swasan ts: tere pyaar mein

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello friends... I'm writing something for the first time so plz bear me if it's boring.
So my story starts from the point when laksh get to know about mansi and nikhil's reality and swasan save him.
3 days later
At baadi
Whole maheswaris have come to badi to take ragini back but ragini refuse to go and said that she will only go when swara too come.
Swara - ragini ye kya zid h plz aesa mat kro.
Sanskar-ragini tum jo chati ho ab nhi ho sakta(looking at swara) hum dono kabhi ek ni ho sakte. Swara was very upset listening all this but compose herself for ragini and tried to make ragini understand
Sw-ragini plz don't... Ragini interupt her
Rag- ye humara final decision h. Hamari wajah se aj tum dono alag ho or hum tumhe chod ke apni zindgi me khus rhe ye mein nhi kr skti. I'm sorry and sry laksh mein apke sath ni aa sakti ho ske to mujhe maaf kr dena
Lak- ni ragini mein tumhare sath hu.Ab hum tab hi sath honge ja swara or sans ek honge
Rag- thanx laksh
San- fine tumhe jo krna h kro pr mujhse koi bhi ummed mat rkhna.
With this he leave from there leaving a shattered swara behind who was feeling really guilt for making her sans like this and she too leaves from there to hide her tears from other.
Sumi to raglak - kya tum dono ko lagta h ke ye plan work krega.
So yes it's all a plan of raglak & all family members to unite our swasan.
Rag- don't worry ma inhe to hum ek krke hi rhenge.
Sujata- pr ye dono to mane hi na ab k fayda in sb ka.
Lak- don't worry chachi abhi to sirf starting h aage aage dekhiye hota h kya.
Ap- ha sujata swara or sanskar hamesa hamari musibato ko solve krte h or khud takleef uthate h pr ab hum logo ki bari.
Lak(with a mischivous smile)- bilkul sahi kha ma apne iss bar hamari bari h or hum har ni manne wale. In dono ko to pta bhi ni h ke inke sath kya- kya hone wala h.
Raglak together - inhe to ek krke hi rhenge.
Precap - swasan in a jungle
Hey guys so i'm stoping it here. I know it's boring then too comment as it's my first time and today i got to know one thing that writing is a very hardwork so i solute all the writers.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Di first of all congratulations for your first story. And no it's wasn't boring. Actually I wanted something like this to happen in the serial where the family together does something for swasan. So I have thoroughly enjoyed the first part. Will be waiting for the next one.
Love you loads
Nivi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank u bacha and actually i too wanted something like this to happen in the show and i hope mere exams ki frustration iss part me na dikh rhi ho.

And love u too
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: anika2

Thank u bacha and actually i too wanted something like this to happen in the show and i hope mere exams ki frustration iss part me na dikh rhi ho.

And love u too

Nahi aapki exam frustration is part mein nahi dikh rahi hai. Lekin haan updating a story can sometimes really frustrate you 😆 so be aware.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I wish they would have shown tashan when sanskar had to accept swara ..any ways it was beautiful...concept was nice...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice strt.. dekhtehai kya kya hota haiii 😉 waiting for nxt episode.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Kya baat anku... Congrats for 1st attempt...I know you will rock it🥳
Nikhil mansi return drame ki jagah agar ye dikha dete last k dino me to kya bigad jata inka🤢😡


Tani
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nivijo

Nahi aapki exam frustration is part mein nahi dikh rahi hai. Lekin haan updating a story can sometimes really frustrate you 😆 so be aware.

Baccha...she also joined our gang🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: kojagorimalik

I wish they would have shown tashan when sanskar had to accept swara ..any ways it was beautiful...concept was nice...

Thank u so much...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: mumpi09

nice strt.. dekhtehai kya kya hota haiii 😉 waiting for nxt episode.

Thanks dear and hoga to bhot kuch 😛

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