The Black Heiress {read n review} - Page 2

Black Heiress [intro]

ok guys here's the intro of the characters that are my own creations or taken from shows

***note- i changed the thing about sirius knowing he has a daughter so that has changed he does not know that he has a kid and who it is until when he meets renne plz remember this k***

Renne Black Royalle- the main character of our story.... she has layered black hair and grey eyes.... she has soft but sharp features.... she is tall at 5'9.... has athletic body and figure of a model.... she can be sweet/kind one minute and mean/cold the next.... she is 18 years old.... she is an artist/businesswoman/teacher.... she hates her biological father but soon that will change.... she is best friends with sonia kapoor and jay bakshi.... and thinks of them as her brother and sister.... more will be told in the story

Sonia Kapoor- renne's best friend.... she has shoulder length brown hair and dark brown eyes.... she is small but athletic.... she has soft features.... is tall as renne at 5'9.... has a figure like renne.... she is also 18 years old.... has known renne and jay since birth.... she is sweet/energetic/funny and can be mean/cold any minute.... loves her parents a lot but they can be too annoying at times.... loves annoying her other best friend jay.... thinks renne and jay as her siblings.... more told later in story

Jay Bakshi- renne's other best friend.... has hair like armaan from dmg and eyes are blue.... he is muscular and athletic.... has sharp roughish features.... tall at 6'1.... also 18 years old.... has known the girls since birth.... is playful/flirt/funny but can be mean if someone asks for it.... hates his parents.... loves annoying sonia.... thinks of the girls as sisters and loves them a lot.... more told later in story

Renne's Parents- Her mom, Priya, had one night stand w/Black after graduation resulting in renne.... she sent a letter to sirius telling him of her pregnancy but someone else replied telling her to leave him and his fiance alone.... she knew who it was that replied and left for India.... where she met Jacob Royalle and got married to him.... her and jacob had a son named Rohan two years after renne's birth.... another girl a year after rohan called tia.... and twins six years after tia called tania and tanasha.... priya and jacob died five years ago

Sonia's Parents- Piyana and Vikesh.... met in school.... fell in love.... got married after graduating.... they only had Sonia.... treat Renne, her siblings, and Jay as their own kids.... really sweet, kind, rich, popularly known.... Piyana has brown hair, brown eyes, 5'6, petite figure.... is a fashion designer.... Vikesh is tall at 6', muscular, black hair and brown-black eyes.... is a businessman.... more later in story

Jay's Parents- Gayatri and Jayant.... arranged marriage.... no love only business.... arrogant, mean, cruel.... lousy parents.... ignore Jay for their older son Piyush.... business owners.... don't care what Jay does.... hate Renne and Sonia for some reason, Renne more for business reasons.... more later in story

sorry guys but thats all i can type right now because i dont have anymore time and have to update my other fic too

did ya like it??? go down and review tell me what u think and my mistakes if there any! plz do reply as it encourages me to write thank you

hey guys did u not like the intro???

Originally posted by: *Jane*

It sounds great, just not my cup of tea, as I prefer reading particular ships then anything else, OC's aren't exactly my thing (unless they're side characters).
You've done a great job in character development, though. 👏

Thanks the oc is not going to date harry/ron or anything like that she's gonna get ron/hermoine and ginny/harry together and fall in love blaise zabani so im not going to ruin the ships that are usually together so relax about that she's the main character of the story because im trying to show the relationship of a father and a daughter and the realtionship of best friends so relax and the others as in harry/ron/hermione will also be the main characters because something happened that caused oc to hate harry and the trio are trying to get the reason and will be main part of the story

does that make u feel better??

Originally posted by: krazychik92

Thanks the oc is not going to date harry/ron or anything like that she's gonna get ron/hermoine and ginny/harry together and fall in love blaise zabani so im not going to ruin the ships that are usually together so relax about that she's the main character of the story because im trying to show the relationship of a father and a daughter and the realtionship of best friends so relax and the others as in harry/ron/hermione will also be the main characters because something happened that caused oc to hate harry and the trio are trying to get the reason and will be main part of the story

does that make u feel better??

Originally posted by: *Jane*

🤔 That's... not exactly what I meant. I only ever read fics that have the ships I prefer (ie. Harry/Draco is a must, even if they're only a side couple), not necessarily canon ships. Most authors tend to warn for any slash content as same-gender couples don't exactly go over well with some people. Since there wasn't a mention of any slash content, I assumed no Harry/Draco (which was right).

It's not your story, it's just a matter of preference. I can't seem to swallow (unless it's a very small, one paragaraph fic) anything else. I've tried... 😵🤢
I'm very picky when it comes to chaptered fics. 😳 sorry.
I just figured, I'd take a look see and review this first installment as it's just character profiles.

oh u meant harry/draco?? i thought u meant harry/ginny and hermoine/ron. honestly i prefer harry/draco over harry/ginny😉 but i thought that ppl here didn't like slash thats y i changed my plans😭 it was originally meant to be harry/draco, hermoine/ginny, ron/nott, and blaise/oc😃 but i thought ppl didn't like slash here so i changed my plans😕 lol but now i know that its ok for me to do that so i'll do wat i originally planned k? so now the pairing will be harry/draco, ron/theo, hermoine/ginny and blaise/oc! i hope now u'll be able to read the story now k?😊

Originally posted by: krazychik92

oh u meant harry/draco?? i thought u meant harry/ginny and hermoine/ron. honestly i prefer harry/draco over harry/ginny😉 but i thought that ppl here didn't like slash thats y i changed my plans😭 it was originally meant to be harry/draco, hermoine/ginny, ron/nott, and blaise/oc😃 but i thought ppl didn't like slash here so i changed my plans😕 lol but now i know that its ok for me to do that so i'll do wat i originally planned k? so now the pairing will be harry/draco, ron/theo, hermoine/ginny and blaise/oc! i hope now u'll be able to read the story now k?😊

Originally posted by: sumera siddiqui

nice intro...liked it....i'm eagerly waiting 4 da next chap.....update asap 😊

thnx im trying but im more into my other fic at this moment but i'll try to update as soon as possible