ShiVika OS:Jiya Re

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[Hola Ishqbaazians.. M Mugdha.. A silent member here..
I finally came up with an OS..
It's fully on imagination.
Not proof read. So plz pardon me 4 mistakes"]


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Morey jiya, main kya tere bin
Morey jiya, tu mera palchim



I was waiting 4 dis day soo long.. Since my childhood.. I hav always been overwhelmd seeing her innocence, amazd seeing her naughtiness, astonishd seeing her madness, melted seeing her cuteness... Her smile..The whole world can b mad 4 it.. Her eyes..M speechless abt dat.. I hav worshipd her existence.. N i don't knw whn she tuk my existence widin her.. She is reality.. She is eternity.. Since the 1st si8..Whn I was 4 yrs old only n she was also the same.



Likhun main tere naam saari umar
Main chahun tujhko hi aatto peher
Basayun teri galiyon mein apna ghar
Jiya re...



My fathr got admitted me in "Bombay Scottish" schul. I nvr wantd 2 get admitted in any schul. I was so much obsessd wid the freedom of my childhud. Bt...

Huh anyways,wht days they were! I oftn laugh remembring thm. Bt the thing which makes me smile oftn is the 1st day of my schul. Obviously, all may b surprisd why I'll b happy whn I didnt evn want 2 go 2 schul. Bcoz dat day a butterfly flew into the garden of my heart and touchd directly my soul. It was not a mere childhud crush. It was something different which i lykd, no, i luuuvd the mst.. It was she.. My girl.. Her smile..



Jiya re basa hai tera roop aankhon mein
Jiya re sochun main tujhe chaand raaton mein
Jiya re khoya mein rahun teri baaton mein
Jiyaare jiyaare jiyaare..
Jiyaare jiyaare jiyaare..



She was lyk a rain.. She made me wet wid feelings bt vanishd quickly widout evn talking 2 me. Actually, she only playd wid girls

Bt bcoz of her I had no frnds since I spent all my tym luking at her smile.. Had she noticd dat anyday, any moment? Had she evr saw n laugh at dis stupid soul? Who knows!



Tu hai toh mera wajood hain
Tu hai toh meri talaash hain
Tu hai toh shaamein khushnuma
Tu hai toh lab ki pyaas hain




She changed her schul.. Dnt knw 4 wht reason.. And luk at me.. I almost bcame a mental patient. Hwevr, parents tuk me 2 doctor n i was suggested me 2 make frnds. N me being the "achacha bachcha" tuk the advice n made a lot of frnds. My lyf lukd normal. I was normal bt actually nt normal. Widout her lyf seemd soo difficult. Bt still I waited since my teacher told "Life is hope".. And.. Yeah.. May b my strong bilif made my destiny.. N I got the biggest surprise of my lyf.. Since I got my lyf back..



Likhun main tere naam saari umar
Main chahun tujhko hi aatto peher
Basayun teri galiyon mein apna ghar
Jiya re...



I was thn in 5th standrd. Some1 shifted 2 our frnt apartment where my bst frnd usd 2 live b4. Whn he left i was so upset. Bt lyf plays such games. I went 2 see dat which monster has come. And there.. I saw her.. It was her family which shifted.. Omg.. I got her again n dat 2 so close.. Lyk seriosly, mosnter?! Huh.. She is the beauty n m the beast..N my lyf gave me the bstst moment. May b she also recognizd me. She came n huggd me tight wid the brightest smile playing in her lips. I was 2 overwhelmd 2 react. N she left blushing... Omg! Wht can lyf gift bttr than dis.. I luv u my lyf..



Jiya re basa hai tera roop aankhon mein
Jiya re sochun main tujhe chaand raaton mein
Jiya re khoya mein rahun teri baaton mein
Jiyaare jiyaare jiyaare..
Jiyaare jiyaare jiyaare..



I realizd dat i didnt evn knw her name. I didnt evn dare 2 talk 2 her. I jst usd 2 luk at her whenvr i could n she always tried 2 steal her eyes frm me bt couldnt hide her tomato cheeks.. Fortune brought us in the same college. There also the same thing happnd.. She nvr talkd 2 me. I still didnt knw her name n didnt evn try 2 knw. I wanted 2 hear it frm her only. Did she knw my name? I hav been always following her in n outside of the college. I was his secret bodyguard n my return gift was dat I had come 2 knw abt all her tastes. Bt nvr heard her voice. Donno how melodious dat would b...

I waited for a special day 2 open my "beautifully arching" heart b4 her where only she livd..N today is The Valentines day..



Tu jeene ki umeed hai
Tu khwaabo ka aasma
Tu hai chahat ki kaayanaat
Tu hai yaadon ka kaha kasha



I had sent her a letter n a gown. Hop she has ricivd dat. Hop this beauty will appear soon n transform dis beast 2 a princess...

So I hav decorated the venue 4 her lyk a fairy tale world. Snow falling all over.. A white horse.. A small house.. A bench.. A pumpkin vehicle.. Small trees.. A big piano in the centre.. Her fav foods in the dinner table.. N the the smell of my luv filld by the starts of the open sky above us...

I'm waitinh 4 her since so long.. Where is she..

Oh dat sound..

Has she come?

Yeah.. I can feel her.

Omg! Such a big mouth smile has appeared in my lips.. Control! Wht would she think. Lemme luk behind at 1st..

She is here.. Luking lyk a fairy.. The pink rose lips.. Her black silk rainy hair falling on her bare neck.. Her smooth milky skin.. Her lucky white gown wrapping her body...

Bt something is missing..
Where is her smile?
Oh.. How's dis possible..
Her eyes don't luk happy. Rather they r bearing the crystal of her tears..
Oh shit.. Wht happend.. Did I make a mistake? Or she doesn't luv me? Has she some1 othr in her lyf?
Uff.. Lemme jst ask her..
"Fairy,Ur eyes r saying something 2 me bt I can't read it.. M so sry.. May b I'm nt worthy of u.. M so so sry.. Plz 4giv me bcoz I dnt evn knw abt my mistake eithr. So sor.. Sorry.. So sry I am.."
She is shaking her head in the negativ. Her eyes filld n I dnt knw whn my eyes discharged my tears..
She is comes close n cups my face. I also do the same. I jst wanna grab her in my arms. That's the only solution 2 all dis.
Bt why is nt letting me hug her. Evn she is increasing the distance amomg us walking backward..
Nw she is searching something in her bag n she givs me a letter..
"I can't talk.. M dumb.."
Is she jst kidding?
"U r jocking, ri8?"
She is nodding.. N she bursts into into tears..
I feel lyk my heart beat has stoppd here.. Wht should i do.. I jst want 2 wanna flee away frm dis situation.. Yeah,i should jst go frm here..
Oh no, she hold my hand.
Should I luk at her? Yeah.. My heart is saying 2 do dat.
She is wid teary eyes. Holds my hand. She jst luks at me. N her heart says thousands of words..

M feeling lyk m dead there. How can I b so cheap. I usd 2 luv her na? Thn how could i think of letting her go jst bcoz she cant talk. She always communicates wid me. N u cant read her mind. Jst luk at her eyes.. She so much luvs u n wants 2 b wid u.. N u.. This is ur luv??

"M nt worthy of u.. I am nooot worthy of u.. M sry.. So sry.. I dnt deserve u"

She should hav rebukd me aftr dis.. Bt she jst embraces me in her arms..
N thn.. My lyf changes.. I dnt wanna think anything else. She is mine n m hers..She n Me r "Us".. N that's it..
I usd 2 think none can luv her more than me.. N nw i biliv.. I myself can luv her more than i used to do the previous moment. Bcoz she'll make me luv her more n more the nxt moment..
N tears of happiness fill my eyes..
"I luv u fairy.."

She luks at me wid her eyes pouring luv. She tries 2 say something..

"Shhh.." I put my finger on her lips. "U luv me 2.. I knw.. N I'll make u luv me.. M so handsome u knw"
She laughs.. N gives me a chit..
"Anika" is the name written there.. I finally get 2 knw her name.. Oh my lord.. This name sounds lyk the most beautiful melody bcoz it's of her.. N now my part 2..

N thn we embrace each othr as the whole world stoppd there.. N nw we were all set 2 write the new fairy tale:
"Shivay and Anika.. ShiVika"



Likhun main tere naam saari umar
Main chahun tujhko hi aatto pehar
Basaon teri galiyon main apna ghar
Jiyaare
Jiya re basa hai tera roop aankhon mein
Jiya re sochun main tujhe chaand raaton mein
Jiya re khoya mein rahun teri baaton mein



Her eyes talks more than anything 2 me..
Jiya Re.. Khoya Main Rahoon Teri In Baaton Mein..
Forevr..



Jiyaare jiyaare jiyaare..
Jiyaare jiyaare jiyaare..




Edited by .Metaphor. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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a beautiful os ...
its quite soulful n heart touching...
love is above all n it makes heart sing n life brighter...so true❤️
do write more..

bulbul
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: chaturchipkali

a beautiful os ...
its quite soulful n heart touching...
love is above all n it makes heart sing n life brighter...so true❤️
do write more..

bulbul


Thnx a lot dear 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awe...😳 i was smiling like an idiot while reading 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Such a beautiful os..dear...
I just loved it...
It was heart touching...beautifully written...
Do write more...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wifey!!! 🤗
Finally tu ne yahaan entry maari 😆
Lovely OS!

The edit is.. is...I don't know how to describe it because it's like art. Photoshop hi use karti ho na. Sautanji ne sikhaya? Mujhe bhi sikhao na pls. 😳

Anika is dumb was the awesome plot twist it's an amazing plot twist considering her non stop talking on the show😆. It is similar to SC's character in QH. I love it.. though thadi maarna kam ho jayega.

The edit... mujhe sikha dena jaan.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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@amina,gauri, zanya : thnx a looot :D
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@mysticriver,shibu,saakiya :thnx a loot 😊
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Originally posted by: Echo.of.Hope

wifey!!! 🤗
Finally tu ne yahaan entry maari 😆
Lovely OS!

The edit is.. is...I don't know how to describe it because it's like art. Photoshop hi use karti ho na. Sautanji ne sikhaya? Mujhe bhi sikhao na pls. 😳

Anika is dumb was the awesome plot twist it's an amazing plot twist considering her non stop talking on the show😆. It is similar to SC's character in QH. I love it.. though thadi maarna kam ho jayega.

The edit... mujhe sikha dena jaan.



Thnx a lot jaan..😃
Oh i 4got dat haya was also dumb

N yah.. Tukhe toh narajj hona chahiye bcoz isko likhne mein n is edit banane mein i wasted sab free tym. N dats why i couldnt make an edit 4 u.. Bt ill try 2 make asap.. N sry again jaan.

Btw, my learnt ps frm my father bachpan se. I initially i taught it 2 ur sautan. Bt she is vry determined n m vry happy dat she is nw a perfectionist. Bt i dnt get so tym 4 ps. I keep busy in college scribe, fucyions etc..

Ok tujhe sikha dungi ⭐️

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