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Part 11 (A)

The gang decided to bunk today's lec n thus Anika was waiting for Ranveer. Ranveer was about to enter their classroom when Anika stopped him..

Anika: aabhhaa..Ran..Ranveer.. (she fumbled)

Ranveer: kya hua? sab theek?

Anika: (jhoot bolungi toh pakdi jaungi, banda tez hai..kya karu? sach hi bol deti hu..

Ranveer: Anika? kya baat hai? jaldi bolo..ek kaam karte hai, andar hi chalte hai..come on. beth kar batao..

Anika stopped him n dragged him with her. Ranveer was confused by her action, he knew Anika would never do anything like this. This means there is something important that she wants to share.

Anika: Ranveer, actually..tumhara doubt Dev ko lekar sahi tha. woh ek number ka ____ ____ (dash dash) insaan hai. Priyanka ne galat ladke se pyaar kiya hai.

Ranveer saw Anika with a shocked expression

Anika: haa..tumhara dusra doubt bhi sahi nikla..Priyanka loves Dev.

Ranveer clearly looked hurt. But he controlled his emotions and looked at Anika as of he was not affected by this truth.

Ranveer: toh abh?

Anika: Darasal (n told him everything what Rehaan, Rudra and Somya had told them) so abh humne plan banaya hai k hum Priyanka k saamne Dev ko expose karenge.

Ranveer: I knew it. Dev!!! anyway, accha plan hai. Koi help lage toh batana..meim help karne ready hu.

Anika: mein jaanti thi, isliye iss mission me hume tumhari jarurat hai.

Ranveer: hume??

The gang came in front of him and Anika smiled at it, indicating that hume means they all needed his help.

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Ranveer: fyn, plan kya hai?

Rudra: good question

Ishana: koi plan nahi hai.

Ranveer rolled his eyes.

Anika: hume bas asa kuch karna hai jisse Dev apne aap qubool kare k woh ek number ka ghatiya insaan hai. Taaki Priyanka bhi bach jaye aur woh senior bhi..kya naam hai uska?? Nisha...

Ranveer: hmm..ek kaam karte hai. Rehaan, tum toh uske bhai ho. aur tum toh jaante ho hi k woh kaisa hai. n m sure tum dono ki bilkul patti nahi. tum usse akele me milo aur usse sach bahar nikal ne ki koshish karo. like for example usse kaho k tum jaante ho k Robin k saath joh hua woh uske kehne pr hua. aur tum yeh bhi jaante ho k woh mujhse (Ranveer) aur Ishana se nafrat karta hai. be so clean k usse shak na ho. normal baat karo aur usse yeh sab confess karne lagao. mein aas paas hi rahunga agar kabhi bhi lage k tumse nahi hoga toh mein aa jaunga. n baaki sab handle kar lunga. pr tumhe start karna hi hoga. okay?? bas normal rehna. tashan dikhakar usse baat karte ho toh waise hi karna. usse shak na ho bas yahi tumhari responsibility hai.

Rehaan: okay. okay. sure.

Ranveer: good. aur Somya..tum ek kaam karna, Priyanka sab se jyada close tumhare hai so tum kisi bhi bahane Priyanka ko seniors k katte pr yaani k terrace floor wale classroom laana. Ishana aur Anika u help her. see to it k Priyanka aye aur Dev ka confession sunne.

Om: plan toh bahot hi accha hai Ranveer. pr mujhe ek baat nahi samajh rahi, Priyanka Dev se pyaar karti hai. Dev nahi. so hum yeh sab prove karne ki koshish kyu kar rahe hai? lets just tell her the truth. baat khatam.

Somya: I understand tum kya kehne ki koshish kar rahe ho..but the thing is Priyanka bahot hi bholi hai. usse abhi se batana padega k har insaan accha nahi hota. usse uske safe safe, sab acche hai iss duniya se bahar laana hai toh with proof hi laana padega. m sure woh hurt jarur hogi pr ek bar sachayi saamne aa jaane k baad woh strong ho jayegi aur shayad independent bhi.

Ranveer: toh, mission start kare?

All: okay.

Ranveer: okay. abhi 11:30 ho rahe hai. So seniors k lec start huye rahenge. jaha tak mujhe pata hai, Dev aur uski gang aaj k lec nahi bethte, unhe lec bethne ko allowed nahi hai. so woh log unke katte pr hi rahenge. Humara break 11:30 ko hi hota hai. So Priyanka abhi canteen me rahegi. Somya tum jao aur Priyanka ko terrace floor k classroom lekar aao. Anika, Ishana tum bhi jao..aur ek baar Priyanka aane ready ho gayi, tum hum me se kisi ek ko msg kar dena..now go..jaldi, humare paas jyada tym nahi hai.

AniShYa left.

Ranveer: Rehaan tum mere saath chalo.

Rudra: aur hum? hum kya kare?

Ranveer: ek kaam karo, tum dono bhi chalo.

The boys also left.

--------X-------X---------

Here, Ishana and Anika were waiting for Somya who had entered canteen to bring Priyanka.

Ishana: tujhe pata hai Annu, 2 sec k liye mujhe yoh laga k Ranveer stalker hai. usse sab k baare me sab pata hai.

Anika: same pinch. pr kuch bhi bol, banda kaafi accha hai.

Ishana: chup!! ek hi pr firm reh. Shivaay jiju hai na, toh Shivaay jiju hi rehne de. Ranveer pe math shift ho.

Anika: Ranveer mera dost hai. mein usse pyaar nahi karti.

Ishana: matlab Shivaay Sir se karti hai?

Anika: pata nahi.

Ishana: Annu..tu..

n b4 she could continue on this topic, Somya came there along with Priyanka.

Somya: Prinku, tumne humesha sirf Anika aur Ishana k baare me sunna aur unhe durr se dekha hai na. so aaj meine socha tumhe unse milva bhi du. dono thode jhalli hai pr bahot hi acche hai.

Ishana: hii Priyanka..ksi ho?

Anika: hii..

Priyanka: hii..mein theek aur tum dono?

Anika: hum toh humesha hi theek hote hai.

Ishana: pr aaj nahi lag raha theek.

Priyanka: kyu, kya hua??

Ishana: thodi ghutan si feel ho rahi hai..chalo na kahi ase jaga chalte hai jaha me khul kar saans le pau.

Somya: ha chalo, Terrace chalte hai.

Anika: haa..best idea. chalo.

Priyanka looked confused yet followed them. Somya quickly msged Rudra that they were coming.

--------X-------X---------

Rudra: Ranveer, woh log aa rahe hai.

Ranveer: okay. Rehaan, tum ready ho?

Rehaan: yes.

Rehaan with Ranveer entered the classroom n OmRu hide behind the wall, while Ranveer hide behind Dev's friends so perfectly that no one could make out that he was not a part of Dev's gang. AniShYa along with Priyanka reached terrace floor n Ishana acted as of she was now feeling well.

--------X-------X---------

Anika: ek kaam karte hai, woh classroom hai na waha chal k bethte hai.

Saying so the girls proceeded towards the classroom. They were about to enter when they heard some noises. Ishana slowly opened the door so that they could see what was happening inside the classroom. Priyanka was purposely kept in front of the door so that she could hear n see everything.

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Rehaan: bhai. mujhe aap se kuch baat karni hai.

Dev: bolo. abh kya hua? (in an irritated tone)

Rehaan: aapne kyu Robin ko bowling karne di. usne team ko hara hi diya na. aapke wajah se meri insult hui. Ranveer keh bhi raha tha k bowling karne mujh (Rehaan) ko do. pr aap..aap kyu har baar asa karte hai?

Dev: purani baate dorane ki bahot hi purani aadat hai teri. dekh bore math kar aur nikal yaha se.

Rehaan: har baar asa nahi hoga. har baar aapki manmani nahi chalegi. aapko kya lagta hai, mein kuch bhi nahi jaanta? mujhe sab pata hai.

Dev who was sitting, stood up n went near Rehaan.

Dev: accha? aur asa kya jaanta hai tu? jara mujhe bhi bataa..

Rehaan: yahi k woh aap hi the jiske karan Robin ki itni bezati hui. aap hi k kehne pr aapke doston ne Robin ki insult ki. aap jaante the k mein bowling karunga toh hum jeet jaate pr aapko Nisha k saamne hero banna tha. isliye aapne jaan muchkar Robin ko bowling karne bheja taaki him har jaaye aur aap sab k saamne accha banne ka natak karke Nisha k nazar me hero ban jaaye. aur toh aur mein yeh bhi jaanta hu k aap Ishana se nafrat karte hai. aur joh uski taarif ki woh bhi dikhava tha. aap kyu karte hai asa?

Dev rolled his eyes

Dev: Rehaan, jab yum sab jaante hi ho, toh phir kyu puch rahe ho?

Rehaan: bhai, Nisha ek bahot hi acchi ladki hai. usse saachi me pyaar karte ho toh uska dil accha ban k jeeto. aap jiss tarah usse impress karne ki koshish kar rahe hy woh jhoot hai. jhoot k buniyaad pr rishte nahi bante.

Dev: oyye pakao chup kar. bahot bakwas kar li tune. mein Nisha se pyaar karta hu yeh baat kisiko pata nahi chalti chahiye. samjha?

Rehaan: aap ka kuch nahi ho sakta bhai. aap selfish the, ho aur rahoge. aap kabhi bhi kisi pr bhi saccha pyaar nahi kar payenge.

Dev: pakpak pakak..pakpak pakak..ho gaya khatam? abh nikal yaha se.

Rehaan: Dev!! aukat me raho. mujhe tumhe tumhari aukat dikhane pe majbur math karo. qki agar meine tumhe tumhari aukat dikha di na toh yeh joh tumhare pooch ban k ghumne hai na..tumhari gang, tumhe chod k chali jayegi. phir karte bethna pakpak pakak.

Dev lost it n hit Rehaan. Rehaan fell down n blood oozed from his lips.

Dev: joh khud ko nahi sambhal sakta woh kya mujhe meri aukat batayega.

Rehaan: Dev, tum sacchi me ek number k kamine ho. sab tumhare pith piche kehte hai, aaj mein tumhare saamne kehta hu.

Dev laughed.

Dev: Rehaan, meri jaan, haa mein hu kamina. aur mujhe yeh baat accept karne me koi sharam nahi.

Rehaan: Dev.? (Rehaan looked shocked)

Dev: tum jaan na chahte ho meine kya kamina pan kiya hai?

Rehaan got up to leave. He thought this was enough for Priyanka to handle.

Dev: sunn toh lo.

Rehaan: stop it Dev. jitna sunna tha jitna jaan na tha sab sunn aur jaan liya hai.

Dev: as you wish. mein bas tumhe tumhari classmate k baare me batana chahta tha. pr agar tum nahi jaan na chahte it's okay.

Rehaan: meri classmate?

Dev: yup!!! sunnoge?

Rehaan: kya kiya tumne Dev?

Dev: jyada kuch nahi. bas Priyanka ko kal raat hi propose kiya. aur guess what? usne accept bhi kiya. hahaha..idiot girl. mein bahot dino se observe kar raha tha, k woh mujhse attracted hai. toh bas meine kal chance maara aur dekho..teer nishane pr laga. Nisha ko paa nahi saka, koi baat nahi..Priyanka toh hai. thode din ghuma firake usse yeh yakin dila dunga k m serious aur phir...u know what I mean. uske baad tata, see u, sayonara. woh apne raste aur me apne. Infact aaj hum date pr jaa rahe hai, little bro. (n winked at Rehaan) dekha, yeh hai kamina pan. (Dev and his gang started laughing)

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Rehaan and all the gang members looked shocked. Priyanka looked blankly at Dev through the door, tears flowing down her cheeks freely. Ranveer knew, Dev was a bas***d, but what he said made him hate Dev. he knew Priyanka would be hurt. well hurt would be a small word. Priyanka would be broken. He couldn't control anymore n punched Dev on his face so hard that Dev lost his consciousness. His gang members ran away n OmRu along with the girls entered inside. Somya holded Priyanka for support.

Ranveer wasn't done yet. He saw a bottle full of water n splashed it on Dev's face. Dev regain consciousness n before he could say anything, Ranveer started hitting him very badly. The girls got scared, including Ishana. This was the first tym everyone saw the calm and composed Ranveer soo angry. His anger was justified. But then the gang had to stop him.

Om: Ranveer, chodo usse..Ranveer..chodo!! woh mar jayega. leave him.

Ranveer made Dev stand n held him through his collar.

Ranveer: mein jaanta tha k tum ek bahot hi ghatiya insaan ho. pr itne gire huye bhi ho yeh nahi jaanta tha. Tum ek ladki k baare me asa kse soch sakte ho? itni cheap harkat karne k bare me tum ne soch bhi kse liya? woh bhi Priyanka k saath? haa?? (he again punched him)

Priyanka who was crying till now finally went near DeVeer n stopped Ranveer.

Priyanka: Ranveer plzz, usse math maaro.

This shocked everyone. was she still supporting Dev? God no!! was the only thought everyone present there had in there mind.

Priyanka: tum apne haath kyu kharab kar rahe ho? yaha galti iski nahi, yaha sab se badi galti meri hai. k meine ek ase insaan pe asehi bharosa kiya, bina soche samjhe usse haa keh diya. mujhe Somya ne kaha bhi tha k woh ek bar sab theek se confirm karna chahti hai, phir bhi meine jaldbaazi ki. aaj meri iss halat ki jimmedar mein khud hu. bachpan se lekar aaj tak meine sirf galtiya hi ki hai. infact mein born hui yeh hi sab se badi galti hai.

Saying so Priyanka ran away crying badly. Somya went after her.

--------X-------X---------

Ishana came forward n slapped Dev on his face hard.

Ishana: aage se mere ya mere gang k aas paas bhi dikha na toh yeh thappad aur Ranveer ko yaad kar lena. aur haa, abh kuch aur plan kiya na mere gang k against toh phir..

Om: toh aaj toh bas Ranveer ne maara, agar kuch bhi galat karne ki koshish ki toh yaad rakhna, Omkara, Rudra aur Rehaan bhi hai.

Saying so the whole hang left a wounded Dev alone.

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Somya: Priyanka plzz meri baat toh sunnlo.

Priyanka: Somya tum plzz chali jao. mujhe akele rehna hai.

Somya: pr.

Priyanka: plzz.

Somya: okay. pr tumhe jab bhi meri jarurat ho meine hu. just call me, mein aa jaungi plzz. akele math rehna.

Somya turned to leave when she saw her gang along with Ranveer staring at her with different emotions. (u can imagine everyone's reaction)

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Somya: Priyanka ko akele rehna hai. let's not disturb her.

Anika: okay.

Ishana: hum waha..uss bench pr bethte hai. Priyanka pr nazar rakhe huye.

Ranveer: no. tum sab jao. Priyanka k saath mein hu. don't worry.

All smiled n left, as they trusted Ranveer.

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Somya: Rehaan, thankyou so much. ssly. (n hugged him)

Rehaan smiled n hugged her back. He had a satisfied face. All smiled leaving Rudra. He didn't like Somya hugging Rehaan but didn't said a word. as he had promised Somya he had to pretend.

Rudra: ssly Bro. you were too good today. chot jyada toh nahi lagi na? (n touched his wound)

Rehaan: no, m okay.

Om: still, first aid karate hai come on

Om took away Rehaan with him n Rudra smirked internally. AniShYa and Rudra looked at each other n Rudra smiled n dragged Somya with him.

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Ishana: Annu, mein keh rahi hu..pakka Somya aur Rudra ka chakkar chal raha hai. tune dekha na kse jal raha tha Rudra jab Rehaan aur Somya ek dusre ko hug kar rahe the tab.

Anika: haa, shayad se tu sahi keh rahi hai.

Ishana: waise, chakkar se yaad aaya..Annu, jab meine tujhe pucha k kahi tujhe Shivaay sir se pyaar hua hy? toh tune pata nahi kaha..iska matlab kya hua?

Anika: Isshu, actually.. (n told her about whatever was happening with her @how she got scared while Shivaay was fighting with the LT, how she felt safe hugging him, how she liked his mother, how she was seeing him everywhere, how she dreamt of him) mujhe kya ho raha hai Isshu?

Ishana: Annu, isse pyaar kehte hai. Tujhe Shivaay sir se sacchi me pyaar ho gaya hai.

Anika looked shocked n Ishana smiled.

Part 11 (A) ends here. I hope u guys liked it. Do hit the like button n comment. ignore spelling n grammatical mistakes. Thank you.
Edited by priyapatkar - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ShivIka..Ketaki

yes i m also from maharashtra, nashik

Okay
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Posted: 8 years ago
Feeling sad for prinku 😭
So mission successful 😃
Great update 👏
Thanks for pm😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nohsin10

Feeling sad for prinku 😭

So mission successful 😃
Great update 👏
Thanks for pm😳


i know, bichari, galat ladke se pyaar kar bethi.
yup!! all thanks to Ranveer, Rehaan, AniShYa, OmRu
thankyou!! 😃
u're welcome
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Posted: 8 years ago
So Anikka realized her feelings for Shivaay . ... But Shivaay's realisation part will remain unfold ... Mission successful and issu and anuu conversion portion was really good...👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
superb update...
akhir kaar dev ka sach sabh ke saamne aa hi gaya...poor priyanka...I'm really feeling bad for her...rehaan ne bahut accha acting ki...if anyone had not stopped ranveer he would have definately killed Dev...
I hope ki priyanka jaldi thik ho jaaye...
Ishana is so jhalli she said annika to be firm at shivaay and not at anyone else...😆😆😆
and at last Ishana ne Annika ko realize karwa hi diya that she love shivaay...❤️
do continue soon...



love you,
Anya 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for pm...
Plzz updates soon...
I like ur update...
I like how you wrote ishkara scene...u described it so well
It was not there in this chaptert though i miss it...

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Posted: 8 years ago
Just read parts 9, 10 && 11
They were absolutely amazing && I like that you gave importance to all the characters 👏
I especially liked the Shiv'Ika parts ❤️ Sigh


Brilliant updates && Thank uUu for the p.m's 🤗
Wish I could give you a thorough response for each of the 3 updates but I'm a bit strapped for time at the moment 😭
Buhhht hopefully I can come back and edit his comment 😳



-Shan'e
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: chandrimab05

So Anikka realized her feelings for Shivaay . ... But Shivaay's realisation part will remain unfold ... Mission successful and issu and anuu conversion portion was really good...👏


she hasn't, she is still confused.
yes. Mission got successful.
They have that kind of trust in between them. that is why, Anika could share her dream with Ishana.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: itzanya32

superb update... thankyou!!
akhir kaar dev ka sach sabh ke saamne aa hi gaya...poor priyanka...I'm really feeling bad for her...rehaan ne bahut accha acting ki...if anyone had not stopped ranveer he would have definately killed Dev... Priyanka is to naive for todays world. she really needed a reality check. rehaan is good, but u know he is kind of extra sweet. Ranveer loves her na..so it was natural for him to react like this.
I hope ki priyanka jaldi thik ho jaaye...ranveer hai na..kar dega woh theek.
Ishana is so jhalli she said annika to be firm at shivaay and not at anyone else...😆😆😆 hahahha..😉😉😉
and at last Ishana ne Annika ko realize karwa hi diya that she love shivaay...❤️ realize hua nahi na abh tak. she still is confused.
do continue soon... yes.i'll


love you,
Anya 😳

love u too,
Priya 😳😳

Edited by priyapatkar - 8 years ago

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