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Prelude:

"Nahiii...please, please...mujhe chod do..." A quivering girl sat in the corner, with her hands folded in front of her, begging for forgiveness. "Please...jaane do...pleasee" she begged, sweat beads forming across her face as the masked figure inched closer to her. The figure ignored her pleas and stepped closer, the girl stepped back, moving herself until she was trapped in a corner, with nowhere to go.

The masked figure simply smiled, leaned in and whispered in her ear

"Game Over" he said.



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Character Sketch: KHUSHI's PERSPECTIVE

Khushi Kumari Gupta: Age: 24. Innovative and simple girl, who believes "good always overcomes the bad". Works as a local Fashion Market
ing Head for the Multi-Billionaire Company RP Creations

Aisha Rai Prakash: Age 24. "Chaddi-Buddy" Friends withKhushi Kumari Gupta Spoiled yet caring, this girl is a tigress with a simple life funda, "Be or be killed". Works side-by side with Kushi as a Marketing Consultant at her family-owned company, RP Creations.



Yuvraj Rai Prakash:Age 25. Older Brother to Aisha Rai Prakash. Sole Heir to his father's massive Business Industry. Typical Chocolate-boy--sensible, funny and kind. Follows the mantra, "Don't fix it, if it doesn't need fixing". Is currently the head Managing Director at his father's fashion company--RP Creations




OTHER CHARACTERS--
Garima Kumari Gupta--Khushi's Bua & Legal Guardian
Roy Rai Prakash--Business Tycoon of RP Creations, father to Yuvraj and Aisha Rai Prakash
Meenakshi Rai Prakash--The Kitty-Party Favorite, mother to Yuvraj and Aisha Rai Prakash


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Character Sketch: ARNAV'S PERSPECTIVE

Arnav Singh Raizada:
Age 27. Arrogant, egoistic, and stubborn are only some of the "tag-lines" Mr. Raizada has been caught with. A self-made man who owns the international multi-millionaire fashion industry, ASR Corporations. Motto, "I get what I want".

Aryaan Singh Raizada: Age 22. Younger brother of Arnav Singh Raizada. Known as the Hunky Bad-Boy of the town, this young man lives life carelessly through his brother's money. Flirting, Drinking, Partying? Call him. Life motto: F*** it.



Anjali Singh Raizada: Age 24. Younger sister of Arnav Singh Raizada. "The family's ladli", sweet, caring and innocent. Currently studying her masters in fashion, she aspires to follow in her elder brother's footsteps. Life Motto: "Bhai is the best"

Zara Khan: Age 26. Current "item" of Arnav Singh Raizada. Top Model at ASR Corporations. Life Motto, "Do whatever you can to get to the top".

Other Characters:
Durga Singh Raizada--Head of the Raizada Household, Daadi of Arnav, Aryaan and Anjali Singh Raizada.
Nandikishore Sharma- The Nerdy Nanhe Ji, as everyone calls him, is the cousin of Arnav, Ayaan, and Anjali. A fan of staying in the shadows and away from the spotlight, he prefers being a silent listener and a keen observer. Don't be fooled by his boyish looks, as his intelligent knowledge and quirky charms are sure to sweep you off your feet. He will be a on and off-going character in this FF.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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-----------INDEX------------
**Prelude & Character Sketch : Pg. 1

** Chapter 1: Jai Devi Maya: Pg. 2

** Chapter 2: RR : Pg. 2

** Chapter 3: Baaki Baatein Peene Baad : Pg. 2

** Chapter 4: Chocolate-Boy : Pg. 2

** Writer's Note : Pg. 3




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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi everybody! 😊

I hope you liked my quick sneak-peak of the new FF Story I am about to begin on this forum.


I'm a newbie at writing, let alone writing an FF, but I decided to give it a try!


Arnav and Khushi have always been two characters that I loved seeing on-screen and off-screen. From their nok-joks to Rabba Ve's, their characters, have redefined what it means to truly love.


While the magic they created on-screen with their characters is unmatchable, I decided to start my own spin on the story by releasing a concept that has been stirring in my mind for quite some time.


Ruhaniyat-- is a beautiful Urdu Word that means Soulfulness. Inspired by this word, I have brought together an FF that features the tale of two dark souls-- Arnav and Khushi, who are connected in ways unimaginable.

Like life, this story's characters have many layers, secrets, and unknown pasts that make their journey that much more memorable and unique.

As Alan Turing once said,

"Sometimes it's the people no one imagines anything of who do the things that no one can imagine."



I'm leaving you all with a small sneak-peak into the story, and I hope you enjoy it as much as I did in writing it. As always, think a lot, anticipate a lot, and wait for CHAPTER 1 TOMORROW!!



xoxo-- vvshenwai

😊😊😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Future Posts/Questions/Comments:

If you would like to by notified of my future posts, please like this forum post so that I can add you to the PM List.

As always, comments are heavily welcomed! I am a newbie, so all comments--good or bad, are appreciated 😊

The same goes with questions--if anybody has any questions, do not hesitate to ask.

Stay excited for Chapter 1!!

😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice pro
Waiting to read more
Plz add me to ur PM list
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 1: Jai Devi Maya

"Nahiii...please, please...mujhe chod do..." A quivering girl sat in the corner, with her hands folded in front of her, begging for forgiveness. "Please...jaane do...pleasee" she begged, sweat beads forming across her face as the masked figure inched closer to her. The figure ignored her pleas and stepped closer, the girl stepped back, moving herself until she was trapped in a corner, with nowhere to go.

The masked figure simply smiled, leaned in and whispered in her ear

"Game Over" he said.

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"Nahiii!!!"

With a sudden start, she woke up. Sweat beads ran down her forehead as her hazy eyes began to focus on the darkness. She grabbed the bed sheet with her one hand while her other was clutching over her beating heart, begging it to slow down.

Once her eyes became accustomed to her surroundings, she slowly calmed down repeating,

"It was a dream. Just a dream". Wiping the sweat off her brows, she tried to locate her phone. Turning it on, she noticed the time and let out a slight gasp"4:30 a.m it blared.

She silently groaned and flipping the sheets over, she got up and walked over to the window. Pulling the curtains aside, she unlatched and opened the window frame, letting the fresh air of the night be a cool welcome for her.

Leaning against the frame, she looked up at the dark sky, quietly taking in the billions of little lights that shined down upon her.

"Mama..." She whispered.

Tears flooded down her cheeks as she sent out a silent prayer of help.

"It's haunting me..."

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Turning and Twisting, he struggled with the sheets as the same memories repeated over and over in his head.

Blood. Darkness. Screams. Each minute becoming more and more intense as the memories flooded his dreams.

"Nahiii" His eyes shot open and he got up from his bed. Drenched in sweat and anguish, he opened his door and ran down the stairs.

Reaching the front, he pushed the wide mahogany doors open and ran.

He ran and ran until he could feel his throat closing up, begging for a gasp of air. Finally coming to a stop, his body collapsed as he fell on the grassy dirt-field road. He closed his eyes, as tears threatened to leak.

"No!" he shouted. "No... JUST STOP!" He hit the ground with anguish and pulled up his knees to his chest, biting his lip to stop the silent cry from escaping.

He looked up at the sky just then and closed his eyes.

"Mama..." He whispered.

"It's haunting me..."

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"You can't be serious" She picked up the folder she had in her hand and threw it across the floor in anger. "This is what you call quality work?! What is this bull crap? This is what you expect to be presented at RP Creations?

"But ma'am..." came the shaky voice.

"WHAT M'AAM? THIS IS ABSOLUTE SHIT! IS This why we hired you?!" her voice was raising by the minute, and her anger knew no bounds today.

"Aisha ma'am, I'm s-oo-rrr...rry..."

"SORRY MY FOOT...YOU WAIT" "

A gentle hand rested on her shoulder, stopping her from saying anymore.

Before she even turned around, Aisha knew who it was. She sighed as the anger she had built up was slowly dissipating as the hand gently nudged her to calm down.

"Khushi. Not today. This is unacceptable yaar. Look at this crap!" Aisha whined, turning around to face her friend.

Dressed in a white sundress, with straight black hair and delicate silver earrings dangling off her ears, the women who stood before her looked nothing less than an angel-- Khushi Kumari Gupta.

With an amused smile, and a glint of mischief in her eyes, she faced her headstrong friend and squeezed her shoulders in reassurance.

"Ash, calm down baba. You're scaring the intern!" she calmly replied

"Intern?! Who the hell hired this imbecile! He can't even put together a simple managing report!" She huffed, her once forgotten anger rising again to the surface.

Aisha pointed a finger at the intern, who by now was standing quivering at his spot, and spat out "I can't believe we let idiots like him work at our place! All the work is ruined, and we needed to have this report approved today, or we can't continue on with our project line!"

Khushi looked between the intern and her friend, and couldn't help but let out a small giggle from erupting. It was quite a sight to behold"an angry fuming Aisha, and an intern who looked like he had seen a ghost!

"Khush! You are laughing? Here I am frustrated as to how we are going to make up this loss, and you're finding this funny?" Aisha looked at her friend in disbelief. Her friend has totally gone mental she thought.

Once Khushi's laughter had died down, she smiled and said, "Ash, it's just a report, it's fixable. But your intern" nodding in his direction, "He looks like he'll need extensive therapy to get him back to-normal after your outbursts! Poor guy looks like he's seen the dead!"

Aisha suddenly looked up to see the intern frozen at its spot and the corners of her lips rose in a smirk. He does seem to be a little pale she thought.

"Oh come on Ash, you've punished the poor guy enough!" Khushi said, and picking up the file she handed it back to the guy and motioned for him to leave.

Upon getting the signal, the intern wasted no time and mumbled a quick sorry before he fled the scene and ran out the doors as fast as his feet could carry him, before mumbling a quick "Jai Devi Maya" on his way out.

At that moment, both the girls looked at each other and simultaneously said "Jai Devi Maya!!" and erupted in a fit of laughter.

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Interesting start.. would love to read more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 2: RR


"AMAN! WHERE THE f**k IS THE MERGERS REPORT? AND WHY THE HELL IS IT NOT ON MY DESK?!!!" a loud voice barked the order and a small plump man hurried to his aid.

"Jii...--woh..s-iir-r...I-I" Aman stuttered to reply.

"OH, Shut Up Aman, and just get me the file on my desk in 5 min!" he shouted, as Aman quickly nodded his head and made his way out the door.

"Aaj toh boss full RR Mode me hai..." Aman mumbled as he scurried to locate the file.

Arnav Singh Raizada, or as famously coined by his employees as RR"Raizada Rakshas, was in quite a foul mood today.

While Aman was his first victim of the day, he was surely not the last and all the employees knew that if they wanted to keep their jobs intact, they would have to keep quiet, and stay as far away as possible from the Rakshas' Den.

"Mr. Mathur, let me assure you that once AR commits to a deal, he makes sure he goes through with it. No one has ever raised a finger or ever doubted ASR Corporations capability, and if you believe that it is I who needs this deal, then you are highly mistaken. I was rather doing a favor on you, by accepting to take over your company from its sinking revenue. But I don't think it's worth my time. Good day." With that all said, Arnav violently threw his phone on the floor, muttering curse words under his breath.

Nobody questions AR he thought. Nobody.

Picking up his coat and keys, Arnav was about to leave his office when he heard his phone ring. Thinking it was Mathur calling him back to apologize, he initially thought of ignoring it. But he refrained from doing so, and sighing he bent down and picked up his phone.

Seeing the name on the screen, a small smile appeared on his face.

"BHAIII" came a shrill voice from the other line.

Instantly Arnav had to hold the phone away from his ear.

"Anji, how many times have I told you to lower your voice, my eardrums could have just blasted right now" he said annoyingly.

"Oh. Sorry Bhai!! I was just so excited to talk to you, that I totally forgot you were in the office" she said apologetically.

"It's fine. So tell me, how are your studies going?"

"Offooo bhai. How boring and typical you are? When you call your sis, you ask her things like, how she is, how's life! Not directly, how's studying going. Bilkul saddu hoon aap toh" she cribbed.

Arnav smiled. Anjali Singh Raizada will never change he thought.

"Anji, I know you are fine, because I call you and skype you every day, and as for your life. Well, tum mere puchne se pheli he saara kuch bata deti hoon. In fact, kuch zyaada he bool deti hoon. " he replied, slightly teasing her.

"Haww. Bhai are you trying to tell me that I talk too much. Okay fine bhai, phir me aapse kabhi baat nahi karongi"

"Angi aur kabhi baat nahi. Hoon he nahi sakta hai. Anyways, tell me when is your flight leaving, and when are you reaching here. Email me the itinerary asap" he quipped.

"Whatever bhai" she humphed. "I am coming in two days, and I'll email you everything soon"

"Ok. Sounds good, I'll be coming to the airport to pick you up" he said.

"Okie dokie bhai..." Suddenly there was loud music being played and laughter was being heard in the background.

"Angi, what's happening?"

"Okay...okay, bhai. I've got to go!"

"Angi-""

"Bye! Love you!" and with a quick kiss, Anjali ended the call.

"Pagaal" he muttered.

Edited by vvvshenwai - 8 years ago

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