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Hi guys thanks for likes and comments if any grammatical and spelling mistakes in this part iam sry

Part 22

Maan enter sanskar farmhouse with angry face and shout: Sanskar

sanskar: Maan

Maan grabbed sanskar shirt collar: Why u did it with angry face

Geet heared maan voice come out of kitchen and seeing maan hold sanskar shirt collar with angry face

Geet: Maan

Both stop ur fighting high pitch voice came from entrance of farmhouse

Geet : Adi jiju

( high pitch voice owner is Adi )

Maan: Adi u don't know what he did it

Adi: I know everything maan and remove ur hand

Sanskar: Maan what u did with my shirt , see my shirt spoiled

Maan: Stop ur drama,stupid

Adi: First u both stop ur drama, iam not tolerate anymore

Geet: What s going on with irritating face

Maan hug sanskar and sanskar also reciprocate his hug ( anu dear ur guessing is right 👏)

Adi: Why u both irritating my Bhabhiji

Maan: Mishty, he is my best friend but his name is stupid with teasing face

Sanskar: Khadoos khurana

Geet: Bhai

Sanskar: Ok baba,sry geetu ur hubby not khaddos but my friend is khaddos

Adi: Bhai with confused face

Maan: Adi , ur Bhabhi is stupid ka sister

Geet: Anyone tell me what going on,maan how do u know , sanskar bhai is my brother and u both r enemy right.

Maan and sanskar hi fi each other

Maan: Everything our drama mishty, Pari ( swara) said me that sanskar affairs with many girls and hotel incident ( swasan flashback part 20) and that time i guessed sanskar hide something from me

Flashback start

Maan enter sanskar room: Sanskar

Sanskar: What do u want MSK .ur sis said everything is truth

Maan hard slap to sanskar cheeks and sanskar not talk anything

Maan: Look my eyes then say ur womanizer and u cheat ur Shona and then I trust ur word with hard voice

Sanskar look at his eyes : Sry maan I hurt her so much but I have no choice.

Sanskar narrated unknown man call and blackmailed everything ( part 21)

Maan: So he did everything for Shona safety

Sanskar: That time I didnot thought about anything and I worried about my love (swara)

Maan: U think he will touch my Pari easily and she is my baby sister. She is my jaan. If anyone try to harm my pari , u think I will leave that person

Sanskar: I know maan but he not normal blackmailer.he want ur suffer maan sirf ur suffer that only he chooses swara and me .he is very dangerous.he can do anything .we need be careful.

Maan: First we will find out who want to play with me with angry face

Sanskar: Plz don't say anyone this matter even swara

Maan:yeah she hurt but she not trust ur drama fully.he want play with me right.now iam also play with him.now onwards ur my enemy with smirked tone

Sanskar:hmm first everyone trust our drama then only easy for us.

Flashback end

Geet: U thinking both are playing with stupid blackmailer but ur not.ur playing with Shona feeling.u know how much she broken down inside.u never understand women nature

Maan and sanskar: We did only her safety with guilty voice

Geet: U will find him or not

Maan: No

Geet glare to maan : Bhai why insult maan infront of swara

Maan: Mishty that is my idea then only Pari trust sanskar word.i know she respect me like iam her father so sanskar insulted me infront of her in sake only she trust our drama with slow voice

Geet anger raised: U both are proudly saying ur are businessman tycoon.till now u not found out that culprit with hard angry voice

Maan and sanskar both are silent.they know very well sherni character.if she got angry and she will not control her anger soon

Adi enjoyed both maan and sanskar state

Sanskar smirked: Geetu why u angry me and maan only.ur Adi jiju also included in our drama

Geet eyes shift to Adi and Adi gulped his saliva

Adi: He heee ( favourite laugh with sheepish face)

Geet smiled look at Adi face and three of them relieved seeing her smile

Maan: Time god u smiled mishty

Sanskar: Khaddoss ur never understand my geetu.she never angry with her lovely person

Geet: Bhai I already told dont call him khaddos

Maan side hug to geet : Hey stupid see my mishty my side only

Geet remove his hug : Dont call my sweetu bhai to stupid

Maan chuckled face: Mishty he is not sweet , he is devil yaar

Adi: Stop ur silly fight.how will u found out geet is sanskar sister

Maan: Mr sanskar maheswari think iam not found his truth.yesterday choti murmuring sleeping state to bhai.my detective already collected geet and her family details but he said she have no brother but choti scared face and shout bhai ,i understood something hide and I called him said that collect whole information about choti also.then I got information about three weeks before geet, pinky and sanskar went Chennai in sanskar flight.I confirmed sanskar is geet rakki brother.u forgot Adi in college days he told everytime talk about her sisters.each sentence he said my geetu and choti.

Even u , ranjith and me irritated because of his sister leela

Geet: What u said Mr maan Singh khurana

Sanskar: Geetu I will tell what he said about u in our college time

Khurana mansion

Pammi room

Pammi: Sam where is ur brother

Brij: Iam here bua

Pammi:I said that collect all information about geet

Brij: I already finished my work.and brij give geet biography file to pammi

Pammi read file carefully and after read that file pammi tensed face became to smiling face

Pammi: Geet ur gone .tomorrow this time ur not in my mansion

Sam: Bua u did it anything with happy eagerly face

Pammi: Iam not do anything to geet but he will do what ever we want with evilly laughing face

Sam: Who's u talk about bua

Pammi smirked face: Brij booked our flight tickets to Hawaii.we will celebrate our success in Hawaii .( guys I don't want these evily gang coming 2 or 3 part in sake only I packed their luggage to Hawaii)

Sam: But I want see that geet will throw out in our mansion

Pammi: No Sam, tomorrow we not stay in mansion then only noone doubt us

Sam: Ok bua but I will miss that wonderful chance with sad face

Brij: Bua I need to say one more detail

Pammi: Not know brij , I need call to important person with evilly face.

Sam: Hawaii it is really awesome place for party

Brij mind voice: Hawaii,party and girls with Lusty thought

Sanskar farm house

Geet angry face: Maan what u said , iam bhak bhak, crazy etc...( maan college flashback to next part ok guys)

Sanskar: Geetu,

Maan: Stupid shut up

Geet look to maan: Why u scold my bhai and why u said this word to me

Maan gulped his saliva: I don't know that time that girl ,its u

Sanskar: U know geetu, in whole college calling maan to gc with naughty face

Geet: GC

Maan nods his head negatively to sanskar: Stupid, u shut ur mouth otherwise

Geet: U shut ur mouth maan, bhai u tell me

Sanskar: In our college every girl ka dream boy is ur handsome husband.he is all rounder to study, sports, cultural , everything, he is the best.in cultural time he danced with one girl.it not just dance.after Dance everyone call him gc.gc means good couples

Geet angry face: What type of dance ,u danced with that girl after everyone calling u gc

Sanskar: Geetu I will show u cultural photos.

Sanskar show college photo album to geet

Geet eyes poped seeing maan dance photo with girl ,it really passionate move pictures

Geet: What is this maan

Maan: Mishty with slow voice

Sanskar: Geetu, after dance even love purposal also happened

Geet: Girl purposed maan right with irritating face

Sanskar nods his head negatively and maan face his horrible state

Sanskar: Ur hubby purposed that girl

geet: Kya, maan purposed girl with angry glare to maan and went inside

Maan: Sanskar I will kill u with angry face and run behind his mishty

Adi and sanskar hi fi each other

Geet : Why u come behind me and go marry that girl

Maan cupped her cheeks: Mishty , yeh I proposed her but it is bet ( prank) not real purposal , u r my first and last love in my life, till my eternity I need u , I need ur love.I can't live without u,

Geet: Maan with emotional voice

Maan come close with geet and Adi and sanskar give fake cough

Adi: Love birds we also here with teasing tone

Sanskar: Great msk, u maniofied my sister soon

Maan: u both come to correct time with grinned teeth

Geet: Maan how will u found out, iam here with bhai

Sanskar: ha ,Why u angry with me

Maan show brij sent photo to sanskar and said in ur stupid decision now geet also danger if that mystery man seeing both together , he will trouble geet

Sanskar: sry yaar , I worried about choti really forgot this matter. Brij , u come behind my geetu , iam not leave u with angry voice

Geet: Chimpanzee irritating me so much.i will handle him, bhai

...

Next day evening

Maan come to mansion early and call to geet

Geet: Maan u arrived

Maan: Mishty I miss u and come to our place

Geet: If anyone see maan

Maan: Plz mishty

Geet: Ok maan iam coming

Km garden - lovely and lonely place noone come that side

Geet come to garden and maan pulled geet and she fallen in his chest.

Both are settled down swing in same position

Maan: if Anyone seeing u come to our place

Geet : No maan

( both dont know already full masti gang even chandu and chammpaa also sitting behind bush and watching love birds romance with chips, cool drinks and other snacks)

Whole Gang nods their heads gestured no one seeing ur romance

Maan: my family is my big enemy, everyone snatched my mishty away from me . u not spend time with me.with puppy face

Geet: our famiy Maan but everyone teasing me with confused face

Maan: If anyone found out our matter

Geet: Hmm dadi

Maan: No dadi , she is innocent and know only pooja and temple but such a drama bazz character with chuckled face

Gang everyone looked to dadi face and dadi fuming

Dadi mindthought: Kya iam dramabazz character and I know only pooja , temple wait and watch ,msk how much iam Dramabazzz with smirked face

Geet: no dadi is my darling, then Vicky

Maan: He spending only time to flirting girl

Gang- Vicky embarrassing in front of everyone

Vicky mind voice: Iam not leave u bhai

Geet: No Vicky is little bit flirty type but he is good hearted person then swara

Maan: My Pari concentrate only her studies.she is book worm

Gang- swara mind voice: Iam book worm with angry face

Geet smiled :she is not then Adi jiju told to anyone

Maan smiled: Adi never said anyone because he know her well my angry

Gang- everyone angry glare to Adi.

Adi gulped his saliva and mind voice: maan, Why everytime u make me scapegoat

Geet: My jiju so sweet , its not a scare, its respect maan

Maan: Choti and pinky

Geet:choti such a prankster , I really worry about her future husband what she will do with him and pinky concentrate only her food

Gang: pinky eating her favourite chips and heared geet voice about her. Pinky mouth wided open , her chips fallen down.everyone giggled seeing pinky face. Pinky look to everyone with puppy face

Choti mind voice: angel u think iam not found my jiju, in hospital itself I confirmed he is ur husband . I am waiting for u, but till now u did not open ur mouth . U said iam prankster but ur my guruji. I am also play with u with naughty face

Maan: don't worry about my both saali , they are really sweet

Geet: then ur chandu bhai and chammpaa

Maan chuckled face: mishty don't said my chandu yaar but He only guts irriate to great MSk. Chandu , chammpaa & others are loosu / foolish gang

Gang: chandu rise his collar heared about guts irriate to maan ,next second his happiness vanished heared about foolish gang.

Chandu shout : iam not foolish

Maan heared chandu voice : mishty I heared chandu voice

Gang alert everyone escaped to save their life like vanished in air.

Geet: u have beautiful wife next to u but u think about chandu bhai. Hey babaji why u give me this type of husband for ur lovely child with fake angry face.

...

Delhi airport

Raguram and janaki come out of airport.

Both caught taxi . taxi asked about destination

Raguram: khurana mansion with harsh voice

Janaki shocked heared km name and mind voice:yesterday he said that packed our thing ,we need go to delhi with harsh voice. I understood something wrong. Even I asked him if i will inform to geet but he said don't inform to anyone that we are coming to delhi.

Janaki: ji why we going to km with worried voice

Raguram: janaki don't ask anything now with angry voice

Janaki mindvoice: hey bhagvan plz save my family with worried face

Km ,hall

Dadi sitting in sofa which reading magazine and Vicky & swara playing chess. Choti and pinky chit chat each other. Adi doing his work with some file.

Maan come to hall and asking dadi about green office file

Dadi: maan beta, I know only pooja , temple why u asking about ur file

Maan confused look to Vicky: Vicky where is my file

Swara: bhai why u asking file to Vicky bhai. He spent time only to flirting girl

Vicky: ha shona, iam flirt type but ur boring person. u only concentrate ur studies like bookworm

Maan mindvoice: I heared flirting girl, book worm words in some where

Maan look to pinky: pinky

Geet come to hall and seeing maan talk pinky but pinky not reply for him

Geet: pinky ,maan sir speaking u but u not reply him

Choti: angel , if maan jiju give chips to pinky di .she heared maan jiju voice because pinky di concentrate only her food

Pinky: ha iam comcentrate only my food but what about u . u such a prankster type. I don't know what u will do with ur future hubby

Maaneet looking each other and their understand everyone teasing them

Chandu come to hall with angry face

geet asking chandu : why u angry chandu bhai

chandu: geet baby, see that chammpaa ,she saying that iam foolish gang

chammpaa come behind chandu: no geet di he only said iam foolish gang.

Maan clear throat and everyone look at maan

Maan : I think everyone found out what relationship between me and my mishty. Now I say to everyone openly

Maan hold geet hand tightly:

first time I fallen love with one girl

no she is not ordinary girl ,she is my angel.

she make my life to colourful

her single smile make my day to light up

what can I say single word , she is priceless , my angel and my mishty .

she occupied my full heart

I incomplete without her

I love my mishty

( sry for boring lines, really my top floor vacant now (my brain)😆 i dont know how to write my hope next part 😭)

Geet starring maan and everyone not give any single reaction then concentrate their respective works

Maan irriate seeing their behavior and geet puppy look to maan

Maan shout : I talked u people but everyone doing ur stupid work

Dadi: why u shout maan , we r not dumb

Maan : dadi

Pinky laughed: sry dadi , iam not control anymore

Everyone laughed loudly and dadi twisted maan ears

Dadi: what u said iam dramabrazz character . how is my drama

Choti hugged geet murmuring her ear: u hided that he is my jiju. I will deal with u later

Dadi leave his ears: iam so much happy. Finally I got my badi bahu

Maan: i want to say one more important thing also

She is my w ( not complete his word)

Geet angry hard voice from km entrance

Everyone turned look to entrance

Geet : papa with smiling face

Part end

PREVIOUS part 21

next part part 23


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Edited by maaneetfavo - 8 years ago
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Beautiful update
someone needs to find the truth ...




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well written update
what is the new twist..




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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update now what waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome... update
Wow maan said his love but not his full relation
Oh God wat twist geet father going to bring
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update
yeh kya horaha he bhai yeh kya horaha he
ek sec ke liye laga maan abhi sanskar ko maar dega par yaha pe tho sab ultta horaha he
sanskar aur maan ki enemy sab ek natak tha aur ussme adi bhi shamil he
geet angry about bet proposal but maan manofied her
ab yeh pammi gang kya plan kiya he
maan ne dadi ko dramebaaz vicky big flirt swara ko book worm kaha maan babu gaye kaam se
geet bhi kamm ni he choti ko prankster kaha pinky ko foodie
full gang tang khich rahi maneet ki
geet papa angry whyyy?
waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
maan n sankar r still friends
n they r faking to find out about the person
maneets talks n romance
all heard it
n teasing them back
what is the enemys group planning
they left abroad
n geets parents to delhi
maan confessed his love to all
n was about to say they r married
but geets parents came
what a timing to stop
nice part

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