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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
hi thanks 4 da pm n awesome poem! well written
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mahi Di ..
mujhe Sad hona nahi aata . to Kya
samjhu kaise ...
Haan but trust issues to solid wali hai Mujhe ..
isliye ..
I don't explain others ..
usme sadness hurt sab chupate . hai Mujhe
but..
I don't care for them ...I don't pretend happy for them ...
Mujhe sad hone ke reasons kam lagte hai..
Genuinely happy rehti hu ..😆
Dusre world aapko samjhta nahi hai..
Kisi ka experience ..
dusro ke liye story lagti hai..
Apni feelings ka mazak kyu banana ..
unse share karke ...
Waise itna long comment
thik hai..
I hope . Deep Is fine with this comment...
Kisi ko apko ko sad karne ki opportunity
mat do..
Yaar ..
You need yourself to be who you want ..

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: nitika20

Mahi Di ..
mujhe Sad hona nahi aata . to viewwR]samjhu kaise ...
Haan but trust issues to solid wali hai Mujhe ..
isliye ..
I don't explain others ..
usme sadness hurt sab chupate . hai Mujhe
but..
I don't care for them ...I don't pretend happy for them ...
Mujhe sad hone ke reasons kam lagte hai..
Genuinely happy rehti hu ..😆
Dusre world aapko samjhta nahi hai..
Kisi ka experience ..
dusro ke liye story lagti hai..
Apni feelings ka mazak kyu banana ..
unse share karke ...
Waise itna long comment
thik hai..
I hope . Deep Is fine with this comment...
Kisi ko apko ko sad karne ki opportunity
mat do..
Yaar ..
You need yourself to be who you want ..





thanks for your comment dear, every one got their own point of view , I only write what is coming from my heart may god bless you all the happiness
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
awesome poem
loved it dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: deep002





thanks for your comment dear, every one got their own point of view , I only write what is coming from my heart may god bless you all the happiness



SIS YE TORNATO HAI ( I KNOW MAIN SPELLING GALAT liKHA )

JO MIND MAIN HAI BOL DETI HAI ...BUT DIL KI SAAF HAI
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mahimaan




SIS YE TORNATO HAI ( I KNOW MAIN SPELLING GALAT liKHA )

JO MIND MAIN HAI BOL DETI HAI ...BUT DIL KI SAAF HAI



Hehe .. Deep tumhare heart me sad ideas aa rahe hai ..
Mere tarafse .. thodi ..
happiness apne liye maang leti yaar .. God se..
aapko jyada zarurat hai..
Main pray karti ..
but I do not find itnecessary to ask God who almost ..
Live me and.. Do everything for me..
Thinking that you are alone is
not Right for me ..
Mere kuch kehne ki wait nahi karte woh mujhe dene ke liye ...Experience hai..
He is always . there even in secrets...

Mahi Di aap mazak uda rahe ho???mera Kya!!! !
[Oo]
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
The best lines to this poem

kagz dost hai aisa jisse kabhi kuch choopayia nhee


For deepa

Hai chopa ( hide) k rakha hai
Jazbo k k dil mein samya hai uskkey woh
Batna nahi hai duniya ko

Par kabhi kabhi lafz dil k kagaz par likh deti hai woh


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Posted: 8 years ago
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wonderful poem @deep002
written with dil ki kalam se..
even I liked the Kagaz dost hai lines most, that lets the heart to share its feelings..

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