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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: BreakingBlue

Lovely update Maithu! 😳

And I agree, why did you stop at such a point? I was just pressing the accelerator and then you ended it and i tumbled and fell off. 😭
But loved it! Do update soon! 🤗

Thank u Akhi!
Will update it soon!
Sorry for putting the break there!😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi friends,

Here is the next part of this serie, part 4!
Sorry for the late update!

Recap :
On their ways to Bhagya's house, their car broke down and it's raining. Suraj mesmerized by Chakor's beauty moved up to Chakor...

Link for Part-3

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Whenever there were contact between them :
- holding their hands
- wildness during confrontation
- ...
there were revenge, anger and care but not the feeling they are exploring now!

The feel of his presence for her and her's for him was a need for both.

Chakor in her mind repeats "You are not doing correct! You are not doing correct..." sensing what is coming next!

Suraj in no control of himself, took his left hand up to her now red chin and felt the softness. Holding her like this made him feel the world he is in.

The rain is spitting by now. Suraj could feel the hot breath on his wrist.
Suraj slowly said "Chakor"

Hearing her name from him made her shiver which was not unnoticed by him. Slowly she open her eyes to see his sight still on her and his palms touching hers chins.

He continued "Sorry for hurting you!" and silence spread around them with last few drops of rain.

Chakor who was standing still brought her hands up to his collars, hold them as tight as possible and came near him with her face just few millimetres away from his face making him lose his grip on her.

"Just Sorry is not enough!" he felt happy that finally words came out of her but didn't expected this.

A lot of things was going on in his mind at that moment:
- What does she want?
- Does she need this & that, etc? and all the questions he could think about raised.

Seeing his questioning look and understanding his turmoil, she continued "Time will come when you will repay!"

Hearing her words, his expression turned incomprehensible as the world spin under his foot and he felt he had committed all the crimes in the world without realising that his world is only Chakor now.

Leaving his collar, Chakor took a step back from him and said "Let's go from here!"

In his mind "What does she mean? Is she still angry? I have to know what does she want. I can't let her go like this."

Chakor who was going towards the car to get her bag, felt her dupatta stuck. Feeling that it wasn't Suraj, she turned and was shell shocked to find Suraj holding her dupatta with his left hand.

Even before she could utter a word, he started to come close to her rolling her dupatta in his hand and he spoke "Tell me what should I do to get your pardon!"
Now she was even more shocked to hear him, Mr. Suraj Rajvanshi asking pardon and most of all it was from her.

She pinched herself to see if it's not her dream and come out the biggest shock of her life until now( => now because there will be a lot more to come in future).

"Time will come"
"Tell me now!" cutting her off
"Do you want to see Bhagya di or not?"
"No need to bring her in between! What should I do?" taking hold of her arm.
"Leave me and come, let's go to Bhagya di's house or else back to hotel!"

He knew very well that she is not an easy person who can be controlled. In contrario she knew very well how to make him accept her decision.

So he let go off her (arm & dupatta).

Taking their things from car and locking it, they started to walk up to his sister's house without uttering a single word.

Few minutes passed.

Arjun & Bhagya were surprised to find Chakor and Suraj (they supposed he must be Suraj seeing him with Chakor) at that time in front of their house fully drenched, so they asked them come in!

Once inside, they made themselves comfortable. Then Chakor discussed about her participating in Asian Games and Suraj tried to convice Bhagya di to meet their mother.

At some point, Chakor and Bhagya went to kitchen to make tea and have a talk.

While talking they landed on the topic of SUKOR's togetherness on reportage.

"So Chakor?"
"What di?"
"Are you happy with Suraj?"
"Di!" with hesitation of not knowing what to say, if she is happy being with him or not (she recalls few incident between them : her hug when she thought she lost him, their eye locks, Lauki-Metki scene and a smile forms on her face)

"If I'm not wrong, the smile on your face says you are thinking about him!" said Bhagya in a kidding way
"Nothing like that di!"turning her face away
"Chakor! Don't try to hide your feelings! It will only bring more troubles!" while taking the tea tray and giving a smile to Chakor.

On the other side!

After a long silence, Arjun asked "Are you still troubling Chakor?"
"She is the one troubling me!" replied Suraj with a stern face
"Never try to accuse her!"
"I'm not accusing, just telling my thoughts!" in no mood to have battle of words with Chakor's guru ji.

"Your thoughts on whom?" asked Bhagya coming there followed by Chakor.

"Nothing di, we were just talking about KN!"

After having tea and couple more of minutes of talk, Suraj and Chakor left back to hotel with Suraj thinking about his unfinished mission and Chakor lost in Bhagya's words.

Once inside the hotel room, seeing the size of those 2 couches of 1 seater, they were in dilemma of "HOW WILL THEY SLEEP NOW"!

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Thanks for reading friends!
Once again sorry for the late update!
Hope u liked it and it's not too dragy/boring!

Link for Part-5

- Maithili


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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Loved the rain scene Maithu. I am sorry for have not commented on last part. I didnt see. Thabk you for the pm.
I was dreamland imagining the rain sequence.
Please do update soon. Cant wait to know what happens next.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: ..chotu..

Loved the rain scene Maithu. I am sorry for have not commented on last part. I didnt see. Thabk you for the pm.

I was dreamland imagining the rain sequence.
Please do update soon. Can't wait to know what happens next.

Thanks a lot for all the complements!
Coming to the rain scene I didn't want it to be the typical dance wala rain scene.
As they are Suraj and Chakor, I wanted them to be different! Happy that u liked it!😊
I will try to update it soon!

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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Interesting update Maithili. Looking forward to more.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Great update, waiting for next one😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: _Namita_

Interesting update Maithili. Looking forward to more.

Thank u Anni Di!😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: SofiaIshVeer

Great update, waiting for next one😊

Thank u!
Will try to update it soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: maithu_

Thanks a lot for all the complements!
Coming to the rain scene I didn't want it to be the typical dance wala rain scene.
As they are Suraj and Chakor, I wanted them to be different! Happy that u liked it!😊
I will try to update it soon!


Yeah. I liked whatevaer you wrote. So no worries.😃
Will be waiting for your update.🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
awesome upt
waiting for next part
cont soon

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