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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Cas!! why are you sad
Give us smile and make us glad
We don't know what you're going thru
Let us know we'll come along too
I know sometimes we feel left out
Like world's conspiring without a doubt
But nothing's something you can't overcome
Just keep fighting and never succumb
Life will have it's ups and downs
There will be thorns along with crowns
There will be tough, times again
But don't leave your friends in pain
Instead be close so they comfort you
See life will come back to comport you
Just take a break if that's what you want
But come back before your absence haunt
With perseverance I bet you'll be fine
Your life will again be full of Sunshine...


Hi Cas, really hope you liked it and if you even feel a little better, it's worth it. Everyone here love your writing and most importantly love you as a person. You are such a talented writer, many get inspired from. I truly get inspired with every good story and writer here, and you too. So don't hurry in taking any decision. No one knows what you're going thru, and I'm not saying don't leave, just take a break and come back whenever you feel like it. Kabhi Alvida Naa Kehnaa...

Also you didn't review my TS Qubool Hai, I want our one of the best writer to review it and let me know where I went wrong. I think you will feel better after reading it.(I'll try anything to make you read 😆).

From,
All the Friends in the Forum and me.
Lubna.

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KitkitMkb thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is so sweet Lubna, you are a sweetheart :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

This is so sweet Lubna, you are a sweetheart :)

Thank you so much.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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God ...I am feeling so overwhelmed after reading your poem Lubna...actually have printed it out...though you have dedicated it to Cas baby...it holds true for all of us...to the last letter.
I can only imagine how much Cas will love this sweet effort of yours.

You are an absolute gem...and you know that!!,
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: reshmanair356

God ...I am feeling so overwhelmed after reading your poem Lubna...actually have printed it out...though you have dedicated it to Cas baby...it holds true for all of us...to the last letter.

I can only imagine how much Cas will love this sweet effort of yours.

You are an absolute gem...and you know that!!,

Thanks Reshma. Can do this much for friends. So so glad you liked it. Can't wait when Cas reads it. Fingers crossed.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lub!!🤗

Like i always say and mind it never get bore repeating it..😆
You Indeed are a Magnificent Writer!!!...Hats off..A Standing ovation...salute sab kuch ap kay leay👏⭐️👍🏼
You put so much heart and hardwork in ur poetry which reflects in ur poems and so is how ur poem gather a place in my heart..infact everyones heart...u r so loyal towards ur passion...thts comendble!⭐️

TBH it reallt touched my heart...and if it won my heart thn surely Casi wud have been more then elated reading this!
When a person is pampared or showered with lots of love and care it just swells the heart with sheer bliss and pleasure and the same thing we wanted for her and you lead the path for it so a big big Thank you for tht🤗

So true...shez such a comendble writer who never fails to surprise and elate us with her Fantabulous posts..and we dont want to lose such a great writer..such a great friend...such a great person!...We want you back Casi...Plz be back soon😃...Love you🤗

Coming back to the poem...
Srsly her smile means alot to everyone here..and the ups and downs are part of life and are just a phase which eventually ends...Lub the way you motivated her and asked her to fight and never sccumb and guide her..every thing was just Outstanding!

I loved it to Core❤️
Stupendously Penned!⭐️

Love
Sunain❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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you are an absolute delight.. as a person.. so sweet yaar. and as a poet. jahapanah tohfa kabool karo !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh,that was a heartfelt/heart-touching poem!!!
Thank you for writing it on behalf of everyone in the forum...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg!! You never fail to amaze me lubna and this was amazing too❤️ loved it to the core 👏👏
Dolly😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OHHH MY GOODNESS...!!!!!
This is so good...!!!

So beautifully penned...!!!❤️

I wish i had one tenth of the talent you have...!!!

Agar yeh mere liye hota na.. mein kabhi nahi jaati ye forum chod ke.. for sure...

And i know... Cas is not going anywhere... She just cant go...

Humara pyaar usse jaane bhi nahi dene wala... 😳

She will be back with a bang soon...!!!

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