#T2 ARIYA SS JID TERE PYAR KI part 33 on page 103 15/4/2017 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: madmadona

Awesome update

Lol arjun secretary ki band bajadi
I think arjun naraz hogayi on riya at the end
Cont soon


thanks dear
let see what happened
will continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Gaurilagade

awesome update..
lovely moment..
continue soon..
update soon


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glad u like moments
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

superb
loved it
thnx for pm
cont soon


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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Ariyabestessfan

awsm thanx for the p.m conti soonish


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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: cuteariya

first congratulation for new thread 🥳
finally riya shared her pain with arjun 🤗
arjun felt riya's pain & also had tears 😭
ariya became friends to each other & also got comfortable to each other 😃
wow ariya had to go undercover mission as couple 😉
awe arjun made me so happy he made video of that bloody secretary who was flirting with girl 👏
finally all the peoples know abt that bloody secretary & ask forgiveness from riya 😃
all thanks to arjun awe even riya knew abt it 😉
awe arjun lost in riya seeing her in saree 😉
riya couldn't help but blush 😳
finally ariya solve the case 👏
but now why arjun got angry? 😕
continue plz


thanks dear
yup ariya become friends
he he how can arjun bear unjustice with his shona
you have to wait to lnow answer
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: SJ001

Amazing update...thnx 4 pm


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Posted: 8 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: neelpari

amazing update
loved it
ariya coming close
nice moments
thanks for updating
update soon


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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
part 20



arjun jerk ri's and n ri get worried

ri - arjun kya hua ? tum aisa q behave kar rahe ho.dekho kitna khun nikal raha hai

ar - nikalne do

he is very much angry actually in pain..she first time see him so angry

ri - arjun haath do khun beh raha hai..

arjun hold her by shoulder n she look at him he is glaring her

ar - tumhe ye khun dikh raha hai..par socho tumhe knife point par dekh kar mujh par kya beeti hogi..jaan hi nikal gayi thi meri. kya jarurat thi sadi mai use pakadne ki..mai aa raha tha na

ri - meri duty hai arjun

ar - duty right..to karo duty or jaao uski fir interrogation karo. mere sath q khadi ho.

ri - arjun plz calm down dekho maine apne kaan bhi pakad liye..ab kya situps bhi lagau..

arjun look at her n she make cute face

ri - bologe to laga lungi situps bhi..

arjun hug her suddenly ..she smile n hug him back but she feel something wet on her shoulder

ri - arjun r u crying

ar - nahi mai nahi ro raha..

he hide his face in her ..ri part him n cups his face

ri - ohh maa re arjun tum ro rahe ho..

ar - to kya rone ka copyright sirf tum ladkiyon k paas hai..hume koi feelings nahi hoti kya..

ri - aww my arjun ..i am ok..

ar - bolo fir kabhi aisa nahi karogi..riya plz tum nahi janti mai kitna dar gaya tha..laga meri jindgi mujhse dur ja rahi hai.

ri - arjun

ar - riya mai

ri - arjun khun nikal raha hai.plz chalo

she hold his hand to block blood..n take him till room.she bandage him n get up n he hold her hand

ar - kab tak avoid karogi riya..kab tak rokogi mujhe bolne se

ri - plz arjun ..kuch mat bolo

ar - q bhag rahi ho riya. q bhag rahi ho mujhse khudse

ri - meri life already complicated hai

ar - i promise you mai sab suljha dunga..mujhpar bharosa to kar ke dekho

ri - tum par bharosa hai arjun par apni kismat ka mai kya karu ..ye humesha mujhe hara deti hai.

ar - mai tumhe kabhi haarne nahi dunga riya..

ri - arjun fir jee kar marna nahi chahti mai.

ar - jindgi or maut humare haath mai hoti hi kahan hai riya.bas mai itna janta hu ki jitni bhi jindgi hai , usme har pal mai tumhara sath chahta hu..tumhare liye har pal khubsurat banana chahta hu..jindgi bhar ridz ka choti bahan ki tarah khayal rakhna chahta hu . bolo na riya kya mujhe itna sa hak dogi ki mai tumhe apna bol saku..tumhare sare gam lekar tumhe apni sari khushiyan de saku.

ri - arjun

ar -.koi jaldi nahi hai riya jab tumhara man bole tab jawab dena..but i promise you humara dosti ka rishta kabhi nahi badlega...case solve ho gaya hai maine apne liye dusra room le liya hai..hum kal niklenge tum rest karo.

he take his bag n shift to another room which is next to her room..ri lay on bed thinking ..she is thinking about her, arjun, ridz their relationship ..n don't know when sleep take over her.
Edited by sur1911 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
next day

ri sleep is broken by knock on her door..she open door n look at arjun.

ar - good morning shona

ri - hesitantly - good morning

ar - kya hua aise q react kar rahi ho jaise bhut dekh liya ho..

ri - arjun

ar - ok baba flight evening ki mili hai . to mai soch raha tha q na hum thoda ghum le.,tum aaogi mere sath..

ri - hmm.thodi der ruko mai bath le kar aati hu..

he nod.n left

ri enter bathroom n look at herself in mirror ..she touch the mangalsutra she wore ..n take it off..she on shower n take bath..after bath she take mangalsutra n crease it..n put it in her purse..

she get ready in grey n pink anarkali..looking so sweet with open hair..

she come out n find arjun waiting for her..she is shocked to look at him ..he wore grey t-shirt..both match..

ar - chalo pahle breakfast karte hai

ri - no pehle hum dr k pas jayenge or tumhare wound ko properly dress karwayenge

ar - are iski koi jarurat nahi hai

ri glare him

ri - how is boss here

ar - tum

n make puppy face..she take him to dr n dr dressed his wound n then they have breakfast n go for visiting sites..

they are visiting waterfall..

there are many tourists..among them there are some college students ..they are playing n doing fun .one girl collide with riya .which cause her disbalance n she is abt to fall but arjun catch her in mid..both have an eyelock..but they come out

one girl - wow how cute couple..

the girl who collide with ri

gi - sorry di.

ri - its ok..

gi - di u n jiju make really a great couple..

ariya look at each other,,

girl 3- can i have a pic of yours...


they didn't give ariya chance n click their pic..

gi - jiju on your Bluetooth ill send you ..dekhiye kitne pyare pics hai..


arjun on Bluetooth n they send him..n they leave

ri - ye log kya kya bol gayi..

ar - riya ye dekho..

he show her face in his mobile ..ri looked shocked . her partition is still have sindur that's y they think them couple..

ar - laao mai mita deta hu warna or logon ko galat fahmi ho jayegi..

he take out his hanky n start cleaning sindur..she feel him so close n her heart beat rise.. but she control herself ..but when he leave her she feel empty..

arjun make atmosphere normal n they explore place n return mumbai..

ri's room

she has mangalsutra in her hand..

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Posted: 8 years ago
#50

ri mv kya karu mai kuch samjh nahi aa raha..maine kuch sal pehle khud se wada kiya tha ki koi rishta nahi hoga meri life mai ridz k siwa..par wo dost bankar meri life ka hissa ban gaya..use khona nahi chahti mai.. par darti hu agar use apna liya to wo bhi mujhe chod jayega..mai kaise bardash karungi sab..

arj 's room

he is watching their pic on his phone n smiling to himself

arj mv arjun n riya how perfect together ..or ab hum alag nahi honge..i promise you shona tum apna har dar har vada tod kar mere pas aaogi..mai tumhari life ko khushiyon se bharna chahta hu..or mai wo karunga ..ha ye jid hai ,jid tere pyar ki..
next day etf

arjun reach office n enjoying with all..ri still didn't come

ar - are ye shona nahi ayi..

sh - kya bat hai arjun , shona k bina man nahi lagta.

sak - arjun koi or nahi mila us hitlar k alawa..

ai - guys plz aisa mat bolo she is nice girl

ar -yes aisha mam is right..she is so sweet

all - hoo..

ar - kya tum log bhi chodo..accha batao kya kiya do din ..


n they talk..ri come n start doing her work..

arjun come to their cabin n find her upset..

ar - riya chalo

ri - kahan

ar - sawal mat pucho bas chalo

ri - plz arjun maujhe kahi nahi jana

ar - sabke samne utha kar le jaun kya..tum janti ho mai kar sakta hu..chalo

ri sigh n go behind him..they sit on his bike n he start driving ..both are silent . no one is saying anything . he bring her to deserted area of beach..

ri - hum yaha q aaye hai..

he don't say anything just hold her hand n take her till water..he start going in water holding her hand..now water come till their knee..

ar - apni ankhe band karo..

ri look at him..n he assure her

ar - shona.. jindgi or maut humare haath mai nahi hoti..par jindgi ke rehte use jeena humare haath mai hota hai. tum is tarah khud ko takleef deti rahogi to socho tumhare papa ko kaisa lagega..kya unki atma sukun se reh payegi..hum kisi ka jana to nahi rok sakte par unhe acchi yad banakar apne sath rakh sakte hai..is tarah wo markar bhi humari jindgi ka hissa hote hai .. aaj apne man ke har bojh ko in lehron k hawale kar do .or apni jindgi ko ajad kar do .believe me tumhare ma papa ridz bhi yahi chahte hai..

arjun close her eyes by his hand

ar - now think abt the beautiful moments you live with ur family ,.

ri think abt her childhood ,har father's love n care,her mothers love..ridz childhood ..a small smile appear on her face..

ab us lamhe ko yad karo jab tumne apne parents ko khoya tha,

she remember her father is between firing ..she open her eyes ..but arjun again close them..she remember her father's dead body.her mother's condition then her death..tears are constantly brimming down from her closed eyes.,

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