kudos to your writing ability.. It has been been amazing since the first update on LTL.. And this one is no less.. beautifully written.
although i never watched a single episode of this show but still loved your write up..
So the leads are Atharva and Vividha.. right?
yes,,, and Ravish... all three doing a Igood job
Seems like I need to watch a few episodes from now and then come here to read your takes..
Do you give updates daily??
barbs i try... so far,, however cannot post in time so late,,but have to say this forunm has some great writers,,,
Ok byee my dearie.. will come again😳 yes barbs do come youill like being here,joya,Dolly, swathi, Nus are here too long with some supportive readers from JNDSD ... Lovely to see you and lettting you go for now to return..muchlove your hammie 😆
TC

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