| IshRaRuDiHu OS | Their Family Time ! |

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### | IshRaRuDiHu | Their Family Time! ###


Guys, this is my ever first piece of writing, inspired by all the writers in forums...
I love IshRa just like you all, and tried something with what I want to watch on screen... It might be full of hindi grammar mistakes, please bear with me, I m not native hindi speaker.. YHM is my hindi teacher so far!!
You may enjoy it or It may waste your time, but please do read... and guide me with suggestions, where I did mistakes, in terms of narrating, choice of words ya hindi mistakes...

Eagerly waiting for your thoughts 😊

Have a great time!

//Swa

PS: After reading, if you want to scream at me "DARE YOU EVER WRITE AGAIN", please pm me yar...😉
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"Per Ishima, aap Madarasan ho aur Papa punjabi... kaise milgaye app aur Papa... " Pihu asked with curiosity shining in her eyes.

Its time to Pihu's bed time stories, and Ishu Pihu were on their bed. Pihu cuddling to her Ishima, both looking like a baby rabbit with mommy rabit in a big lawn. Today some how Ishu was narrating one of her moments with Ruhi and all of a sudden Pihu came with the doubt she is having since many days...

Raman is also there only, knowing very well that his fasting will be continued for this night also😉, sulking but pretending to be working, keeping laptop in his lap..[God knows if he is searching how to send kids away from your bed room, this time 😉]

Listening to her question, Raman's eyes met Ishu's and both were smiling as their first encounter occupied their minds.
Ishu told "Per Pihu, Papa se pehle main kisi aur ko milgayi, aap janthi ho o kaun tha ?"
"Haa haan Ishima, Ruhi di ne mijhe bathaya, aap pehele Ruhi di se milgayi aur papa se shadi bhi sirf Ruhi di ke liye kiya..aap unki angel ho...
Ishima aapki lovestory mujhe bhi bathavo na" Pihu asked...

"Ha Pihu, Ishima Papa lovestory ka title pata hain aapko?... that is "Sirf Ruhi Ke liye" " this time, its Adi's voice and Adi and Ruhi smiling faces appeared at the door...
"Ruhi, Adi ... aap?!" Ishu with a pleasant surprise, where Pihu also enlightened and happy that AdiRu joined them..
Adi said "Haa Ishima, Papa aur Pihu vaapas aaneke baad, aap hamareiye time bhi nhi nikalrahe ho...ishliye main aur ruhi ne socha..aaj rath aapke sath spend karenge" Adi concluded with a complaining tone..
"Aur Jab hum aaye the, aap Pihu se, meri subse favourite story sunrahe hain...Ishima" Ruhi told with a big smile on her face..

They also settled down on bed with IshPi, only after fighting about who will sit beside Ishima...Ishu Raman was laughing at cute fight between brother n sister...and Pihu hugging her Ishima more tightly than before so that AdiRu can not steal her place..lol.
Finally its again our raudy Ruhidada who won the fight, Adi gave up and ended up beside Pihu with a cute pout, where Ruhi was busy hugging Ishima from the other side, with a winning smile...

"Ishima aisehi beta, o jaada partial hain Pihu Ruhi ke liye... hamare saath tho hamesha unfairly behave karthi hothi hain" complained Raman, not able to keep quiet anymore😆..
"Ayo amma, iss me maine kya kiya :(" Ishu exclaimed and AdiRuHu burst into laughter seeing Papa's sulking face and Ishima's funny reaction with her signature prefix!

"Ishima, bathao na, aapki love story sab jaantha hai, sirf main hi nahi jaantha" demanded Pihu, when they all settled down comfortably...
Raman still on nearby couch but now his full concentration is on his family and Ishu who s narrating their own love story beautifully, and he is also participating sometimes and cracking jokes in his own style.
He knows of all the days, this is the happiest day he till date ... with his angel, his prince n princesses ek saath! He found himself enjoying this very own moment, after-all he got his family back with peace after 8 long years and he doesn't want to miss even a nano second of this moment!


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On the other hand, Mr & Mrs.Bhalla in their room...
Wondering what happened listening to all giggles wiggles they are hearing from IshRa's room. Finally Toshi couldn't keep herself calm, her belly swelling out of curiosity and they made a visit to IshRa, only to find whole family indulged in conversation, smiling happily! They became ecstatic with overwhelmed happiness! After all this is the moment they have been praying for all these years!
Toshi sent a silent prayer to MataRani once again to keep her son n family like this always, to her surprise, Mr.Bhalla also joined in her prayer..
They don't want to disturb the family time, indeed they have other plans to celebrate their happiness 😉

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While listening to her Papa-Mumma's love story, Pihu fell asleep on her Ishima herself, where they continued talks in hush hush tone sometime and AdiRu also fell a sleep with a content smiles on their faces.

Where Ruhi Pihu hugged her Ishima from either side, Ishu is the happiest soul, she just couldn't stop smiling herself for her luck. Past just appeared as flashes infront of her eyes, where people used to taunt her for inability and moments with Ruhi and then Adi calling her as Ishima, Pihu's harsh words and Pihu accepting her as Maa! Its a long journey, indeed!

By the time ,Raman also saw all children fell asleep and Ishu smiling in herself! He smiled on thougt "Pagal Madarasan!", felt a surge of love and an unknown emotion fill his heart, if not this Madarasan, the situation would be altogether different!! He thanked his stars billionth time, who brought her into his life, for him its like a rain on broken soil!

He came to bed like a cat, without making sound, checked whether any kid is still awaken😉
He 'Shshhhed' Ishu, who is about to ask what he is upto, only to gift her a silent kiss on forehead, unable to express his love in words!
When Ishu's face lit up brightly at his action, he made little space for him beside Adi...not wanting to go to couch when his heart n beats are here on bed ;)

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When Raman is about to sleep, that happened!! Again!!😲
One more attempt to loot his ijjat!!😉
This time, not by appa, but Adi...🤓
His priy-beta turned this side, hugged him, not only that but kept a leg on him, saying... "Alu , Chodo na yar!!😳 Tum ithni naughty ho rahi hain aur Papa aajayenge tho mere band bajayenge!!!"😆
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That's all for now!

//Swa



Edited by swa6 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Updated!
I m really nervous now :) Waiting for your comments... 😳

//Swa
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is so beautiful and light hearted
Pihu was asking about Ishra's love story
How cute
Loved the way of your writing
Waiting to see what else u will write on Ishra
Edited by sarunholic_arhi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Swa - omg what a lovely story! I just love reading about these sweet happy moments of this cute family which we rarely get to see on the show! I, too, learned Hindi from Bollywood/desi shows...so I get the trepidation in using it here. Lovely OS & can't wait to see what else you write 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Its a sweet piece of work
Lovely
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Posted: 8 years ago
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superb os and the last line was epic 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww its beautiful
How I wish they show some family moments like this after all ishra family back together happy n content after long 8 yrs instead of drama, n crap all the time.. Khair..
Loved it.. Puttar sulking .. Kids fighting for ishima .. At the end puttar too took space in bed .. Adi attacking Raman hahaha
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi..
Congratulations on your very first OS..
Hindi is not my mother tongue either so idk about grammaatucal errors..but I felt you've communicated effectively...to me that's all matters..you've been successful..so kudos to you.
It was a heart warming and a light hearted os..perfect family moments..poor puttar everybody is have their moments except puttar ..😆😉..loved your ending ...😆what would've been Ramans reaction...🤣...do keep,writing...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good one ..

I have always dreamt of such family moment in yhm n so loved reading this ...

Short n sweet story.. would love to read more like this..

Raman n Adi complaining about ruhi n pihu towards ishita..casual family stuffs n finally raman's forehead kiss...perfect family moment ...

Keep writing

😊

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