Agar Tum Saath Ho- Shivika SS last pg 15

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i know someone already wrote a os regarding what if Anika had been shot instead, but I wanted to expand on it bit more in my own way.
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Anika opened her eyes slowly as her vision started to clear. Her breaths came slowly and then became faster as she recalled the events of Lohri.

She had been mad at Shivay because he had yet again threatened to take Sahil away. He had made her come down for festivities. They had done pheras around the fire only for Dadi, she had remained angry at him. He saved her from walking right into burning embers.

She had walked away from him yet again.

Then that fateful run towards her as he yelled her name.

" Anika!"

The bullet fired as he tried to push her out of harm's way, but damage had already been done, Shivay tried to cover her from harm, but instead the bullet swiped from his arm and hit her square in her chest.

She was in shock as she looked at Shivay's trembling figure and then realized the blood was not just oozing from his wound but her chest as well.

Then everything went black.

She tried to get up but the pain was so immense she fell back.

She felt the sinking feeling like she would die if she could not see him soon.

And then before she could fall into despair, he whispered in a quivering tone, " Anika tum theek ho? Yeh kya hoga? You are bleeding," he muttered.

She glared at him astonished he was fine and by her side.

"Aap theek hain?," she cried.

He caressed her face.

She noted his arm had a dressing on it.

"Kyun bachaya mujhe?," she cried.

" Kahan se bachaya tuhme? Meri chote itni badi nahin jaisi tumari hai," he hissed.

She paused to stare in his crystal blue eyes, she had never seen the depth of his earnest feelings before this moment.

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AN: Let me know if I should continue



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Posted: 8 years ago
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OMG!!! That was beautiful! Don't just stop there, add on to it girl!! 😉
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Neaki...or pooch pooch? 😆 Looking forward to the next part.
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thanks ladies will try to update soon
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That was soo good!
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Please continue writing, it's superb.
Could you pm me?
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Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Neaki...or pooch pooch? 😆 Looking forward to the next part.

I am grad student, had today free so decided to write a story after so long, I have written for other shows in the past such as RBO, Tashan E-Ishq and Banno Main Teri Dulhan, and there was that show with Karnvir Bohra and Sriti Jha, but I liked her with Harshad because I adored Raghav character lol.
Also wrote for Sadha Haq and Dekha ek Khwab, uff that Udayveer Singh, hope I can do this story justice, thanks for commenting


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Originally posted by: KashiTessa

Please continue writing, it's superb.
Could you pm me?


Sure well, I won't have a specfic update schedule, so if you want a pm just let me know
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here is part 2 because I left the need to write more today, please excuse spelling, and enjoy

Shivay and turned away from his mother's pleas to rest when he awakened post being sedated. He knew she had this done because she wanted him to stay away from Anika and marry Tia.

He had quickly made orders and started investigating where Anika was and who had tried to kill her three days ago.

Yes it took him hours to locate the hospital she was at, and then he paced waiting for her to awaken. Khanna had both followed yet disobeyed Pinky Oberoi.

He had not disclosed or tried to awaken his boss to tell him where Anika was. However, when Rudra threatened to beat him , he admitted the truth, lest he pee his pants during a confrontation with the youngest Oberoi brother. Now that would ruin any ounce of self-respect he had left.

The couple had barely reunited when Shivay Singh Oberoi got the call he had been waiting for.

"What is it Khanna? You better have an answer for me!," Shivay yelled as he left Anika's bedside to attend the call.

" It was Mrs. Kapoor. Rudra sir beat up the gunman, He admitted it was her plan before he blacked out," he stuttered.

Shivay's eyes turned from the soft blue hues he had when he was with his loved ones to those of a steely glare.

The Kapoors had planned this. They wanted Anika out of the way so badly that they would kill her so Tia could claim him as the father of her child. He had been willing to leave Anika behind to save Om and serve his duty and prevent Tia's attempts at suicide, but now he knew better.

He now realized Om was always his brother as he always knew deep in his heart. He had betrayed Anika and Sahil's trust for that lousy, false threat.

No more. Mr. SSO was back in action. One side Anika lay fighting for her life and the other end his family was crumbling. He would find out what the rest of the story was, and he would make sure Anika and his family would remain safe.

Svelenta had snuck into the hospital in the guise of a nurse. Romi met her there.

"Tuhme pata hai, isse barr koi galti nahin honi chaiye hai," Svelenta stated.

"Koi gaalti hogi Di. Isse baar usse Anika ka chapter close, phir Tia aur Shivay aram se apni zindagi bitai sakte hain. After Anika is gone, we can tackle and destroy the Oberois for good," Romi declared.

The girls froze hearing someone clap. They whirled around to see who was standing there.

" Hello girls. Oh wow Svelenta ji, aap chal sakti hain," Soumya declared.

The girls were thinking what to do to shut her up.

" You know Di, maybe Anika can wait, we will finish this one off first," Romi declared.

Then she froze.

" Woh kaise karegi tu dhyaan?," Rudra came into view.

Romi stared at him horrified.

" Now look you can't even put rape charges on me. There are two other women here. I can say you two tried to harm me and Soumya came to save me. I cannot hit girls you see. Lekin I would love to see you two learn a lesson. Toh kya hua, if hitting dhyaans is not in my book of allowances. Soumya hai na meri darling," Rudra said with glee.

Soumya came forward and slapped Svelenta.

" That is for Om!," she declared.

Then before she could recover, she twisted Romi's arm and turned her hand so she would inject herself.

" Choro mujhe," Romi yelled.

Khanna and a female security guard from the hospital arrived and the needle was taken away from Romi.

Svelenta and Romi were turned over to the place.

Shivay and Om arrived in style to witness the arrest. Soumya was given considerate nods from the older two brothers.

" Anika Di has taught me well," she whispered.

" Bhabhi bol," Rudra hissed.

"Mere liye woh meri Di hai pelhe ," she retorted.

Om indicated them to be quiet and enjoy the moment.

Once the two sisters were gone, Soumya asked, " Ab Tia aur uski Maa kya karna hai?"

"Pelhe Anika theek hojaye, phir woh unko theek karegi," Shivay said with a smile.

"Lekin Bhaiya tab thak, woh dono kuch aur..," Rudra trailed off.

" Woh dono kuch galti karengi abhi. They will be on edge as to what Svelenta and Romi will tell the police," Om countered.

"Om is hundred percent correct. Jab bhi woh galti karengi hum unko range haath puker lenge," Shivay said before running his hand over his hair in his signature manner.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Two down to go.
Waiting for Anika to get well so that she can deal with Tia.
Thanks for PM

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