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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RishuDarling

Thank you Thank you

You all are making me feel so motivated to write more.
Hold on if you wish, I will post something soon.
Consider this is as a Rishu PriVeer special / marathon 😆
Because I fell asleep yesterday

Unless you girls are tired of me. Then just kindly let me know.
I am so super sensitive you know 😆

Oh.. And referring to
but his heart felt every bit of it, jumping for joy, but being restrained by his rockhard strong muscled chest
Now you know how my mind works... LOL

Loved both your updates. I have no idea how you guys even come up with such brilliant ideas. 👏 If you have more to add to this then I would love to read more😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
From the comments, I've got some super amazing updates to catch up on! Will be checking them out later tonight, Rishi! 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RishuDarling

Thank you Thank you

You all are making me feel so motivated to write more.
Hold on if you wish, I will post something soon.
Consider this is as a Rishu PriVeer special / marathon😆
Because I fell asleep yesterday

Unless you girls are tired of me. Then just kindly let me know.
I am so super sensitive you know😆

Oh.. And referring to
<font size="2">but his heart felt every bit of it, jumping for joy, but being restrained by his rockhard strong muscled chest</font>
Now you know how my mind works... LOL



Youuu!!!!
We will NEVER get tired of youuu!!!!!! ❤️
Keep the PriVeer love coming! 👏

I want to sing the song from Highschool Musical: We Are All In This Together 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
His poker face did not show any emotion but his heart felt every bit of it, jumping for joy, but being restrained by his rockhard strong muscled chest.

I actually imaged/felt his situation and it cracked me up.
His heart after missing a beat on feeling her presence around must have been working at extra fast speed😉 He should actually be named poker face. He gets us all confusing with his smirk and a genuine smile. 🤣
Coming to your updates Rishu I loved them. I might be able to update after couple of them.
Looking forward to your next one btw.
Edited by fizy_wizy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
The story is now taking a dangerous turn if I may, with the growing sense awareness in both of them. I love the updates that have been here so far. Would love to see what happens next!! ACP is wickedness!😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ok ! Iam posting an update now while the rest of the PriVeer fandom is busy dreaming of husky voice,shades and suspenders 😉 . Just a small one.
He would pay both a visit tomorrow, he thought, as he locked up his office and head back home.

Ranveer was happy and was actually humming a romantic song while both Shinde and Varma exchanged confused looks. For them few things seemed possible for this sudden change in his attitude.
1) The case which was of special importance to the ACP has some how come to an end or
2) he has fallen madly and deeply in love with a recent lady who came at the police station or
3) the murderer of Gayatri Tambe has been identified or
4) from tomorrow both Varma and Shinde again have to work extra hard if again all the above mentioned possibilities turned out wrong.
When they reached ACP's home without any discussion relating to any of the recent developments regarding any case,criminal,rich businessmen, social agenda,politics and lastly the most interesting topic for them - the media, they were truly feeling something is going not well with the young fellow. ACP wished each one " good night!"
Out of sheer confusion and curiosity ,Shinde said, " Sir! Good night ? " Ranveer turned back with a smile and stopped humming. He glanced back and exclaimed " yes! Good night!". Both the officers were completely taken aback with his response. This fellow what they knew is always talking about one or the other cases,criminals,culprits,... And whenever they dropped him or even if they accompanied him till his house,he continued specifying their next day's duties but today nothing like that happened. They didn't knew what they should be now, be happy or be afraid?
Ranveer on the other hand seemed amused with the reactions his officers gave him when he walked inside his house.
He headed off to his bed. He was feeling blissful, happy and that startled him. He wondered " why? Ranveer why?, What is it? Leave it. It might the case".Thinking that he dozed off. But even after him on his bed, he was busy having dreams of someone who recently has shown concern regarding him,his food habits,his wounds and his companionship. He touched his bandaged area and found the nothing. Usually some pain remains even after taking those pain killers but today, nothing! He closed his eyes one again only to find him imagine that moment when Prinku hugged him hard while it was raining and found his heart beat louder than the alarm clock ticking beside his bed. Oh man! It's not...it is...no no it can't be! Well can it be? Uff! Miss Priyanka Singh Oberoi ? Is that you?


Ok Guys! I wanted Ranveer to at least feel different towards Priyanka amidst this whole case.I got this idea from the last update posted by Rishi where she mentioned 'weak Link' and the visit after this would be interesting I thought,so in between this,let him have some alone time to think. I can't write beautifully on investigation and the developments related to the cases,so here you all wonderful ladies with that special talent jump in
Edited by dimaag - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dimaag

Ok ! Iam posting an update now while the rest of the PriVeer fandom is busy dreaming of husky voice,shades and suspenders 😉 . Just a small one.
He would pay both a visit tomorrow, he thought, as he locked up his office and head back home.

Ranveer was happy and was actually humming a romantic song while both Shinde and Varma exchanged confused looks. For them few things seemed possible for this sudden change in his attitude.
1) The case which was of special importance to the ACP has some how come to an end or
2) he has fallen madly and deeply in love with a recent lady who came at the police station or
3) the murderer of Gayatri Tambe has been identified or
4) from tomorrow both Varma and Shinde again have to work extra hard if again all the above mentioned possibilities turned out wrong.
When they reached ACP's home without any discussion relating to any of the recent developments regarding any case,criminal,rich businessmen, social agenda,politics and lastly the most interesting topic for them - the media, they were truly feeling something is going not well with the young fellow. ACP wished each one " good night!"
Out of sheer confusion and curiosity ,Shinde said, " Sir! Good night ? " Ranveer turned back with a smile and stopped humming. He glanced back and exclaimed " yes! Good night!". Both the officers were completely taken aback with his response. This fellow what they knew is always talking about one or the other cases,criminals,culprits,... And whenever they dropped him or even if they accompanied him till his house,he continued specifying their next day's duties but today nothing like that happened. They didn't knew what they should be now, be happy or be afraid?
Ranveer on the other hand seemed amused with the reactions his officers gave him when he walked inside his house.
After a quick look at his sister's intervenes drips,oxygen mask and the other machines attached with her body and kissing Ippy's forehead,he headed off to his bed. He was feeling blissful, happy and that startled him. He wondered " why? Ranveer why?, What is it? Leave it. It might the case".Thinking that he dozed off. But even after him on his bed, he was busy having dreams of someone who recently has shown concern regarding him,his food habits,his wounds and his companionship. He touched his bandaged area and found the nothing. Usually some pain remains even after taking those pain killers but today, nothing! He closed his eyes one again only to find him imagine that moment when Prinku hugged him hard while it was raining and found his heart beat louder than the alarm clock ticking beside his bed. Oh man! It's not...it is...no no it can't be! Well can it be? Uff! Miss Priyanka Singh Oberoi ? Is that you?


Ok Guys! I wanted Ranveer to at least feel different towards Priyanka amidst this whole case.I got this idea from the last update posted by Rishi where she mentioned 'weak Link' and the visit after this would be interesting I thought,so in between this,let him have some alone time to think. I can't write beautifully on investigation and the developments related to the cases,so here you all wonderful ladies with that special talent jump in




Awww dimaag!!!!!
This is honestly TOO cute!!!!!! Thank you for the adorable update!!! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Dimaag,
You have described the unspoken confusion and questions of Shinde and Varma so cutely.
The transformation of PriVeer is slow but steady. And I love such little details, because its not just the color but also shows the depths in the painting.

One thing that did confuse me a little bit, is Ippy being at home, but we will make that work somehow. I guess we 'steal' that from the episodes 😉

To all, perhaps I will continue writing in a bit. Just came from the movies. Picture this girls! I went to see the Dutch version of Magic Mike. So basically 75% hot half naked man stripping.. And guess what I am thinking??

His poker face did not show any emotion but his heart felt every bit of it, jumping for joy, but being restrained by his rockhard strong muscled chest.

Do you think I might have developed some sort of.. Obsession for the ACP? 🤣
Edited by RishuDarling - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RishuDarling

Hi Dimaag,

You have described the unspoken confusion and questions of Shinde and Varma so cutely.
The transformation of PriVeer is slow but steady. And I love such little details, because its not just the color but also shows the depths in the painting.

One thing that did confuse me a little bit, is Ippy being at home, but we will make that work somehow. I guess we 'steal' that from the episodes😉

To all, perhaps I will continue writing in a bit. Just came from the movies. Picture this girls! I went to see the Dutch version of Magic Mike. So basically 75% hot half naked man stripping.. And guess what I am thinking??

<font size="2">His poker face did not show any emotion but his heart felt every bit of it, jumping for joy, but being restrained by his rockhard strong muscled chest.</font>

<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" size="2">Do you think I might have developed some sort of.. Obsession for the ACP?🤣</font>




Oh youuu!!!!
❤️
Keep the updates coming! I love how you guys are magically transforming this couple from something the show ignored to something beautiful
My mind drifts back to a couple (it was NEVER canon) from an anime that I liked as a teen.
PriVeer reminds me of that!
Ranveer is like the guy!
Mascular, tall, handsome 😆
Edited by Tahiti-1 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RishuDarling

Hi Dimaag,

You have described the unspoken confusion and questions of Shinde and Varma so cutely.
The transformation of PriVeer is slow but steady. And I love such little details, because its not just the color but also shows the depths in the painting.

One thing that did confuse me a little bit, is Ippy being at home, but we will make that work somehow. I guess we 'steal' that from the episodes😉

To all, perhaps I will continue writing in a bit. Just came from the movies. Picture this girls! I went to see the Dutch version of Magic Mike. So basically 75% hot half naked man stripping.. And guess what I am thinking??

<font size="2">His poker face did not show any emotion but his heart felt every bit of it, jumping for joy, but being restrained by his rockhard strong muscled chest.</font>

<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" size="2">Do you think I might have developed some sort of.. Obsession for the ACP?🤣</font>



Ippy at home,yeah!. Actually I was not thinking too much about her and where ACP is concerned, 😳 no logic comes to my mind. It's like ACP and the rest. Thank you Rishi for commenting. I'm glad you liked this one 😛
And yes! whenever you find time,post oneone 😉
Edited by dimaag - 8 years ago

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