SS:~Mere Ajnabi~ chapter 3 at page 18 - Page 4

Originally posted by: pritiyerne

hey sunain nice start...i guess shravan is gonna tell same thing as suman (guess only😉) ...lets see kya karnewale hai ab...plz update soom...this seems exciting😊

Originally posted by: Arpi1234

Lovely 👏

Originally posted by: adityasingh.246

Its lovely and so very interesting concept .. sumo k dimag ka to pta chal gya .. shravan k dimag me kya chal raha h pta lagana baki h .. but go ahead,nice one this is ..👍🏼

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

meri behna!!! main a gayi

Yaay🤗

sorry late ho gayi result lene jaana tha PTM par

koi nhi tum agae yahi buhat hai😉

behna tu medical student hai na itna zyada likh kaise leti hai😉 "mujhe bhi kuch tips de"

Not medical but Psycho Student😛

Tips kis cheez ki...ziyada baat karnay ki...wel woh tu mein paidaishi aisi hoon..batoni😛😆

sweetu ka sweet piece mujhe dedicated

Yes😃

this was too great to be written by an inexperienced writer👏

Thank you😳

keep up the good work aur ek baatpls cliff hangers zyada mat daliyo

dil ruk jaata hai😭

Will try...😆

well done!!

pistu?aru

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

Arpita:

Aru My Pistu❤️

Whn u pm me and complained about me being upset from you whn in real i wasnt made my heary swell with anticipation as you love me soo much.and tht day i decided to deducate one of my pieces to you so her i'm...Dedicating tjis one to you too😳

And knw tht You are my lil bundle of sheer joy and there is no way m ever gonna be upset from you!...Got it!😃

Hope you like it though its not a % good as yours.

Love you so much🤗

that's true i love you (sister love)

I knw tht😉

i may be a bundle of joy but i'm not little aa ke dekhle mujhe ghar pe

lamp post se kam nahi hu

😆😆...Tht was a good one!😆

haan yeh correct hai ki mere jitna accha nahin hai...balki mujhse bohot zyada accha hai

Now thts too much😳😳...u r way better thn me!

love you (infinity)^2

Awwh...i love you more🤗

Originally posted by: Safire

Absolutely fantastic!!!

It was so very poetic in all aspects!!!!!

So I guess Shravan does want to say the same thing which Sumo is going to tell...

And thanks for the PM...

Waiting eagerly for the next update...

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

sunaaaiiinnn🥳 jaani ka first ss love it tooo much

These was sooo awesome👏👏

Arrange marriage what a concept

And you said that you do not write well i'll kill you if you say that againbecause you are too good at it baby

And shraman ki shaadi ho bhi gayi yay!!

Shravu is such a sweetheart❤️

And last me shock 😕

Jaldi update karna pleaaasseee pleeeaaassee *pleads with puppy eyes*

Consider it a special special request

Dolly😊

Originally posted by: shaggy8

Hi sunain...
Amazing...beautifully penned ...arrange marriage and sumo is not happy about that... interesting...looking forward for further story...
Jaldi jaldi update karo 😃
P.s. plz pm me for next..I hv snd u buddy request 😊

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Nice starting dear...

Is this forced marriage for Sumo...even though after getting handsome,well educated husband she got she is not happy with this marriage...there should be some reason behind her uncomfortableness...but what Shravan has to say about something...

It's nice story something different arranged marriage of Shraman...it will be interesting to see how their relationship goes...

Vinu

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Amazing start.. Shraman are married but still don't know much about each other..

Looking forward to next chapter