Delhi mein mili - SUKOR SS Completed - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
So cute.. loved their romantic scenes.. flirty Suraj is my favourite.. hope something like this we can see in serial too😆
Tfs awesome one .. update nxt part..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
Awww...That was so cute😳
Imli as always Kabaab mein haddi..😡

Waiting for the next chapter😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
Great job Maithu!! Awesome update...sukor scene was Khoya khoya Suraj...loved it. Please continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
nice upt
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@BreakingBlue
Thanks a lot dear,
Suraj is just unique with all his Characteristics.

@Sri
Me too love Suraj's flirty side!
Happy that u like it!
Hope the same dear!

@LetzLiveOurLyf
Thank u!
U will know if it's Imli or not in the next update!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@chotu
Thank u dear!
Want to see him like this on screen!

@sriVidya
Thank u!
Will try to update it soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
Hi friends,

Here is the next part of this serie, part 3!
Hope I will not disappoint u!

Link for Part-2

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Seeing the caller name marked as "Didi", instead of giving the cell to Chakor, who was asking to giver her cell while extending her right hand toward Suraj, he just attended the call starting "Bhagya di, How are you?"

After few seconds of silence in the room and over the phone which made the situation as stressed one, the voice over the phone spoke "Suraj!" with a little break "Fine & you? How is mother?"
With little hesitation, Suraj said "Fine di! Mom wants to meet you di!"

All this while, Chakor was just staring at her Pati Dev talking with her sister or his sister after all these years. On one hand, she feels happy that her Bhagya di will feel happy to speak a least with one of her family member, on the other hand, questions arises on her head about why he didn't even try to contact his sister a long before or why didn't he ask me about her since last 8 moths...

"I will meet mom when possible.!' Saying this the silence again spread both side of the conversation, Suraj turned towards Chakor who was standing on his left and gave phone to her and went inside bathroom taking his blue jeans, white tee-shirt and brown jacket.

Few minutes passed and he came out bathroom changed in his usual and saw Chakor seated on the couch with a lost expression!

To gain Chakor's attention, he imitated cough and it had effect on her. She suddenly turned and said "If you are not feeling well, we will meet them some other day!". All she wanted now is to irritate him to know the sudden affection for his sister or to pull his legs.

By the how come she understood him so well?
Their bond has become as stronger as a diamond that only they can break it or remold it.
As said, actions and silence speaks 1000 things than a single word, Chakor and Suraj don't need words.

"Chakor, I'm fine! Come let's go!" seeing a smile on the corner of her lips "By the way I heard you talking to the reception. Is there a car available immediately?"
She murmured "Does he have ears all over the walls or what?".
"Did u say anything?"
"Nothing! We will get a car in 10 mins!"

Closing the door of their room, they made their way towards the reception when they were stopped by few reporters.

Seeing them, Chakor took hold of Suraj's left hand for which he smirked, thinking "Natak suru!"
All reporters present there, started to interrogate Chakor with plenty of questions about her personal and professional life.

All she could answer is "Thank you for all your support and wishes. I will do the best I can to reach the goal! Training session starts from tomorrow and we are all happy about it!
Hope you all understand, I'm going out so will talk with you later. Thank you!" saying this she just pulled Suraj's hand and went to get car key.

Reporters on each side started to brief their content:
"Chakor's husband is here to support her!" Said one reporter
"Chakor is lucky to get a supportive husband!"
"Chakor's value for her profession and family shows how ..."

Hearing all this, Suraj went near Chakor's right ear and in a soft and smooth voice he said "You are really lucky to get me!"
Chakor feeling his hot breath on her neck, which made her close her eyes and remember the mangalstra scene in flashback.

Opening her eyes, she saw Suraj going to the parking area and followed him.

Inside the car, Chakor was telling the way when Suraj was adamant in turning on the radio!
"Suraj, if you want to go, listen to me!" saying this an angry Chakor try to turn off the radio.
"I can hear you well even with radio on!" screaming on top of his voice while turning on the FM!

And there goes a small game of Turning-On / Turning-Off the radio until their hands get touched and current passed through their body.

With their eyes sparking miracles and the silence inside the car, the moment made them be in their own world of magic until they were disturbed by the car which started to slow down with a jerk.

Coming back to the reality, they made themselves comfortable and Suraj drove the car close to the side walk.
Suraj get out of the car and opened the car hood to check the problem while Chakor got down to feel the fresh air.

Minutes passed and the weather started to change.
Few droplets of rain started to fall and Chakor with a big smile started to play with it ignoring the car problem and Suraj's sight on her.

Seeing her like this, he murmured "She is a child in disguise of women!"
As if she felt Suraj talking to her, she turned and asked "Did you call me!"
"No!" accompanied with hand gestures.

After few seconds of silence to hear the music made by droplets of rain, he spoke up : "I think we have to wait inside the car until the rain stops."
"If you want, you sit inside the car, I'm going to enjoy the rain! And then we can walk up to Bhagya di's house, it will take only 20 mins!"
"If you say, no problem!" Saying this he went inside the car and turned on the headlights and radio.

Suraj who was listening to soft and sweet love songs resting his head with closed eyes, opened them to catch the glimpse of Chakor who still enjoying the rain is fully wet with he head facing upwards and headlights focusing on her.

Suraj mesmerized by his "Jungli Bili"'s beauty, couldn't hold on in his seat so get out of the car and went toward his wifey. Chakor who was enjoying the rain, turned to find driver seat empty, so turned to other side to find Suraj, fully wet, standing there, staring at her with just few inches of gap, decreasing with each step of Suraj.

As they were close to each other, Chakor stopped to feel the rain falling on her as his eyes got the power to make her feel his presence all over body. The moment their eyes met, she could feel his untold words. He took his right hand up to her rose chin, with that touch, she felt the current pass through her body and closed her eyes.

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Thanks for reading friends!
Hope u liked it!

Link for Part-4

- Maithili


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Posted: 8 years ago
#28
Nice update.
Sukor moments were too good. Why did u stop at such a moment. I was abt to go in SuKor land nd u hv to put a brake on my imagination.
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Lovely update Maithu! 😳
And I agree, why did you stop at such a point? I was just pressing the accelerator and then you ended it and i tumbled and fell off. 😭
But loved it! Do update soon! 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Sanavi

Nice update.
Sukor moments were too good. Why did u stop at such a moment. I was abt to go in SuKor land nd u hv to put a brake on my imagination.
Plz continue soon

Thank u dear!
I didn't wanted to have the same routine wala rain scene so that's y! Sorry for that😭

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