IMPORTANT
NOTE:
I am here to
clear out few things which I guess have to be cleared before proceeding ahead,
this story happens to be a crime thriller and I don't know how generally crime
thrillers are designed but I did it by starting how the character is killed
off, then what should be the clues or traps then where the killer could make
the mistake and then finally the revolving drama... this is how Illusion got it's
form.
I only say
understand if there are 100 minds then there are atleast 50 different views,
everything cannot go the view one wants which in turn means that I may/may not have
the same view as yours, I've already apologized regarding the slap... though I
don't still see how it is wrong🤔, I've cleared my stance regarding it being just
a thing for drama like it's generally shown on television... Is it seriously
first time you saw/read someone slapping someone for stopping that someone from
self harming? So how come I become a chauvinist just because one male slaps a
female?! Plus understand though a cop Arnav was too hammered the whole day to
handle Khushi and her emotional tantrums peacefully yet he slapped her only
when she tried to slice her vein so I don't really see how exactly I'm
degrading morals or ethics... yet I apologize openly, what else you(the person
know who!) want me to do?😕
Then comes
another major twist in the story, Arnav already knew Payal... I understand it
may be a surprise to many but I seriously had no other reason to show why Arnav
should be so much interested in Payal and her case! Also this is a fiction at
the end of the day... how on the earth will it be interesting devoid of twists?🥱 I
don't see why a dead Payal should make you insecure about ArHi be she was his
romantic interest or no. All I want to say it was very much planned twist right
from the beginning!⭐️
Then the
other thing saying I'm rushing the story as how suddenly Khushi living in
delusion starts being active, I ask you is Khushi really using the presence of
her mind and isn't naive anymore? Why the hell she would have walked three
hours and 30 floors if she was calm and sorted?😕 She desperately wants an out...she
even considered killing herself not being able to take it... it is not moving
fast at all atleast for me and reading comments I guess majority are enjoying
the story as it is moving! At some time all small tracks have to end Khushi has
to take part in the story and complete whatever her role is, if you feel its
rushed then the answer I can give is that it's a Short Story not a fan-fiction!
Criticism
makes any writer better and thus we welcome it with open hands, but just a
harmless free advice don't be rude! Rudeness makes us sad to an extent and I am
just 17 so don't really expect some perfect Novel-level story from me because I
am NOT a professional writer, even a very close friend of mine had similar
incident, she literally want to give up everything... I guess some of you know
about who I am talking. Anyways lastly I would say its actually very difficult
to change or incorporate any additional things to the story because I already
have it scripted in my head! But it in no manner means I am ignoring the criticism
or suggestions coming my way... I am very glad how few people are literally
obsessed for this story and I am really thankful to them from the bottom of my
heart!🤗
Zephyr.
Edited by Zephyr. - 7 years ago
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