Shivika /Ishkara/Rumya SS (PART 26 *NEW - pg 56) 3rd October 2017

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Hello people!!!!!!!! a warm welcome to all those reading my post..šŸ¤—M Priya Patkar..😃Well, m new to this forrum (or rather to IF) this is my 1st post..well m kinda excited..n I hope m welcomed to ISHQBAAZ forum..Have tried writtng some stuff..hope u guys will like it..do let me know..

Guys m writing a Shivika /Ishkara/Rumya SS..the story is completely different than original ishqbaaz..only character are similar with little changes..i hope u guys will like my story..m updating the CS..

Character Sketch (CS)

Shivaay Kapoor- A sweet and caring son.A trustful friend.A strict professor.A passionate lover.A man, who had a grt yet difficult childhood. Has a big secret that even he doesn't knows.

Omkara Singh Oberoi-A shy guy.Loves listening music.A wonderful friend and brother.Doesn't believe in love, yet will fall madly in love. A brilliant student.Loves his family a lot. Doesn't have many friends.

Rudra Singh Oberoi- Modern guy.Loves himself and his brother the most.Hates studying.Has many friends.Looks handsome.Plus point of Rudra is he doesn't flirt with any girl and is waiting for his princess.Basically completely opposite of Om.

PS: OmRu are twins here.

Anika Agarwal- A bubbly, cheerful, street smart, (sometimes) a bitch.Loves her family a lot.Has limited friends.Has a crush on her prof. (Shivaay) which gradually turns into pure love.Has 2 special friends, Somya (her 3 am friend) Ishana (her bff).

Ishana Patel- A complete psycho (in funny way, ofcourse!) . Lives her life on her own terms.Loves Anika the most. (people think they are lesbo) Somya is her bff. All 3 are childhood friends.Falls for Om at first sight.

Somya Tendulkar- A sweet fat Marathi girl.Full of life.AnikAna are nothing without her. A nerdy.Likes Rudra but hides it from everyone. Loves her father a lot.Her mother died in a car accident.

(D)- Drashti Dhami BFF of Shivaay..loves him a lot..prof who will be loved by all leaving Anika and Ishana..

Daksh, Tia, Robin, Chubby, Romi, Riddhima, Priyanka, Ranveer, Dev, Rihaan are all buddies of OmRuAnYaNa.

Pinky Kapoor- Shivaay's mother
Tej Singh Oberoi, Jhanvi Singh Oberoi- Parents of OmRu
Saraswati Singh Oberoi- OmRu's daadi

Sachin Tendulkar- Somya's Father

Ananya and Akshat Agarwal- Anika's Parents
Sahil- Anika's younger brother

Disha bhen and Kantilal bhai Patel- Ishana's parents.

Plz guys, let me know that should I continue with this SS or not..😊 Fingers crossed..

Character Sketch

Part 1, 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

Part 8

Part 9(New Year Surprise)😃

Part 10

Part 11 a

Part 11 b

Important Note

Part 12

Part 13

Part 14

Part 15

Part 16

Part 17

Part 18

Part 19

Part 20

Spoiler

Part 21

Part
22

Part
23


Part 24- pg 54
Part 25- pg 55
Part 26- pg 56
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hey!! Priya..😳
i'm anya...😊
welcome to this forum...
seems a very interesting and different concept while reading the CS...
do continue soon...šŸ˜‰
Edited by itzanya32 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: itzanya32

hey!! Priya..😳
i'm anya...😊
welcome to this forum...
seems a very interesting and different concept while reading the CS...
do continue soon...šŸ˜‰


hiii Anya..
😃
thankyou 😳
yes, I'll.. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow it's interesting. Love this concept .Waiting for your next update 😳
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Originally posted by: Nohsin10

Wow it's interesting. Love this concept .Waiting for your next update 😳

thank you..will update part 1 today..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rinku95

Interesting CS
continue soon

thank you!!
yes I'll
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Part 1

In a big mansion, a handsome guy was sleeping in his room when his alarm rang. He got up in a jerk n sat on his king size large bed.

Guy: what the hell!!! Yeh mere alarm ki ring tone kisne change ki??

"meine", he heard someone n rolled his eyes..

Guy: kya O!!! kya ghandi ringtone hai yeh..shucks!!

Om: shut up Rudra..n get ready, hume jaldi nikalna hai..

Rudra: q? aaj kya hai??

Om: Dheradhun jaana hai..bhul gaya?? parso se colg strt ho raha hy..so 1 din pehle pohuche toh it will be better...

Rudra: oh teri!!! Haa..parso se finally colg..like colg dude!!!! Waise bhi bahot ho gaya tha yeh junior colg...finally, hum iss jhagdakhane se durrr jaa rahe hy O!!!! bas, mein daadi ko miss karunga.. anyway, mein yu gaya aur yu aaya ready hoke, tu mera w8 kar niche..

Om: u exactly have 15 mins..tu agar 15 min me niche nahi aaya toh dusri car se aa jaana..

Rudra: 10 min me aaya..

...X...X...

Girl: maaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Maa: hey bhagwan, dheere!!! Kya hua?

Girl: meri ghadi kaha hai?

Maa: saamne toh hy, yeh dekh...

Girl: aur meri perfume? Mera chashma, mera fav pen, mera mob..sab kaha hai maa????

Maa: tu na ek kaam kar Anika, Dheradhun bhi mujhe saath lekar chal...sada chasma aur pen nahi mil raha tujhe???? Kse hoga tera??

Anika: mera bas chale toh aapko mere shaadi k baad dahej k taur pr le jau..pr kya kare..itna bhari dahej koi nahi lega..

Maa: chup pagli...(n hits her head lovingly)

Anika: I love u maa, I'll miss u..

Maa: I love u too beta, n I'll miss u too..

They hug n cry when a lil boy comes running n joins their hug..

Boy: aap mujhe bhul gaye na??

Anika: Sahuuu..tujhe kse bhul sakti hu mein..aaja...tujhe toh sabse jyada miss karungi mein..

Sahil: mein bhi aapko bahooot miss karunga...math jao na di..

Anika: abh kya karu, jaana toh padega hi na...

...X...X...

Girl: a mamma, kidhar hy tu?

Mamma: suche?

Girl: kab se bula rahi hu tujhe, sunayi nahi deta?

Mamma: sunayi diya tab hi toh aayi..bol, kya hua?

Girl: meri packing ho chuki hai..pappa kidar hai? taxi lane gaye theabhi tak nahi aaye..jhaadi (fat@Somya) aati hi hogi..aur phir waha se meri logic queen (Anika) ko bhi toh uthana hai..

Mamma: tu aur teri do dost..3no pagal hai..pappa aate hi honge, tu aa aur nashta karle..chal jaldi..

Girl: aap, Ishana? Ishana ko pagaal keh rahe hai??

Mamma: na na..mein meri beti ko pagaal kse keh sakti hu??

Ishana: good..

Mamma: woh toh pagalo se bhi gayi guzri hai..

Ishana: mamma??

Mamma: aur nahi toh kya?? Bhagwan jaane kya hoga tere pati ka..

Ishana: kya har baar, har baat ko shaadi se relate kar deti hy aap..irritate math kar..

Mamma: oyye irritate ki bacchi, chal jaldi kar..nashta serve kar rahi hu, tym pr nahi aayi toh thanda hi khana padega..

Ishana: aayi..bas 2 min..

...X...X...

"Somya??"

Somya who was leaving her house heard her baba calling her n turned

Somya: hoo baba, kay jhala?

(ha papa, kya hua?)

Baba: dahi sakhar kon khanar?? Dar veli mala aathvan karun dyavi lagte tula..kasa hoeil tujha??

(dahi-shakar kon khayega? Har bar mujhe hi yaad dilana padta hai, kse hoga tera?)

Somya: sorry na baba, ghai ghai madhe visrun geli..

(sorry na papa, jaldbazi mein bhul gayi)

Baba: ghai ghai madhe or nervousness mule??

(jaldbazi me ya nervousness k wajah se?)

Somya: baba??

(papa?)

Baba: baba aahe tujha..tula nit olakhto..majha pasun kay lapavtes?

(papa hu tera..tujhe bahot acchese jaanta hu..mujhse kya chupa rahi ho?)

Somya: baba, nervous tar mi aahech..pan mala tumchi jaasta kaalji vattey..majha shivay, tumhi kase rahal? N main goshta manjhe mi tumcha shivay kasha rhanar?? Majha jaana garje cha aahe ka?? Nasel, tar mi nahi jaat..

(papa, nervous toh mein hu hi, pr mujhe aapki jyada fikar hai..aap mere bager kse rahenge? Aur main baat matlab mein aapke bager kse reh paungi? Mera jaana jaruri hai kya? Nahi hai, toh mein nahi jaana chahti)

Baba: aga rani, garje cha aahe manhun tar tula pathvat aahe mi..

(arre meri bacchi, jaruri hai isliye toh tujhe bhej raha hu..)

Somya: baba..

(papa..)

Baba: bagh Somya, tula scholarship milali aahe..tu jya colg madhe jaat aahes, tithe admission milne itka sope nahi..fakhta shrimanta loka jau shaktat..aani tula ha chance milala aahe..tu jaa, shik, mothi ho aani mag parat ye.

.(dekh Somya, tujhe scholarship mili hai..tu jis colg jaa rahi hai, waha admission milna bahot hi mushkil hai..sirf amir log ya tere jse hoshiyar log hi jaa sakte hai..aurtujhe yeh chance mila hai, yeh opportunity mili hai..tu jaa, sikh, badi ho aur phir lautna..)

Somya: ho baba..mi yete..

(ji papa, chalti hu)

Saying so Somya hugged her father, took his blessing left her house..

...X...X...

Ruda: chal O, exactly 10 min me mein niche hu..

Om: wow, wat an achievement..abh chal daadi se milte hai..

Rudra: chal..

They entered their Daad's room..Rudra went n kept his head on her lap while Om on her shoulder..

Om: daadi..

Rudra: hum jaa rahe hai..

Daadi: Dehradhun chale tum dono?

OmRu: jii daadi..

Daadi: toh puttar itne sad q ho?? Tumhe toh khush hona chahiye k aakhirkar tum dono iss jhagdakhane se dur jaa rahe ho..jaha tum dono khush rahoge..

Om: pr daadi, aapke bager..

Rudra: daadi, ek kaam kijiye, aapka saaman baandiye, aap bhi saath chal rahi hai..

Daadi: (slapped his cheeks lovingly) hatt, khottey da puttar..chalo jao..mein theek hu aur khush hu yaha..bas, din mein 2-3 baar phone karna..

Om: jii daadi..

Rudra: arre waah, hum hi q? aap bhi kijiye..4-5 baar...

Om: Rud..chal..

Rudra and Om hugged daadi, kissed her cheeks and left the mansion..

OmRu were sitting in their car..

Rudra: finally, hum jaa rahe hy O..m soo damn happy.

Om: haa..

...X...X...

Ishana: Yeh jhaadi kaha reh gayi?

Somya: aa gayi..

N b4 Somya could enter Ishana stopped her mid way hugged her parents, took her luggage and left her house with Somya been pulled midway out by Ishana..

Ishana: jhaadi, kha kha k kitni moti ho gayi hy..khichne bhi nai ho raha tujhe..uff!!

Somya: yeh kya tha? Ishuu..mujhe uncle-aunty se milna tha..

Ishana: milti toh hy tu humesha..aur aaj toh sakshat darshan bhi ho gaye tujhe unke..abh bas, apne ko Anika ko collect karna hai..jaldi beth..

Somya: tujha kahi nahi hou shakat..

( tera kuch nai ho sakta..)

Ishana: beth na..

In few mintues they reached at Anika's and picked her up..finally, they were going Dehradhun!!!

...X...X...

So, part 1 ends here..Shivaay's entry will be in part 2..or may be part 3..not yet deciced..plzz do read, hit the like button n comment..plzz ignore spelling and grammatical mistakes..THANKYOU!!

Edited by priyapatkar - 8 years ago
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awsm start...
all of them going to dehradun...it will be fun when they will all meet...
waiting for shivaay's entry...
do continue soon...
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Originally posted by: itzanya32

awsm start...
all of them going to dehradun...it will be fun when they will all meet...
waiting for shivaay's entry...
do continue soon...

thank you!!! 😃
yes..it will be fun!!šŸ˜†
yes it will be in part 2..
yes..
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Part 2

It was late night when OmRu and the gals reached Dehradhun, they quickly entered their hostel..took keys, entered their room n dozed off...

Next Morning

Somya was up early and got ready..they had to fill up the form, pay fees and talk to the metren...She b4 going out woke up Anika and then left..

...X...X...

After some tym..

Somya: thank you soo much ma'am!!!

She turned to leave and collided with someone..

"Oh, m sorry..aapko lagi toh nahi na"??

Somya: no no, m fine..aap toh theek hai na??

"haa".."well, hii! Om, I mean Omkara..Omkara Singh Oberoi"..aur aap?

Somya: hii Om!!! pleasure to meet u..mein Somya..Somya Tendulkar..

Om: ohhh..okk..nice to meet u too..

Somya: new admission??

Om: yes..aap bhi??

Somya: haa..mere saath mere aur 2 friends bhi hy..Anika aur Ishana..

Om: okk..mere saath mera bhai hai..Rudra..

Somya: twins ho??

Om: yes..

Somya: wow..

Om: chalo then, milte hai..

Somya: sure..byee tc..

Om: byee..

...X...X...

Somya: arre?????? Tum dono abhi tak so rahi ho??

Anika: arre toh uth k bhi kya karenge?

Somya: breakfast..

Ishana: khana? (she suddenly jerked up n smiled slyly)

Somya: haa..abh jaldi uth..mujhe bahot bhook lagi hy..tum ready ho jao..tab tak mein canteen kaha hai woh dekh aati hu..

Ishana: thank you Shommuuu...jaldi jaa, mein 10 min mein aati hu..

Somya: pagaal..(n left)

Anika: 10 min?

Ishana: hahaha..qki..(n ran inside the bathroom)

Anika: not fair Dokhli..mein pehle uthi thi..

Ishana: ro math..2 min mein aa jaungi..bas, mujhe mera towel, brush, paste, kapde aur soap de..

Anika: waah!!! Sab bahar hi hy??

Ishana: de na baba..

Anika: khud aakar le..mein nahi dene wali..

Ishana: soch le..mein bahar aa gayi toh kahi tu turn on na ho jaye..

Anika: kyu? nangu pangu hy?

Ishana opens the bathroom door slightly n exposes her face her bare leg n shoulder..

Ishana: haa jaan-e-maan..

Anika: chi Isshhh...kya tu..ruk..deti hu sab..

Anika gave Ishana her clothes, towel, brush, paste and saop..

Anika: bas abhi jaldi kar..

Ishana: itni hi jaldi hy toh aa..saath me snaan karte hai..

Anika: Ishana yaar...cheap baate math kar..

Ishana: bhagwan jaane kya hoga tere pati ka? Mein toh bas tujhe demo de rahi hu tere future ka..

Anika: hua?? 5 min hy tere paas..jaldi kar..

Ishana: bore..(n closed the door)

Anika: pagaal..

...X...X...

Rudra: O...yaar canteen kaha hai? kab se dhund rahe hy yaar...

Om: toh puch lete hy yaar..ek min...

Om: excuse me?

"yes"?

Om: canteen kaha hai?

"New admission"?

Om: yes..

"mein bhi yaha fresher hu..canteen sidha jaake right mein hy"..

Listening this, Rudra ran towards the canteen..

Om: thank you!!

"bro, tq kis baat k liye? Abhi hume saath 3 saal nikal ne hai, so formality n all ki yaha koi jagah nahi"..

Om shook his head in a positive way..

"waise, m Rehaan..n u"?

Om: oh! Hi Rehaan, m Omkara..

Rehaan: okk...waise woh bhaga woh..

Om: woh mera bhai hai..Rudra..

Rehaan: ok..chalo then, I'll catch u later..

Om: yup..

...X...X...

Ishana: kidhar hai tu?

"canteen"

Ishana: okk..mein aa rahi hu..

Anika: phone de..

Anika: Som..canteen ka rasta bataa de..

Somya told them where exactly canteen was n hunged up..

...X...X...

Ishana: haaye..pohuch gaye canteen..chal dekhte hy kya kya hai aaj breakfast mein..

Anika: chal..

Somya: kitna tym..mein khud k liye cheese sandwitch, Anika tere liye plain sandwitch..aur Ish tere liye Maggie, Frankie aur hum 3no k liye coffee order ki hai..

Ishana: jhadi, I love u..(n kissed her on the cheeks)

Somya: I love u too..

Anika: tum jao..jagah dekho tab tak mein sab lekar aati hu..

Somya: I'll help u..

Ishana: mein jagah dekhti hu..

...X...X...

Ishana was searching for place to seat when she saw a table n ran towards it..

Rudra too saw the same table n reached there..

IshRu reached there at the same time n kept staring at each other..

Ishana: excuse me, mein yaha pehle aayi hu so plzz..aap kahi aur jagah dekh li jiye..

Rudra: meine apni coffee yaha rakh di hy..aur (he sits) mein abh beth bhi gaya hu..

Ishana: arre..ase kse??

Rudra: I cant do anything now..plzz (n asked her to leave)

Ishana: (to herself) accha bacchu...mujhse panga le raha hy..abh tu dekh mein kya karti hu tere saath..yeh garam garam coffee nahi girayi na tere upar toh mera naam bhi Ishana Kantilal Patel nahi..

Rudra: khadi kya ho..jao..

Ishana gives him a villainous smile n walks towards him..

Rudra: kya kar rahi ho?

Ishana takes the coffee mug from his hand

Ishana: chal uth, aur kalti maar..yaha mein pehle pohuchi thi aur mein hi yaha bethungi...samjha?? Jyada hoshiyari ki na toh yeh garma garam coffee tum pr fekne mein mujhe mazaa bhi aayega aur jyada tym bhi nahi lagega..

Rudra: dekho pyscho..yeh coffe cold coffee hai..aur mujhe tumse darr nahi laga..so apni yeh dadagiri kisi aur ko jaake dikhao..

Om, Anika n Somya saw them fighting n rushed towards them..

Om: Rudra..kya hua??

Ishana saw him a suddenly everything stopped for her..

Anika n Somya shook her n she came back to reality

Om: umm..look, m sorry..aap yaha beth sakte hai..hum kahi aur jagah dekh lenge..

Anika: ok..sorry to bother u too..umm..

Rudra: Rudra..aur ye Omkara..

Anika: Rudra..

Ishana: ek min, koi kahi nahi jayega..sab yahi saath beth kar khayenge..waise bhi table 5 jan k liye hai..aur hum hy bhi 5..

Rudra: tum pagaal ho??

Somya: umm..Rudra..plzz, jaane do na..Ishuu aise hi hai..jhalli si velli si..

Ishana who was looking at Om dreamily stopped smiling n looked at Somya..

Ishana: jhalli, velli?

Somya: samjho jara..tum chahti ho na k Om humare saath bethe..toh chup rahoo.. (she wishpered in her ears)

Somya: umm..Om..plzz betho na..umm..lets start fresh..

Om: umm..

Anika: Anika Agarwal..

Ishana: Ishana Patel

Somya: Somya Tendulkar

OmRu kept looking at the girls n then looked at each other..Om shook his head positively..

Rudra: Rudra..Rudra Tej Singh Oberoi..

Om: Omkara Singh Oberoi..

Anika: cool..so friends??

Rudra: mein Ishana se friendship nahi karunga..

Ishana rolled her eyes..

Ishana: nahi mujhe koi interest hai tumse friendship karne ka..umm..pr mujhe tumse friendship karneme koii problem nahi..Om..right?

Om: (coughed) y..ye..yes...yes..

Ishana: toh number do..??

All: wat??

Ishana: abh dosti hogayi hy toh number exchange karne toh bante hai na?

Anika: chup kar..she is just joking..

Om gave a nervous smile to them n sat..

All had their breakfast n as soon as OmRu finished they left giving an excuse..

Anika: abbe ghochu, pagaal hy kya? Sidha sidha number?

Somya: aur nahi toh kya? Aate aate pehli hi jhagda kiya aur phir jisse jhagda kiya ussi k bhai se number maanga..wow!!!

Ishana: yaar..pr Om kitna handsome hai..

Anika: le, isse phirse pyaar ho gaya?

Ishana: iss baar saccha wala...

Both Anika n Somya rolled their eyes

...X...X...

"Hello? Yes D..bolo"..

D: kya bolo haan?? Kidhar hy tu?

"Mein? Bas nikal raha hu"..tum kaha ho"?

D: tumhare door k bahar..

"wat"? (n cuts the call)

"Door k bahar thi toh call kyu ki"?

D: mujhe na mera balance udane me bada mazaa aata hai..Idiot!!

"D"!!!

D: D k bacche..chal jaldi kar..

"Kar raha hu..2 min yaar"..

D: waise Shivaay, hum jaa kaha rahe hai? tumne kaha subhe jaldi uth kar ready ho kar mere yaha aa jaana..so here I m..plzz bataa na kaha jaa rahe hai?

Shivaay: Surprise hai..

D: kahi tum mujhe date pr toh lekar nahi na jaa rahe?

Shivaay: women!!!!

D: men!!!!

Shivaay: hum college jaa rahe hai..

D: what?? Like ssly? Colg?

Shivaay: yes..ssly..colg..abh chal..

D: this is so not done, mein yaha ready hokar colg jaane nahi aayi hu..

Shivaay: chill..mera kuch kaam hai colg me..woh hone k baad hum lunch pr challenge..phir evening ka show hai..tumhare fav Rk ka..phir dinner n phir ghar..

D: what????? Ssly??? Oh God, I love u Shivaay..

Shivaay: I love u too..chalo abhi..

D: chalo!!

Shivaay: women!!!

D: men!!!

Both of them smiled and left..

...X...X...

Part 2 ends here..i hope u guys liked it..do comment and hit the like button..plz ignore spelling and grammatical mistakes..Thankyou!!

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