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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Rashmi234

awesum update
geet's parents in km ...geet's papa is very angry on her

cont soon


thanks dear😃
yeah geet papa very angry 😭

i will try update soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome... Interesting...
Thanks for update...

Thanks for pm..

Continue soon...

Maan n sanskar pretending to be enemies to catch hold of the blackmailers...

Family know about maaneet relationship to some extent...

Except their marriage...

Geet's parents in km ...

Now I guess the mystery of past will unfold .. who this anju is...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

Awesome... Interesting...

Thanks for update...

Thanks for pm..

Continue soon...

Maan n sanskar pretending to be enemies to catch hold of the blackmailers...

Family know about maaneet relationship to some extent...

Except their marriage...

Geet's parents in km ...

Now I guess the mystery of past will unfold .. who this anju is...



Thanku dear 😃
Yeh maan revealed his family truth not fully
Let see dear if anju mystery reveal or not on next part


😉
I will try update soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Well written update..



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Originally posted by: Linsie


Well written update..




thank u dear😃😳😳
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hi guys thanks for liking and comments ,if any grammatical and spelling mistakes in this part iam sry

Part 23


Geet hard voice from entrance

Everyone turned look at mansion entrance

Geet: Papa with smiled face

Choti, pinky,swara and maan also happy seeing ragurampapa and Janumaa

Dadi shocked seeing geet parents and others confused face

Maan holds geet hand tightly and geet tried remove her hand but maan not allowed geet remove from his grip.

Raguram come near geet and Janumaa come behind raguram with scared face

Raguram: Geet why u people stayed in khurana mansion with hard angry voice

Geet, choti and pinky scared that hearing papa angry voice

Maan: Uncle and maa I am happy to see once again .

Raguram: why u here with emotional and confused face

Maan:this is my mansion. Iam maan singh khurana

Raguram closed his eyes and hearing maan name

Janumaa: Ji, he is with emotional voice

Raguram interpret: Shut up janaki.why geet u stay in km with angry tone

Geet : ji.. stammering

Maan: Uncle we love each other.plz don't angry with geet.i will explain everything to u.why geet stay in mansion

Raguram: Is it true geet.iam asking u

Geet : Yes papa with slow voice

Thudd sound

Everyone shocked in their place.everyone speachless mainly geet..

Yes raguram slapped geet .poor geet shocked that her lovely father slapped her.even she not thinking in her dreams but today happened.

Maan : Uncle why u slap geet with hard voice

Choti and pinky shivering saw papa angry face

Raguram dragged geet : Lets go , u not stay in this mansion anymore.

Geet starring papa face and Janumaa tears flowing in her eyes

Raguram pulled geet hand but maan hold her hand tightly

Dadi: Maan leave her hand

Maan : Dadi ..

Dadi hold maan other hand: I said leave her hand with hard voice

Maan remove her hand and geet in shocking state

Raguram moving outside with geet and stop look at choti and pinky

Raguram: Choti and pinky , why u standing here and come with me with angry voice

Choti and pinky jerked one step back hearing his voice

Choti and pinky: Ji..papa with stammering voice

Raguram dragged geet outside of mansion, janumaa, choti and pinky behind to papa

Maan: Why u stopped me dadi with emotional voice

Dadi: Maan beta plz understand situation.

Maan: why dadi

Dadi: Maan beta , now he is very angry. tomorrow, i will talk with geet father..everyone go to our room , u too maan

Maan: Iam not understand anything.plz dadi tell me what is going on

Dadi: I will tell u maan but not now.first i will talk with geet parents

***


Maan called sanskar phone narrated everything

Sanskar:he really very angry .he scold me that I hided geet stay in mansion and Said booked flight ticket

Maan:how is Geet

Sanskar:she is not speak to anyone.she really horrible state.even iam also shocked that papa never raise voice infront of his children.first time I saw his angry face and hearing hard voice

Maan: Iam coming

Sanskar: Dont take any stupid decision.I will talk with papa

Maan: Give phone to geet.i need talk to her

Sanskar: Pls maan understood if papa seeing geet talk with u.it become more difficult and I will call u later and cut the call

Maan shout : Mishty

Otherside


Geet sitting in bench alone and starring sky

Janumaa sit next to Geet and carrying geet hairs.geet placed her head on maa lap

Geet tears flowing in her eyes and maa seeing her state , her eyes also moist

Geet: Maa why papa slapped me

Maa: Geet beta

Geet: I did anything wrong maa with crying face

Raguram hearing everything

Raguram closed his eyes with mind thought: My daughter never do any wrong thing but i don't want lose u.iam sry my princess, its good for u

***

Next morning

Dadi: Adi where is geet parent staying

Adi: Sanskar farm house

Dadi: What sanskar farm house and tell me everything adi with hard voice

Adi narrated everything except maaneet marriage

Dadi: u people remember, iam still alive.

Adi: Sry dadi

Dadi: Iam going to see geet parents

Adi: Iam also come with u

Dadi: No need with hard voice

Dadi went out to sanskar farmhouse

Adi informed maan that dadi went to sansakr farm house

Maan:ok adi, Iam also going to sanskar farm house

***

Raguram sitting in garden bench and dadi car enter farmhouse and seeing raguram in garden

Dadi reached raguram place

Dadi: Beta

Raguram look at dadi: why u come here, I don't want talk anything with u

Dadi: Beta try to understand , maan and geet love each other.geet not happy without maan

Raguram sad smiled: I don't know my daughter happy or not without maan but she will become alive that enough for me.i already lost one soul not anymore

Dadi : I understood why u said this word but that is accident

Raguram shout: My anju murdered that not accident.she died beacuse of khurana

Dadi shocked : anju murdered, no it is not true.

Raguram: It is true .my anju died that only iam not allow any khurana shadow fallen to my daughters

Dadi: Why u punishing maan.

Raguram: If maan know about anju.he also said what iam saying.tell me maaji, maan know everything about anju

Dadi: No he don't know anything

Maan:dadi

Dadi shocked seeing maan in farmhouse and also sacred if he heared anything

Maan not heared anything about both their conversation

Maan come infront of raguram: Uncle plz tell me why u angry with geet.u thinking iam not good person and iam not good life partner of geet

Raguram: No beta.i know ur good hearted person but

Maan: but What uncle.u thinking about status, but my geet is priceless.

Raguram: I know my princess is priceless insake only I don't want lose my daughter

Maan: Uncle iam not understand and plz tell me clearly

Raguram: maan beta u love geet or not

Maan: She is not only my love , she is my soul

Raguram: If u want her alive.plz stay away from her with both folded hand

Maan: uncle

Raguram: If u love her then say to geet , stay away from u and move on her life.

Maan: Why u did for us and what wrong we did it.

Raguram: maan u didn't wrong anything but u birth in khurana .

Maan: dadi. What uncle saying

Dadi: maan beta , stay away from geet and said to her that move on her life.

Maan: what happened with u. why I stay away with my mishty. I cannt live without her.

Dadi: I said this thing for her sake only . its is good for her. If u love her truly, .stay away from her.

Maan: dadi

Geet seeing maan in garden and running to his maan .

Geet hugs maan tightly : I know maan u come for me.

Dadi carrying geet hairs and geet come out of hug. Maan standing like statue

Dadi: geet beta plz forgot everything, move on ur life.

Geet confused: dadi, what I need to forgot .

Dadi: forgot maan and his love.

Geet: dadi,u think I will forgot my maan. He is my jaan dadi. I cannt imagine single minute without him.


Geet look at maan: maan why u silent. Ask to dadi why she said I forgot u

Maan closed his eyes: stay away from me ,geet

Geet grabbed his shirt collar: what u said iam not hear anything ,look my eyes and then say once again

Maan look at her moist almond eyes and geet eyes saying maan u said not truth right.

Maan cupped her cheeks: geet

Raguram look to maan face gestured say to geet and maan nods his head

Maan: geet ,stay away from me with moist eyes

Geet: maan u really saying or doing any drama. Don't do this type of prank. I cannot tolerate .it really killing me with tears flowing in her eyes

Maan: this is not drama geet. What uncle will saying u, u will do. Plz move on ur life and went out immediately


Geet shout: maan and running to her room with crying face

Dadi: raguram beta now ur happy. U breaked both pure heart. U think both will become happy. They will never and went behind maan

Raguram : everything did it for my child safety.

****

Maan room

Maan break everything and his room became horrible state.

Geet : maan why u did ur room mess with smiling face

Maan smiled went to geet but she vanished in air.

Maan seeing his white kurti and remember geet moments

Flashback start

Geet room

Geet in washroom and maan enter geet room and searching geet.

Geet opened bathroom door lightly and scanning anyone here

Maan: mishty


Geet: what r doing here

Maan: iam coming to see u

Geet: maan get out my room

Maan: why

Geet: I forgot bring my dress and my dress in bed so plz go out I need to change dress.

Maan smirked face: no problem mishty, I will give ur dress

Geet: ok give me .and only her hand show to maan

Maan remove his kurti and give to geet

Geet closed the door and seeing maan kurti

Geet : this is not my dress. Give my dress

Maan: if u wears my dress otherwise don't come out bathroom.iam not going anywhwere

Geet no choice and wears come out bathroom with shy face

Maan hug geet back and geet blushing


Geet turned look at maan and encircled her hand to his neck

Maan: mishty this is my dress so bring back to me and he tried to remove his kurti

Geet: no..maan


Door knocked sound and geet opened door and maan hold geet waist side

Servant: geet didi , dadi asking u

Geet: I will come , u can go know

Servant: didi why u wore mens kurti with confused face

Geet: oh...

Maan pinched geet waist and geet shout : haa

Servant: di what happened

Geet: mosquioto with angry face

Geet close the door and maan removes his grip and went away from her.

Geet: maan iam not leave u


Maan running and geet chasing behind maan

Flashback end

Maan throw out kurti

Geet: maan see I bring ur food with smiling face

Maan : geet

Once again Geet vanished in air and maan looking everywhere . everside he seeing geet .

Maan shout : mishty

****

Geet: why maan u did for me. First papa slapped me and now u went away from me.

Two man important in my life.one bring me to earth and other one my soul.both broke my heart. Why babaji, why u punished ur child. Plz bababji give me one solution to remove my pain.

Geeet room Outside

Farm house keeper: u placed this pesticides bottle to next room

Other servant: ji kaka

Geet : pesticides bottle

Geet went to next room and get pesticides bottle and come back to her room.


Geet look at maan photo : u want that I am stay away from u. so I move away from this world. Ur my world maan. Geet kiss maan photo : I love u maan. Bye maan

Geet drink pesticides and went to sleep in her bed with maan photo. She hugs maan photo tightly.

( guys. in emotional time dont take any decision. that decision really wrong one.)

****

Maan seeing one box in his foot step and bring little box in his hand

Maan: geet, what I did no...I am not go away from my geet.she is mine, .mishty I come back to u and placed box in his pant packet

Maan run out mansion and drives his car forcelly to sanskar farm house.

Dadi seeing maan went out and understand maan is going to farmhouse.

Dadi and adi behind maan

Maan enter sanskar farmhouse shout: mishty

Raguram: maan beta. I already told don't come back to geet.

Maan not care anything shout: geet..mishty.

Dadi and adi enter farmhouse and seeing maan state.

Dadi: maan beta lets go our mansion.

Maan: dadi iam not coming anywhere without my geet.

Raguram: she not come with u

Maan gragged raguram collar: why u not understand my pain. She is mine. She stay with me only with hard voice

Dadi: maan I understand u love her. its not means u have full right with her.

Maan shout: I have full right with her more than anyone.she is my wife. Everyone hearing she is my wife. We already married.

Everyone shocked and choti shout : jiju ,angel don't open the door.

Maan run to geet room and knock the door

Maan: mishty open the door.ur maan is here.

No response other side. Everyone scared

Maan broke the door and geet sleeping in bed. Maan shaking geet but she not wake up .

Choti: jiju she have blood in her mouth with shivering voice

Maan noticed she have blood in her lips and hugging his photo.

Maan scopped geet in his arm and patted her cheeks

Maan : mishty wake up. Don't play with me ,dadi see she not look me with scared face

Adi: maan pickup geet in ur arms. We need go to hospital.

Maan pickup geet in his arm and runout and others follow in crying face,

****

Hospital


Maan placed geet in stetcher but not leave her hand. Dadi remove maan hand.


Geet admitted in icu and maan tears eyes seeing his soul in icu.

Choti call sanskar: bhai with chocked crying voice

Sanskar: choti why u crying with worried face

Choti: bhai.geet di in hospital. She drank poison and narrates everything.plz bhai come to hospital.iam scared with chocked voice

Sanskar: iam coming with tensed face

*****

Everyone reached hospital know about geet in hospital

Swara, Vicky,pinky and sanskar one by one reached hospital.

Sanskar enter hospital and choti run to sanskar and hug him tightly.

Choti: bhai, my angel with crying face

Sanskar carrying her hair: nothing happened our geet. She is alright soon with moist eyes

Choti: I need my angel. if anything happened to her , iam not live bhai.

Sanskar: calm down where is maan

Choti show maan side and sanskar seeing maan state


Maan collapsed in sofa and tears flowing in his eyes.

Dadi touched maan shoulder and maan looking dadi face and raguram ,janaki next to her with moist eyes

Maan : if everyone happy right. My mishty in hospital. I already said everyone. She cannot live without me. Now everyone snatched my happiness away from me.

Dadi: maan beta


Maan hugs dadi and crying like baby

Maan: why she take this decision. She think I live without her with really broken voice

Swara and Vicky come to hospital


Swara hugs pinky and choti tears flowing in their eyes.

Sanskar tried console janaki maa and maan sitting like lifeless body.


PART END


part 23 only sad part , next part fully maaneet scenes.and i think i will give 25 th part special one. sry for sad part but i need this part and everyone want anju mystery will reveal soon. first i will reveal choti past and then reveal anju mystery. ok dearies.


precap:everyone angry with geet and if maan angry with geet or geet angry with maan . guessing guys😉

prev part - part 22

next part- part 24 (a)-125pg



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Edited by maaneetfavo - 8 years ago
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madamji pongal eppadi pochi and ithu enna face expression 😛
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Nyc update dear
Loved it!!
Geet's dad slapped her for her demeanor
Maan was furious and stated that they love each other
Geet's dad dragged geet along with him and asked pinky and Choti to follow him and dadima asked maan to leave geet's hand
Geet's dad wants geet's safety and he is scared to lose her too
Looks like Anju was dead in accident according to dadima but according to geet's dad she was murdered to death
Maan obliged to follow geet's dad's words for geet's safety and well-being
Geet was hurt with maan's demeanor that in emotional turmoil geet committed suicide
Maan was back to get his geet back and informed everyone that Maaneet are married
Everyone one shocked to see Geet in unconscious state
Maan emotionally broken down with geet's decision and state
Maan turned life less with turn of events !!
😊😛

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