SS:~Mere Ajnabi~ chapter 3 at page 18

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Hello Every one!😃

Yaa i know you all must be surprised kay ye kahan say agae woh bhi with an update aur pheli wali ka kya hao so in order to know tht scroll down and read the imp note.Its not mandatory for everyone but whose names are mentioned below i would request them to surely read it.Please read tht note before reading this chap😳

M not a very good writer so if you dont like it or find a flaw feel free to criticise by either commenting or pm me.But do lemme know about ur veiws so tht i can make up my mind whether to continue it or not.Please dont hate me after reading it!

Happy Reading Sharmanians!!

Please ignore the typos!

~Mere Ajnabi~

~ Chapter 1


Suman's POV:


Marriage...a simple word of hardly eight letters yet a mixture of complications and compromises.Complications which turns one's life upside down.Complications which are the root cause of any destruction of one's married life.Its upon the wife to do whatever it takes to protect and save her married life.Its the wife who has to compromise in every step of their married life just so her husband doesn't get uncomfortable or pissed off.


Sigh...This is what I have been listening to since last week by almost every other person precisely my family.Its so annoying to hear such lectures cum essays again and again but I literally can't blame them it's just because they love me and are worried about my future.


There was a time when I wished for a love marriage for myself and had had fantasized about my dream Husband as every teenage girl would do.But I was a little more crazy as I wished for something different.I wished to have a husband with whom I can do bickering have banter,not the ugly ones but the cute ones.A person who can be my best friend first and then my Husband.The person I can know and he can know me from inside out.No space for secrets,no space for lies,no space for misunderstandings but for love care and respect in our married life.This was what I really dreamt of But...*dry laugh*...there's always an aching "But" just to remind you how life can fall upside down same happened with me...But fate decided the opposite of what I actually dreamt of and truly and heartily desired to have.


I was a girl known for her stubbornness sturdiness cleverness and yaa a strong attitude and authority I had on every other person specially of my age.I use to get and do what I wanted or the way I wanted something to be.But my fate failed me to organize my own life,failed me to take the very decision I always wanted to make myself.Nothing profound but a mere decision of marrying a person I fell like to marry.A person whom I really consider to be my life partner but I guess my Karma has back fired...courtesy of my very not so wanted past.


Today I'm standing in room heavenly decorated with lots of arresting blood red roses and orchids.A room being cherished by waves of sweet fragrant aroma.Dimly lit by the twinkling little tea lights adoring every corner of the room making the room look more and more tempting.Just like the way any newly wedded bride would wish for on her first night.


Yaa!Today I got married and right now am standing right beside the window staring at the huge sky blanketed with numerous twinkling stars.I was so caught up by my thoughts that I failed to hear the click of the door being opened and shut behind me.My chain of thoughts came to an abrupt halt by his voice...Shravan Malhotra!...My Husband!


"ahem...you must be very tired...you can go and change into something comfortable..."I won't deny but there was something in his voice which made me shiver and so hoped that it got unnoticed by him.Feeling shy I turned to face him and that was the very first time we had an eye contact.Oh...that was a bad idea indeed...I couldn't hold myself from drowning into those light brown mesmerizing orbs of his and as I was examining them I got to see something in them may be something I could name as...Astonishment!


Our eye contact lasted for few seconds before he turned his gaze towards everything but me making me feel more awkward.Few minutes later he continued...


"This lenga and jewelry of yours looks heavy and disturbing...hainaa...just go and make yourself comfortable...you can change in the room if you like,I can leave..."


"No need...I'll change in the washroom...Thank You!"...this was the very first sentence I voiced since we got married to him and saying so I marched towards washroom before grabbing my belongings from the closet.


As soon as I stepped into the washroom I sighed in relief.I can't really accept the fact that I'm married now and standing in my new room's washroom.Everything changed..everything...again my life has taken a new unexpected turn not that I wasn't aware of my marriage but to whom I was married was a mystery yet to solve as I only met him twice or thrice hardly.Just know his name and his other basics as he's 27, renowned Lawyer in and across India,currently works in his Dad's firm and yeah most handsome London return.As my family kept on bugging me about his good looks and all and surprisingly they all were right...He is handsome.As soon as I said that very line blush creep up my cheeks making me doubtful about my own thoughts.


I kept on repeating that finally I got married and going to start a new life from now on,mently preparing myself and helping myself swallow the hard pill of bitter truth of being married to such a person whom I don't love and is doing a "Ehsaan" on me by accepting me.Oh God...!! Please help me...how will I give him the right over me live with him in this very same room share the same bed...I'm literally not ready for it,not now not any time soon or may be forever.I think I should clear everything today and don't give him any false hopes...haah..yes I can do it...I have to do it!


Fighting my inner turmoil I washed my face for one last time and headed towards my...our room by that time I had changed into a comfortable shalwar suit.Thanks to Preeti after a lot of tries I succeeded in coaxing her for this favour.I'm so glad to have her.Making up my mind and mustering up all the courage I had I walked into our room only to find him sitting at the edge of the bed with his elbows resting on his thighs and fingers crossed within one another.He seemed tensed I could clearly see that on his face.His eyebrows knitted together lips pressed in a thin line staring God knows where.Now I was way more nervous than before,afraid to hear what was going to come ahead.


As I moved slightly my anklet showed its not so wanted charm and made him aware of my presence.He lifted his head to look at me and straightened himself up.It was then I noticed he had changed into a pair of grey sweat pants and blue Tee.


He cleared his throat making me bit my tongue before shifting my gaze.I looked back at him when he asked in a very polite tone melting my heart...


"I wanna talk to you...it's something important...can you give us a minute..??"...I stared at him blanked and went ahead to sit beside him with a respectable distance.God knows what was going to come.By that time I was literally begging to God to save me as I don't want to end up being forced in a marriage.I send a silent prayer to God to give me all the courage and strength to persuade him in giving some time to each other before we commence our marriage.As soon as he started I got mum as if I have no tongue and tried to register what he said a few moments ago and stared at him in complete shock.

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Haah...Finally..so this it for today guys!I hope you like it!

Please do hit the like button if u liked it and do comment as ur reviews means a lot to me and those who didnt like it plz feel free to criticise.As criticisim is most most welcome!

Silent readers dont be silent ant bear a chuto say not so dangerous pain by commenting😳

Love you all!🤗

As i have mentioned before...

All the jotay,chapples,tammaters,anday...n so on are most welcome as m all prepared but han shoes size 8 honay chahiyay aur flat as I don't wear heels oftenly...tomatoes...achay baray baray aur juciey...aur anday try karna ka avoide karo coz un ki smell yukki hoti hai..!!

Now plz go n hit the two lovely buttons and make me happy...sad bhi karogay tu koi masla nhi just do comment!

Love you all!🤗


P.S.For Pms do lemme know and buddy my account




INDEX!


Chapter 1-above

Chapter 2-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-duje-ke-vaaste/4794099/ss-mere-ajnabi-chapter-3-at-page-18?pn=9

Chapter 3-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-duje-ke-vaaste/4794099/ss-mere-ajnabi-chapter-3-at-page-18?pn=18




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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello guys once again...directly coming to the point...
The actual seen is its been a long while a wrote tht TS and by now m completly deattached from my story and i truely tried to connect myself with it by miserably failed i still have a half written chapter 2 and believe me it sucks so there's no way m gonna post such a crap so you guys have to bear some more time please pardon me for being such a jerk!
M literally very sorry!

so this was my sorry part...now the actual reason m posting this SS is here..not the reason but the "Great Personalities"..i must say!

Its not tht i dont love the rest of this forum its just i cud have atleast 4 person at a time so dont get dishearted or offended as i love you all🤗

And plz one more thing if i haven't read ur update/chapter/story anything yet or commented then please dont think m upset from you or anything its just tht i havent got time to do so thts it!😳..and han please dont be mad at me too!😛


Anushka:
Anu My Shona!❤️
Agar ajj bhi mein koi update na post karti tu she wud have been eaten up me all alive just to satisfy her hunger for my update😆...literally she wud have killed me🤪
She has been bugging me for quite a long time😛
So Shona this ones for you!😳😉
Hope you like it!
Love you so much🤗



Arpita:
Aru My Pistu❤️
Whn u pm me and complained about me being upset from you whn in real i wasnt made my heary swell with anticipation as you love me soo much.and tht day i decided to deducate one of my pieces to you so her i'm...Dedicating tjis one to you too😳
And knw tht You are my lil bundle of sheer joy and there is no way m ever gonna be upset from you!...Got it!😃
Hope you like it though its not a % good as yours.
Love you so much🤗



Castile2:
Casi My Pumpkin❤️
Actually this had to be a surprise return gift for you...Remember the continution i asked for an OS of urs and promised a return gift n i was planning this SS as ur return gift but Thanks to Shona i had to post it earlier.
And as these days are being hard on you so a lil something from me just to cheer you up😳
Dedicating this one to you too😃
Hope You like it!
Love you soo much🤗



Evaviego:
Eva My darling❤️
Yes!M dedicating this to you too just trying to compensate the loss of the post i shud have given you and you had expected from me😳
N yaa this is the very surprise i was talking about😃
Thanks A lot for beliveing in me tht i can write something so some credit goes to you to as it was you who made me start this SS😳
Hope you like it!
Love you soo much🤗



I knw I knw everyone wud be like kitni kanjoos makhi choss hai..ek hi post mein kitnon ko nipta dea...but mein bhi kya karon meri updates aur meray andar ka writer mjhy chor kar khud akelay akelay vacation par chalay jatay hai aur mein dumb headed rah jati hon aur comments par hi chalti rhti hon..atleast comment tu karti hon na..ab issi ka koi bonus day kar baksh do🤪

Enough of by babbling...now go and read the update!
Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Bud!

You asked me to conquer my fears and I did exactly, although on an impulse but I did...all thanks to you Sunain.

Another thank you for dedicating something beautiful like this to me 😳

You started your journey with 'Humsafars' and now we are at 'Mere Ajnabi'...rings something?!

Coming to the update, this one was engaging. ShraMan having an arranged marriage is anyway exciting in its own... And you add the tadka of 'Ehsaan' and 'strangers' in the mix!!

And you left it all hanging on Shravan! What was he going to say? You have to post this soon...

Hint/spoiler:"... yaa they both dont know eachother thy have met twice or thrice..thts wht thy think #hint"

Hmmm this gets me thinking...

Update soon I'm waiting...
Love
Cas 😳
Edited by Castile2 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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RES
Aane do aane do forum pe aa jane do... 😃
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unress
Aww mah sweetie pie... Mera Jellybean...
Inni jaldi post kar ditta tussi... Meko Toh sacchi mey shock laga...
Loved it totally yaar... 👏
Ur writing style is the thing I love the most...
The way u portrayed sumo's feelings was tooo good... 👏
Just outstanding... 👏👏
Liked it the first para thoughts too...
Won't say my views about this chapter now coz bade he mixed feelings hai...
Maane Sumo kisi Aur se pyaar karti thi kya??
Ya phir uski zabardasti shaadi karaye gayi?
Well shravan looks decent as always... Guess unka Koi purana Rishta hai 'tumse hai pehle ka naata Koi' types... 😆
Well meri train full speed mey daud rahi hai aur I think Station se duur bhi jaa chuki hai... Well u have to decide it...
Do tell me.. 😃
Aww.. Kaise hai re tu... Khaa jaungi mai tujhe??? 😕
Mai Toh chicken bhi nahi khaati yaar 😆😆
shuudh shakahari hu...
Par Ha agar update nahi karti na Toh hote jaroor marti... 8 Size ke 😆😆
par abhi ke liye Roses and orchids only for u...
Luv Ya to the moon and back for this...
Par regular update chahiye ha...
Dedicated to me..!!!! ☺️ *cloud 9* first chappy dedicated to me by sum1
Luv u sho sho much...
Anu😳
Edited by anukulgr8 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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two spots reserved !! kya a raha hai? TS ki FF with prologue and chp 1??
Jaldi batao !!😃
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Originally posted by: deltadawn

two spots reserved !! kya a raha hai? TS ki FF with prologue and chp 1??

Jaldi batao !!😃

FF nahi TS hai... Ya phir OS with two parts... Right Jellybean?? 😎
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sweetu ka first writing piece😆
RES

Jaldi post karna
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This is the second part of her ts Woh humsafar tha.. . Yayyy my lalchi is back..
Edited by Itssanjh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Okay guys finally posted it!

Plz i have read ur comments n u all have so high expectations from me its just so overwhelming but knw tht m not a good writer so if i failed u guys in any senses..pardom me!

Love you all!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yeh lo... Abhi ts gaya... Ss aya...but koi nai... So they are already married... And of course... Suman is not ready! I am sure Shravan would tell him the same. Let's see aage kya hota hai. Lovely update. But I was eagerly waiting for your ts. Hope tu usko complete karegi... Will be waiting for this one too. Thanx for the pm.

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