Mehrya SS : One Last Chance Part 16 Updated 30/5

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: crtkelly
While I do hate that it seems that Mehek seems resigned that she will be marrying Ajay i applaud her for the manner that she is handling Shaurya. Between it and him realising her intent the man is quickly becoming unhinged...which he well deserves😊.
A lovely update. I hope to see another soon. And again thanks for the PM Shristi😊

Thank u Kelly...This is what we saw in the show too.In spite of knowing what type of man Ajay is, she accepted her fate of marrying that git who was full of flaws.

I want Shaurya to crave for Mehak's love and I hope i am able to write it well😳

And please dont thank for the PM yaar...I am glad that you r liking my story.

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-
hey ..
loved the part wer she totally ignores shaurya ...he deserves it 😈
i want mahek to be more strong enuf to ignore him and piss him off to the core 😆 ...
know tat he saw mahek with ajay ...im sure he wud be cooking sumthing in his mind for mahek 😳 ?? nai ???i wanna know wat it wud be ???

continue soon 😡 ...samjae app 😆 ???

Haha yes sure Thabs...i will update the next chapter very soon...Please do not threaten a poor soul like me

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: vimikrao
Mehek has to marry that bina poonch ka langoor...it's her fate Shaurya played with her emotions...but he can't see her with him...oh God this man he is confusing himself & ourselves also...she has accepted this Ajay is her fate...feeling very bad her she didn't get her parents love, whom she loved he also cheated her...

Let's see what our Khadoos will do now...

Vinu

Yes Vinu...i love it when you rant so much against this Shaurya...😆

Well i dont blame you either...he did do a mistake of hurting Mehak😡

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: Shamrouz
TYSM... Shri..
Loved the chapter...
But y is she getting hooked up with langoor again...
She deserves someone better...

Plz update the next chapter soon...🤗

Sham Sham ...my gal...always the first one to read my story😳...really applaud u for being so fast...N i do agree that Mehak deserves someone better...Well lets see if the "betterwaala" option for her is Ajay or Shaurya

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: chandrima02
Wonderful update. Please make her stronger. I am really waiting for ages to watch an FL with a vertebra. Your Mahek is very close to what I imagine an FL should be. Thanks so much for this. Please update the next chapter ASAP.

Thank u so much Chandrima...I too want an FL who is strong and not the meek ones which they show in the Indian soaps these days who always cry at their fate. I want the girl to always hold her head high with pride. I hope i do justice to this Mehak😳

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Niha1999
Awesome update dear...
Mehak ignoring shaurya was the best...😛
Mehak accepted her fate😭

Update soon waiting for ur update

Thanks alot Niha😳

By the way, i like ur username...very cute

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: pinky.padda
amazing update
absolutely brilliant
continue soon
superb

Thanks a lot dear😳

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Niha1999

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Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: shristi0706

Thanks alot Niha😳

By the way, i like ur username...very cute

Tysm 😳actually my real name is niharika...

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: melissaR
So silly of me that I read the teaser before the update even though it was already up 😆 but I have to say I'm beginning to really like these teasers 👍🏼 before it was torture waiting! But you updated really quickly. So kudos to you Shristi. I like jealous Shaurya 😉 He isn't the only one who can play games 😈

Update! Finally got the chance to read the latest...

😆 I find this funny. On one side there's Shaurya pestering her and the other side Ajay is irritating her. Poor girl. Man Ajay is really irritating me! I don't know how Mahek can put up with him if she really marries him. Lord be with her. Shristi Ajays dialogues are bang on to his real character. "baby this. baby that" Good job 👏

An angry Shaurya is left to eat Mahek's dust. He deserves what he's getting from her now. I really feel sorry Mahek. Shaurya played such a dirty trick on her...😭 I do hope fate has something kinder in store for her. She deserves to be treated like royalty! Very well written on her emotions throughout the update Shristi. Especially at the ending 👍🏼

Looking forward to the next one and do update as quickly as this one after the teaser 😆 😛

@melissaR : thank u so much for the wonderful comments!!!!! Yes i agree that Mehak needs to be treated with royalty because we all know what a kind soul she is...To be honest, i really liked the actor who portrayed Ajay's character. He played his part well of a typical male chauvinistic guy who thinsk that they are doing a big favour of marrying some girl.

Am working on the next chapter and will try to update soon!!!! Thank you once again😛