Rishbala SS 'Dew of love 'part 13 in page 72

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sapana

@sapnaf52

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Posted: 8 years ago

HELLO GUYS "

This is my first attempt to write story. .I am so nervous and scared..

This part I want to dedicate my bestie "Aaniya /Evil_Angel "

Because of her support and help. ..

I just start writing. ..

Love you and thank you. ...Aani. ... ❤️

This part is similar to Nepali drama "15 gaate "so thank for them...&..

If this story match with other story. .please forgive me. .I didn't know "

PART 1..

"Rk come to my place after your office is over "saying this dips disconnected the call. Rk kept his Mobile in pocket and concentrate to his work. Rk is a office employee. .he is middle class guy. His father mohan Kundra also office employee. .and mother radha Kundra is school teacher. .Rk and depali are in relationships from 1 yr. They meet in college. .Dips belongs to rich family but she loves Rk. Rk is very popular in college because of his talent and look. ..Rk press the door bell. .and dips open the door. .

"Oh Rk I missed you "saying this dips hugs rk. .."I too missed you dips "rk also hugs dips back. .."Let go to my room rk "dips start walking towards her room "but dips your parents and your brother. ...where are they, if they see me here...they know about our relationship dips " rk said and stopped. " they went to our cousin marriage, they won't come today and all our servants went to watch movie. ..I give them holiday. ...they also will return back in evening "said dips. .

"Ding Dong " door bell ring. .." dips who came at this time "rk looks at dips ..."1 min rk let me check, who came at this time "..dips open the door "Mom Dad you people at this time "dips exclaimed shocked and looks between rk and her parents. ."but you guys said you are coming tomorrow ".." yes dipali ,but it that Ria elope with her middle class boyfriend before marriage and marriage didn't happen "Tara dipali mom said "..

I didn't like middle class. .."but kuku stopped in mid sentence seeing rk there. ."who are you? "Kuku, dipali dad said and looks at dipali. .."dipali who is this guy " tara ask dipali "Mom he is cable operator, He come to check cable connection here "said dipali. ..."ohh " kuku said and said to rk "did you checked the problem? ".Rk nodded his head and said "yes sir and I have also corrected it...now I think I should leave "saying these rk leave from dips home..."Dipali where is all servants "tara ask .."oh mom I sent all to watch movie. .you guys are not here only me na ,so not much work here. ..so just give them holiday. ..

Ding Dong "door bell ring "...who comes this time."tara said. ."mom you guys go and rest in room I check it may be servants come back. .Dips open the door. ."Namaste mam, I came from cable office to check cable connection, you call in morning na. ...dipali parents stop there track and looks at dipali and the cable boy. ...

"Dipali..come to my room after the cable boy leave ok. ..dips nodded her head ..the boy check the connection and after correcting it he left. .

Knock knock

"Dad can I come ...a very nervous dipali said. ..dipali who is the guy kuku ask and looks at dipali. ..

"Dad he is my friend "..

Only friend "kuku again asked. "Wow when nobody is home only you two are here and still he is your friend, only friend. .kuku shouted "dad I love him dipali said and look down at her foot. ...hmm "seeing him we must know he is from middle class family, isn't he? Tara ask dipali. ..ya. .yes. .yes. .mom dipali said. ..

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sapana

@sapnaf52

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Posted: 8 years ago

"Dipali you know na, I don't like middle class people, phir vi tum ne. .."kuku just said in disbelief. ..and sat on his bed ...dipali just start crying. .."from how long this going on. .."tara ask. ...from 1 yr. ..dipali said and look her parents. .."Wow, if we didn't see this in today, you too would have elope just like ria na, aren't you "kuku angrily said ...

Where they live "kuku again asked. .."In chawl dad. .dipali said. ..

"Wow great, the great business man kuku Bhatia daughter loves a chawl boy "how interesting na. .dipali "kuku start clapping. .

"Dad but I love. .."stop dipali it just attractions dear. ..

He is handsome, so you just get attract, but you have your whole life ahead dear "just imagine how you live in chawl, no ac, all dust and even you didn't know how to boil water. .how can you adjust. ..his home is more small than our servants quarter dear. ..you can't live there daughter and please don't give me filmy dialogue, it's real life my baby just think "kuku caress dipali "hair. Dipali think "she once went in chawl with rk in his home, it's really small and the chawl is little dirty too. There is no ac, people use to stand in line for water "seeing her changing expression kuku said, Dips it's just attractions dear. ..and also his plan to become rich by marrying you. ...

You are going to marry my business partner son sikky. He have 4 company and many mansion, even he have 2 private jet .he would keep you like a queen. .Dips nodded her head and kuku hugs her and said my loverly princess. .we are going to fixed your marriage soon. .don't talk with that boy "...

...end. .

..thank you. ..

All tomatoes, onions are welcome. ..

Please give like and comment. ..

-sapna -

Part 2. https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/madhubala-ek-ishq-ek-junoon/4795026/rishbala-ss-dew-of-love-part-13-in-page-72?pn=8
Part 3[DIV]In page 15..

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/140268912

Part 4..

In page 21

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4795026&TPN=21

Part 5 on page 27

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4795026&PID=140708339&#p140708339

Part 6 on page 33

Part 7 on page 39

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/141235669

Part 8 on page 46

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/141454055

Part 9 on page 51

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/141734703

Part 10 on page 59

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/142005518

Part 11 in page 63
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/madhubala-ek-ishq-ek-junoon/4795026/rishbala-ss-dew-of-love-part-13-in-page-72

Part 12 in page 68

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/146513433

Part 13 in page 72

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/146754731

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dharsii

@dharsii

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Posted: 8 years ago

Res..
Unres.

Wow sapna.Nice start..
U are writing very well.
Don't scare ..u have that talent..
so keep writing..
Dips and RK are in love.
But she is rich.He is middle classboy.
He escaped from her parents.
I thought "Her parents don't accept her love".
It seems they did.Tara is too bad..
She is going to marry Shikky.
Don't Feel RK .U have a girl better than dips.
Waiting for her intro..
Only appreciation for u ...
Update soon.
Thanks for pm..

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maria

@Maria-capri

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Posted: 8 years ago

Awesome part 😳

love rkpali friendship😆😉

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Aiswarya

@aishu007

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Posted: 8 years ago

Superb...superb..superb..

Your first attempt...best attempt..

You proved you are blessed with writing skill..

No tomatoes or onions only 👏👏👏

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Mona (Rashmi)

@Mona_90

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Posted: 8 years ago

Awesome part..
Waiting for next part..
Thanks for pm..

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pillowtalk

@pillowtalk

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Posted: 8 years ago

awesome loved it really yaar

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dharsii

@dharsii

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Posted: 8 years ago

Unres on page 1.

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harini

@harini06

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Posted: 8 years ago

Congrats for your first story,
Good Start,
Rk and dipali are in relationship for almost 1 year,
She belongs to rich family where as he is from middle-class,
her family got to know about her love interest they didn't accepted their love,
she easily got convinced with her dad and accepted to marry Sikky
continue soon,
thanks for the pm