MG SS - Destinies Converge/Thread 1/ Part 13 /new thread on 23rd Feb17 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for the new story...
Interesting concept..
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Continue soon...
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Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

Congrats for the new story...

Interesting concept..
Thanks for pm..

Continue soon...



Thanks 😃😃😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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congrats for new story
interesting cs
geet is secretly in love maan

eagerly waiting for update
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Destinies Converge




Part 1
To Capture Her


He was a young man of 24 , magnificent in mannerisms and stature .He had everything he want ,but still there were deep hidden scars which have left him shattered ,despite putting up the tough exterior inside he was nothing but a broken man craving to be heard ...to be loved...





Maan Singh Khurana, the shark in the business world was a broken man within who searched for that inner peace he has been denied all his life. Despite that he will do anything to show he don't need anyone nor the love from a certain someone whom he loves earnestly ...but hates as well ...as he has been manipulated unknown to himself into hating her . Yes he hated her but a huge part of him desired her not for her beauty but for that solace he found in her for the first time he met . He wanted her like a man looks for a mirage in a desert , he wanted her but then he had his plans he could not let go of the revenge he seeks. He wanted to capture not only her heart which he knew belonged to him like the undeniable truth being despite his hatred his heart always belonged to her , but he would not let his feelings take over, but will get what he has been waiting for years , his revenge. He has mastered this tough exterior and knew nothing could break through but he forgot she has already made her way through that little crack and given him a glimpse of light which he desired. He has a master plan for her , and he will be implying it soon.



He reminisces about their first meeting ...she was only 12 then but still he fell for her at first sight ,not because of her enchanting beauty but the pure heart with which she bought him a chance to be near light ...a light in the darkness in which he has been pushed into finding escape , he was 16 then . He has started to learn a little bit about his business by then , though being very young he had a sharp intelligence and he used it to his benefit, that is what he was taught by the selfish world. Once he grew up and completed his education, he did everything to get the empire back his family built, even took the help of the underworld, though he still don't get how they left him so easily. He was a fallen angel in the business world but she was the light of his life , a light he seeks , a light he wishes to imprison for himself , to destroy it. He thought back to the meeting which changed his life.

Flashback
"Why are you sad", He heard a gentle voice call him. "Nothing", He tried to escape those those big doe eyes looking through him. She looked like an Angel descended from heavens just for him. He built that possessiveness just seeing her for the first time. "Come on", She pulled him up dragging him to the beautiful fountain outside her garden. "Here look around you . The beauty of life is in little things, people may be surrounded by riches but in all that everyone looks for peace but when I come here and look at all the mother nature gave us it makes me happy and I get that peace", She smiled. He smiled looking at her smile. "See you are smiling yayyy , I'm so happy to have you smile. Please whenever you feel low think about our meeting today. I'm sure you will be able to smile ", She said forwarding her hand which he took . They talked about their about their dreams never knowing what a dark future the destiny beholds for them.

Present
At that time he did not know the cause of his miseries was her family but nonetheless he always seek that missing light in her . Her smile is still fresh in his mind. Wherever he goes it goes with him . He wants her but he wanted to hate her too. His life has been too dark that her light was lost in that darkness or so he thought.Ever since that day to the present , he still craves for her not only for the light but also a way to fulfill his revenge . The smile was now gone and his expressions again changed into that of a man who was blinded by revenge . He looked at the invite in his hand ...her 20th birthday ...the day he has been waiting for .Making up his mind for the same he sought out a way to capture her in his clutches where she wont b able to escape from . He knew she liked him as well so it was more than a welcoming chance for him. He never wanted to miss this welcoming opportunity. He thought of his plan and smirked, "You will be mine now."



The object of his affection as well as revenge had grown up to a beautiful young maiden , a gentle yet a strong willed woman .Geet Handa- an innocent young maiden was one of the women, men would kill to get.






She was eagerly waiting for her birthday as well to meet that forgotten stranger she met on her 12th birthday ,there was something that pulled her to him. Intrigued by her thoughts she found out about him only to know about his heritage and growing popularity which has made him the top entrepreneur and also the most desired bachelor ,whom she secretly wishes to marry herself ."I hope I get to meet him again . I hope he recognizes me, it surely has been long",She smiled at her innocent thoughts unaware of what was coming her way.Smiling at her thoughts, she slept unknown to her that she should be careful what she wished for as this one wish of hers will change the course of her future.


So Here's the first part , please do give your honest reviews 😃😃


Precap- The Game starts
Edited by pixelflower620 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi thanks 4 updating! Magnificent update! superbly written! Maan is nw 24 n successful n has everything bt love! he has been through a lot! he seeks revenge frm Geet cos of her family! he recalls their first meeting! she is so sweet n innocent! Maan want her 2 exact his revenge! she thinks abt him! She wants 2 meet him! he is invited 2 her bday! Geet is so innocent! hope Maa realizes that! update soon! 👏⭐️😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 updating! Magnificent update! superbly written! Maan is nw 24 n successful n has everything bt love! he has been through a lot! he seeks revenge frm Geet cos of her family! he recalls their first meeting! she is so sweet n innocent! Maan want her 2 exact his revenge! she thinks abt him! She wants 2 meet him! he is invited 2 her bday! Geet is so innocent! hope Maa realizes that! update soon! 👏⭐️😊



Thanks buddy ...I was going to send pms just now ...😃😃😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mindblowing start...
totally loved it...
sooo Maan loved her and at same time want to hate her tooo...
loved their past meeting...
Maan is ready for revenge...
poor Geet is Excited to meet him...
he is invited in her Birthday party tooo...
hope he didn't spoils her birthday badly...
looking forward for their first meeting after long wait...
Excited for next part...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hmmm seems interesting
Maan in revenge mode
Geet's innocent wish will be fulfilled soon
Continue soon
Waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm! read n commented already! cld nt wait 4 pm!😊

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