Aashiqui - The Unconditional Love - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Amazing
Loved shivika first meeting
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Beautiful..
Anika's entry in their life...
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Nimz...great story
Click a post on FF and see the pattern
Like adding index...and etc

Also edit ur title and mention 2part updated...so people will know that the nxt part is updated...

If u have more doubts...do see a fiction post ok



But i am loving this...i badly want this to happen...superb...hreat going girl...btw i am Aishu...i have book marked the page...cont soon...and daily...i dont have any patience
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
hiii dear...
2 parts together...wow...
loved it...
very beautifully written...👏
at first when i started reading...i thought that anika had a memory loss and shivaay unknowingly sent men at her home...and then i was like ok nothing is like that...
loved their meeting...
and then anika saved and dadi from accident...and this way now anika is in Oberoi Mansion...
and i also loved that part where shivaay came to say thnx to anika and then both were like TUM...
and really loved rudra's shayari...
" Bhaiyya ke seene chupe he kitne raaz
Upar upar business man
Aur andar andar ishqbaaz.. "
👏👏
awesome...
cont...soonnn...

and yah thnx fr the pm dear...
😳
Edited by angel_writer - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Part 3 😉😉

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"Phir kya hua Bhaiyya?"
Soumya asked, curious. She was awestruck by this story. She couldn't believe that 2 people, who literally hated each other, later fell in Love madly?

"Days passed. Shivay aur Anika ke beech ke duriyan kam horaha tha
Then she came. The third person in their story. Tia. Tia Kapoor. "
Om said turning towards the trio.

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" Shivaay, Tia is comings.be free"
Pinky said as she walked in to the dining room, joint the others.

"Ok Mom. But not before I finish my works. Ek kaam karo, Tia ko yaha pe bulaao. Everyone can meet her. "
Shivay said eyeing Anika.

Anika and Rudra started coughing badly.

Shivay immediately started caring for Anika.

" Anika drink this. Tum apni khayaal kyu nahi rakhti? I have to be always there for y-"
Shivay said worriedly,but stopped I'm the middle, not letting his 'slip of tongue' embarrass him.

Shivay stared at Anika while Anika was amused by Shivay's care.

Shivay's POV
I don't know what is happening to me. Since the day I got to know that Anika saved my Dadi, who is not less than my life, I'm caring about her more. I don't know why but 8 always feel that she is my responsibility now. I don't know what is going on with me!
*

Shivay broke the eyelids and looked elsewhere. He saw Om and Rudra grinning ear to ear looking at both of them. He shot a glare to make them Shut their antics.

"Mr. Dumbell Oberoi, tumhe kya hua tha? O ne kuch kiya kya? "
Shivay asked to hide his embarrassment.

" Nahi bhaiyya.. Nahi..ye sab aapke wajah se hua he... Mera din already aapne kharab kia. Ab aur karna chaahte ho? " Rudra asked melodramatically.

" Meine? Meine kya kia? "
Shivay asked Confused.

" Lady Baba... Aap unke baare me baat karke mera mood kharab kardiya. Aur ab aapne use yaha bulane keliye soch rahe hai? "

" Oh Shut up Rudra" Om and Shivaay said together, rolling their eyes.

Rudra pouted and looked back at the plate and started eating.

"Hey everyone! "
All looked towards the main door, checking the source of the shrieking voice.

" Shivaay baby...!!! "
A girl of almost 25 ran towards Shivaay and hugged him. Shivaay hugged her back in a not so Intrested manner.

" Ye lady baba iss waqt yaha kya kar rahi hai. " Rudra asked Om sadly.

" Rudra, Behave. " Om whispered.

Anika looked at The duo amazed.

Anika's POV

The girl had an irritating voice I should say. Pinky aunty had told me that Her name is TIA KAPOOR and was the daughter of one of the richest woman in the country, DIA KAPOOR and she was engaged to Bhaghad Billa Singh Oberoi. She was being a chipkoo, I'm sure that Billuji doesn't like that.Then why is he getting married to her? Wait a second. Me kyu apni dimag pe zor daalu?
Bade bade log, badi badi baatein. Unko hi samajh me aate hai ye sab cheezein.

Author's POV

Om and Rudra noticed Anika's expression changing constantly. They both looked at each other grinning.

"O, remember, 2 din pehle ye dono ek dusre ke aankhon me khoye hue mile the? " Rudra whispered to Om.

" Ha.. And kal ye dono almost kissing position me bhi pakde gayye the.. And as a cherry in top, Anika ne Shivay pe paani pheki thi na accidently? "

" aur Bhaiyya ne Didi ko bhi Nick name diya.. Remember.. What was that? Ya.. Panika " Both Om and Rudra chuckled remembering Anika and Shivay's fights.

" I'm damn sure that there is something cooking. Shivay ko Anika bohot effect karti hai... By the word Bohot, I really mean it... Par Jo bhi hai, takkar ki hai. "

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"Me and O decided to talk about that to Bhaiyya as we were sure that there was something there in between them. "

" Aur uss din hume pata chala ki Shivaay Anika se pyaar karta hai. "

" Wo kaise Om bhaiyya? "
Soumya asked erupting with curiosity.

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Shivay's POV

I had always believed that I could control my heart and mind. My feelings. And I was definitely successful in that too. But since the day Anika has entered in my life, it has changed drastically. I mean, OmRu was right. That girl is effecting me badly. I mean it. Badly. But I can't accept that. Neither in front of anyone,nor to myself as I can't cheat Tia. May be its just an attraction. As she us the first girl who is not behind my money. Not behind my fame. Not behind my looks. She has self respect. She is damn different from each and every girl I have met in my life.
I can't understand why iam falling for her. Wait, DID I JUST SAY 'FALLING FOR HER??!! ' like really?
How can I fall in love with a low class girl? A girl who is not upto my standards?

*

Om and Rudra entered Shivay's room, only to see him indulged in a self conversation, which they got to hear too.

"Shivaay, jab pyaar hota haina, class ya status dekh ke nahi hota. "
Om said startling Shivay.

" Did I say that aloud? "
Shivay asked confused.

" Ha bhaiyya, aapne loudly kaha tha.. O.. Meine kaha thana.. Bhaiyya is the ISHQBAAZ in the making? Aap bhi meri tarah banne lage ho... Ek hi time pe do do lad-.. "

" SHUT UP RUDRA " Shivay and Om said together.

" Aap dono thakte nahi ho kya? Hamesha ek hi line. Shut up Rudra"
Rudra said mimicking them.

Om huffed and turned towards Shivay, keeping a hand in Shivaay's shoulder.

"Shivay, Pyaar bohot baar hojata hai... Lekin mohabbat sirf ek baar hota hai.. If Tumne misunderstand kia hai ki tum Tia se pyaar karte ho, it's wrong. Meine dekha hai-"

"Humne" Rudra corrected

"Ha.. Humne Tumhare aankho me dekha hai wo feeling jo ek aashiq ke aankhon me hota hai... Shivay its crystal clear that tu Anika se pyaar karta hai... May be from the day you set your eyes on her. Accept it. "

Om said, patting Shivay's shoulders and walking out of the room accompanied by Rudra.

Anika's POV

I don't know what is happening to me. From the moment I saw Tia, I'm feeling bad. I mean I feel something stirring up inside me. She was so irritating! Billuji really doesn't like it. I know him really well.
But when she hugs him or pecks him on his cheeks, I feel really sad from inside. Or should I say furious? In getting mad or What?
Do I like him? NO NO NO NO NO.. Anika, tumhari dimagh kharab hogayi hai. Tumhe abram ki zaroorat hai. Chalke thodi der soja. Phir wo SSO phire Khadoos hi dekhayi dega.

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"Aur phir aisa kuch Anika ke saamne aayi, jo Un dono ke zindagi hi badaldi"
Om said coming out of his trance.

Soumya was amused. Amused that such a happy, fun and loving family had turned to this. She was feeling really attached to Anika even though she haven't met her. She wanted to meet her. But why wasn't she here then?
What happened to Shivay and Anika?
Did they accept their feelings?
What did Anika find?
Where is Anika now?

Hundreds of such questions were revolving in her mind, whose answers can only be given by Om, Rudra and Priyanka.

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Hey guys, iam back with an another update.

Are you guys liking the story?

Do like and comment your views guys... It will really encourage me to write!

With Love,
Nimz

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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
read all the part that has been posted in one go and it was incredibly written...sooo falling in ❤️ with every update in this story. ...eagerly waiting......continue soon
Edited by annniiii - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Beautiful update...
You beautifully portrayed shivaay's and Anika's thoughts...
Tia's entry in their story
What will happen next
Eagerly waiting for your next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Wow wow just amazing...
👏
Update soon
Can't wait to read more 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
interesting ... u should continue
as possible send on PM

update soon

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