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Posted: 9 years ago
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How ironic does this all sound?

unresed

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Yes, I do watch IB and if there's a single human being among the three brothers whom I am more into it is Omkara Singh Oberoi.

but why can't I hold Scarlet without reminiscing those few secs,

If I were asked to describe your oneshot in one word I'd say poetic. You write with a unique convection and beauty and reading this piece was effortless for me woman!

You somehow managed to capture his inner struggle into words and paint them so beautifully that it leaves one wanting more. It's not so sophisticated, yet it is not simple either. There is depth and emotions lurking in every sentence.

Do write more on him. Will be looking forward to it. 👏


P.S I feel this is the most beautiful piece written by you till date.




Edited by Starkheart. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@desto do ures soon...awaiting ur comment!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .effervescent.

@desto do ures soon...awaiting ur comment!!


unresed 😆

And sorry for the delay behna.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Starkheart.

How ironic does this all sound?


unresed

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Yes, I do watch IB and if there's a single human being among the three brothers whom I am more into it is Omkara Singh Oberoi.
Same here girl 👍🏼
but why can't I hold Scarlet without reminiscing those few secs,

If I were asked to describe your oneshot in one word I'd say poetic. You write with a unique convection and beauty and reading this piece was effortless for me woman!
All I can say is mercy signora😳😳
You somehow managed to capture his inner struggle into words and paint them so beautifully that it leaves one wanting more. It's not so sophisticated, yet it is not simple either. There is depth and emotions lurking in every sentence.
now you are really making me blush 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
Do write more on him. Will be looking forward to it. 👏
I will definitely write more

P.S I feel this is the most beautiful piece written by you till date.

I'll have to agree to that😃


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