ArHi SS: Illusion [NTL: Page 121] - Page 42

Originally posted by: preciouspearly

Nice update...so arnav knew payal😕

Yep he knew her, I had actually no different reason to show why is he so invested in this case!

Thanks a lot!

IMPORTANT NOTE:

I am here to clear out few things which I guess have to be cleared before proceeding ahead, this story happens to be a crime thriller and I don't know how generally crime thrillers are designed but I did it by starting how the character is killed off, then what should be the clues or traps then where the killer could make the mistake and then finally the revolving drama... this is how Illusion got it's form.

I only say understand if there are 100 minds then there are atleast 50 different views, everything cannot go the view one wants which in turn means that I may/may not have the same view as yours, I've already apologized regarding the slap... though I don't still see how it is wrong🤔, I've cleared my stance regarding it being just a thing for drama like it's generally shown on television... Is it seriously first time you saw/read someone slapping someone for stopping that someone from self harming? So how come I become a chauvinist just because one male slaps a female?! Plus understand though a cop Arnav was too hammered the whole day to handle Khushi and her emotional tantrums peacefully yet he slapped her only when she tried to slice her vein so I don't really see how exactly I'm degrading morals or ethics... yet I apologize openly, what else you(the person know who!) want me to do?😕

Then comes another major twist in the story, Arnav already knew Payal... I understand it may be a surprise to many but I seriously had no other reason to show why Arnav should be so much interested in Payal and her case! Also this is a fiction at the end of the day... how on the earth will it be interesting devoid of twists?🥱 I don't see why a dead Payal should make you insecure about ArHi be she was his romantic interest or no. All I want to say it was very much planned twist right from the beginning!⭐️

Then the other thing saying I'm rushing the story as how suddenly Khushi living in delusion starts being active, I ask you is Khushi really using the presence of her mind and isn't naive anymore? Why the hell she would have walked three hours and 30 floors if she was calm and sorted?😕 She desperately wants an out...she even considered killing herself not being able to take it... it is not moving fast at all atleast for me and reading comments I guess majority are enjoying the story as it is moving! At some time all small tracks have to end Khushi has to take part in the story and complete whatever her role is, if you feel its rushed then the answer I can give is that it's a Short Story not a fan-fiction!

Criticism makes any writer better and thus we welcome it with open hands, but just a harmless free advice don't be rude! Rudeness makes us sad to an extent and I am just 17 so don't really expect some perfect Novel-level story from me because I am NOT a professional writer, even a very close friend of mine had similar incident, she literally want to give up everything... I guess some of you know about who I am talking. Anyways lastly I would say its actually very difficult to change or incorporate any additional things to the story because I already have it scripted in my head! But it in no manner means I am ignoring the criticism or suggestions coming my way... I am very glad how few people are literally obsessed for this story and I am really thankful to them from the bottom of my heart!🤗

Zephyr.

Loving the story, you are doing a brilliant job of keeping the mystery intact and the pace of the story is moving brilliantly.

The story is going at a normal phase so don't worry l support u my dear ...

I'm sorry too, I understand I was rude but when Arnav slapped Khushi twice I lost my cool... poor girl was traumatized and he slapped her?! maybe he could have stopped her by pinning her to wall like it happens... okay he was hammered but still? I shouldn't have said all that things... something in my personal life is really going wrong and I guess I took it on you when you differed from what I said! I understand ur view indeed is different from mine and whatever you do with it is none of my business!

All I can say I'm a weak hearted and I quit this story of such things and scenes like drunk women, slapping girls continue and... I'M SORRY! I QUIT THIS STORY!!

Originally posted by: BUCHIANU

nice update. .wats the connection between arnav n payal?

Arnav and Payal dynamics will open as story progresses :-)
Thanks!

Originally posted by: --Scarlett--

I'm sorry too, I understand I was rude but when Arnav slapped Khushi twice I lost my cool... poor girl was traumatized and he slapped her?! maybe he could have stopped her by pinning her to wall like it happens... okay he was hammered but still? I shouldn't have said all that things... something in my personal life is really going wrong and I guess I took it on you when you differed from what I said! I understand ur view indeed is different from mine and whatever you do with it is none of my business!

All I can say I'm a weak hearted and I quit this story of such things and scenes like drunk women, slapping girls continue and... I'M SORRY! I QUIT THIS STORY!!

so pinning a girl to the wall isn't manhandling?

anyways all I had to say is in the post... you're free to quit if you want to😃

I totally agree with all 3 points of yours... Ok, A man hitting a woman is wrong. But somehow i understood why Arnav did it. She was gonna kill herself and it was meant to shock her so that she stops.

Interesting story space