The clash of titans- A Beyhadh FF- an introduction

Hey everyone. Introductions are in order. Both mine and my story's. I'm Agastya. I've been a silent reader in this forum for a while now. I haven't watched a lot of hindi daily soaps. I've always thought (like most guys I know) that they're crap. In my and the other guys' defense, most of them are. At the cost of being rude I'll have to say that Beyhadh isn't very different. It has it's share of cheesiness and terribly written characters. But if there's one thing that makes the show watchable for me, it's the character Maya, and not just because Jennifer Winget is absolutely gorgeous. The character compelled me to write a story about her and so here I am.
In my story Maya's character is essentially the same but I've changed most of the other characters, especially Arjun- who is also a rich, powerful guy here hence the name- the clash of titans. I've also deleted some characters. So here goes nothing-

"Maya Mehrotra had never thought one decision could have such repercussions. a year ago she had decided to sell 51% of her stocks. At the time the deal had seemed great because she had retained all the power. But now, the man she made that deal with is almost dead and his son has replaced him. Maya is forced to involve one Arjun Sharma, who knows nothing about fashion or journalism, in every decision she makes about her magazine. Maya Mehrotra is not used to sharing but now she'll have to share what she holds the dearest- power."

So..Yay or Nay?

Good concept..plz pm me once you update the first chapter.