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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ..RamKiJanaki..

Beautiful update, Srutha. 👏

Everything is explained so well. Loved the little flashback between Krishna, Rukmini and Satyabhama.

Do continue. Will Dharani and Shrikala ever meet? And does Neela Devi also take an incarnation in your fic?

Thank you Januuu 😳
I love the flashback as well 😉
Dharani and Shrikala will, when the time is right. Neela Devi does :)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: SenAnu

Sru !!! 🤗 Awesome !!!! 👏

This update was so lovely because it had that ever beautiful conversation between Shri Vishnu and His Lakshmi ... And my favourite lines :

"It is not like that my loves, it is the other way around" ❤️👍🏼❤️

Wonderful !!!! Its such a delight to read stuff like this ! 😃

Truly beautiful and mesmerising ! 👏😊

Anuuu 🤗
Thank youu ❤️
I believe that that is how Lord Krishna is.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lexy_rix

Great update!

Same question as Janaki - Who is Nila Devi in your fic? 😊

Thank you :)
Nila Devi will come when she should :)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Arijit007

beutiful chapter, sru.

Thank you Bhaiya 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

This was just so amazing Sruthadi! Loved the conversation of Kanha, Rukmani and Bhaama! It was all so pure and soo filled with love

Thank you Choti 🤗
Isn't that how He is? 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Srutha Didi , it is really an enchanting update, immensely endearing one ! The convo between Krishna , Rukmini and Bhama are delightfully enduring, it simply put the essence of the bonding between the God and his Goddesses in front of us , into our hearts ! Yes , want to know much more about Neela Devi .

As far as I know , the legend of Neela in Krishna's story states that -- Neela first questions the Gopis' devotion towards that maverick boy who steals butter from other's houses and who lured the housewives with his irresistible smiles and melodious tunes of his flute , how and why the world is adoring him for all those wrong reasons ?!!Later she too was attracted towards the captivating beauty of Krishna and his ' philosophical mischiefs ' and realized her love and enticed towards that seraphic smile of Syam !
This is not an authentic version I think , only poets used this for their purpose . So, Srutha waiting to see how you'll define her in your wonderful narration .

Thank you Madhuri 🤗
Nila Devi will make an appearance from Part 2, which will start soon 😳
That is folklore, and I won't use that. You will see what I use 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Nice chapter Srutha😊

Thank you Nonie :)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: babita..

Nice, loved it 👏👏

Thank you Babita 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
And, it has happened!
The last chapter of Part 1 is here. I have loved writing this story, and I hope you all have loved reading it.
By the grace of my Lord Narayana, I will be continuing this story with a brand new Part soon :) Till then, miss this story!

A REALISATION

Dharani restlessly moved on the bed, as she tried to sleep. Though her eyes were closed, she felt like she was in a dreamland, like she was going to see something different.

"Swami, you said there was something important to tell me before I split into three and take birth", said Devi Lakshmi to Lord Narayana.

"You know how you are Radhey love?", asked the Lord.

"I happen to, yes"

Lakshmi's sarcasm amused the Lord.

"You are spending too much time with me", mused the Lord.

"I am your wife. With you will I stay", said Devi Lakshmi.

"And this is the same thing Shri, Bhu and Nila said to me as well", said the Lord, laughing.

"I am Shri, I am Bhu and I am Nila Lord. You decided that", said Lakshmi.

"I did, my love", said the Lord. "Now, Bhu must be the most Radhey in this birth"

"Of course Lord", said Lakshmi, smiling. "My Bhu form will need Sita and Radha's strength in her for this birth"

"But there is the other thing also. The one with Krishna", said Lord Vishnu.

"That is why", said Devi Lakshmi. "All my three forms will have Radha memories, but Bhudevi will feel the most of Radha. She will be more Radha than the others, and obviously Bhama, as in this birth.."

"Krishna needs both in one. Well, I need both in one, but no difference", said the Lord of all Lords. "Bhudevi will have to become Radhey, more than the others, for this purpose. This time, Bhu will suffer the most, just as the literal Earth is going through suffering"

"Just as the Sky is suffering will you suffer", said Devi Lakshmi, smiling sadly.

Dharani woke up, shocked. She was Radhey? And what was that thing with Arya? And... her eyes widened as she took in all the realisations she had gotten with that one dream. She looked around wildly, taking in the forms of Lord Narayana, Lord Rama and Lord Krishna sitting in front of her. All three of them appeared, which made no sense as all were Paramatma, but yet made the most sense.

Dharani stared at the moon like faces of her Lords, and they stared back, love forming through the air, water rippling in water bodies, the trees dancing, flowers blooming at night, animals waking up and forgetting their enmity, instead rejoicing; all the Devtas feeling the Divinity of Love wrapping around them, giving bliss to all.

Suddenly, Dharani realised that she was in three forms right then, and that her Lord being present was changing things. She smiled, and fell into the loving arms of her Lords, revelling in their love, and giving as much as she could.

Shyam smiled.

The time to meet her was fast approaching. But before that, He needed to figure out how to get in touch with His other two forms.

He closed His eyes in meditation, a smile forming on His lips. The goal had been achieved!

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Posted: 8 years ago
Aww this is so beautiful
I know I have been missing on the review but it is as beautiful as yesterday
Keep writing
I hope pravha and mrinali realuze things soon

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