Kaira SS - His Love Vs Her Trust Chp 8 - Pg 7

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Prologue

A boy meets a girl by the Holy river of Ganga. They have a rocky start but that soon changes when he begins to develop feelings of love and concern towards her. Making her not just the centre of his world, but regarding her as his entire world. Promising himself to give her undying love till the end of time, no matter what the cost. The question is will he stick to his word when the price of keeping his promise is his own life?

She meet him by her Ganga Maiya he was river rafting with his friends, she at once took a dislike for him, comparing him to a frog little knowing that the frog would one day turn to her prince charming. After ups and downs, misunderstandings and distrust she had finally come to realize what he meant to her. Promising herself to have unshakable trust in him this time. Will that change though, when he is accused of something unforgivable?

Love and Trust two words which go hand in hand. If you proclaim to love someone and do not trust them, then you have never really loved them. If you trust someone, seeds of respect and love seem to grow within your heart. But what happens when these two stand against one another. What happens when love and trust are on two different sides. Two soulmates stand against one another, will it be for themselves or for one another.

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Index

Chapter 1 - Page 1
Chapter 2 - Page 2
Chapter 3 - Page 3
Chapter 4 - Page 4
Chapter 5 - Page 4
Chapter 6 - Page 6
Chapter 7 - Page 7
Chapter 8 - Page 7
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Please please continue... this is interesting
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Janvi..
Whatever concept u took..
I always be there to read it..
Carry on...
Edited by .LovelyDreamer. - 8 years ago
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Chapter 1

He drived down the lonely road, in his head different thoughts raced, about his family, about his father, about his past, about her who he loved, about whether she would be on his side, whether she would understand him. He could not see where he was going, whatever he saw was blurred and unclear. He had no focus on driving, the alcohol had taken over him and suddenly the car he was in crashed against something, his head banged hard against the steering wheel and his hand hit the nearby window with such force that it partially broke and glass piece were stuck to his palm and injured him.

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Akshara was driving home, work at the orphanage had taken more time then anticipated, and it was late evening by now. The road was dark and lonely, she heard a little noise, very faint, she seemed unsure whether it had been there or not, than she heard it again, she stopped the car and got out. She looked around, then her eyes drifted to her car, just infront of her car was a little scared puppy who seemed to be making the noise, she smiled, picked the little creature in her hands to make sure it hadn't been there injured, when she was sure no harm had been done, she went on her knees and gently let it down and placed some biscuits on the ground for him to eat before he went on his way as she was about to stand up a bright light flashed in her face and her face exclaimed shock, seconds later she was hit by the car, the impact making her fall on the other side, rolling over between the trees.
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Hours passed by it was eleven in the night when, finally the family gave up on waiting and Naitik and Naira decided to go about and search for Akshara. Naitik called the orphanage as Akshara had messaged him that she had work there, but the orphanage authorities told him that she had left long back, nonetheless they decided to search through the roads that led to the orphanage hoping to find Akshara. Finally they came and spotted her abandoned car, they got out of their own car and went up to her's now noticing how damaged it was from the front. They gasped shocked and immediately looked into the car but saw no one in, the screamed Akshara and mumma over and over again but got no response. Naitik picked up a torch light from the car and looked at the right of the road and flashed the light infront of him. Meanwhile Naira ran forward on the road calling out for a mother a some distance away she noticed a car banged into the tree, the car was that visible in the darkness partially hidden between the trees but it's head lights flashing, she didn't recognize it but her heart thumped loudly as she neared it, she looked inside and saw the love of her life completely unconscious, she yelled his name loudly that was enough to draw Naitik's attention and he ran up to her. He was shocked as his eyes drifted to what she was seeing. He kept a hand on her shoulder in order to compose her, he then opened the car door and pulled Karthik out. Naitik and Naira took Karthik to their car and drived to the hospital.
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"What happened", the doctor asked checking Karthik's pulse.
"The car was crashed against a tree and he was in it", Naitik replied
"I think you need to report this to the police, since it is an accident case, it could be possible that someone else is hurt because of him in this accident", said the doctor clearly.
"We will call them, please save my Karthik", pleaded Naira.
"Okay", said the doctor and some nurses wheeled the stretcher Karthik lay on into the hospital room.
Naitik called the police and they arrived for investigation.
"You said that your wife's car was there as well where is your wife, wasn't she there?", the officer asked
"No, we tried to look for her but she wasn't any where around than we found Karthik, and got him to the hospital", Naitik replied
"We will send our search team in that area to look for your wife or clue we can get about the accident", the police spoke
"I will come along", said Naitik and left with police.

Naira's attention was completely on Karthik, she was silently praying that no harm would come upon him. She felt bad at him for not listening to her and continue driving, she didn't understand why did he drink and drive. Her heart was racing she kept on telling herself that everything would be well, but she was not too sure herself. She was drowned in her thoughts, all those moments she had spent with him till date were going through her head, she was too lost to pay attention else where. She didn't even notice the people going through Karthik's hospital room door.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oooh is the police going into his room?? Please continue.. all emotions are well explained.. this is really nice..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice one..👏👏
Update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for the previous response

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Chapter 2

"He is out of danger", the doctor said breaking Naira's thoughts, a smile appeared on her lips as the words left her mouth.
"Can I go meet him", Naira asked
"Yes but he is still unconscious but don't worry he will gain conscious by morning", the doctor replied.

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Naira went to his room, she looked at the person lying on the bed with all the love she had. She went up closer to him caressed his cheeks, she bent down and kissed his forehead, moved her lips to his hears and whispered, "I love you, don't ever leave me", a tear drop rolled down her eyes as she spoke the words letting all her fears out in that single tear.

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Naitik came to the hospital and told Naira that Akshara was found no where near that area.
"I called home as well, even at Maheshwari house but no one has any idea where Akshara is, the officer said they would question Karthik once he is conscious to see if he knows anything", Naitik spoke
"Mumma thik toh hogi", Naira asked
"Yes princess she will be absolutely fine", Naitik assured
"How is Karthik?", questioned Naitik
"He is out of danger, but still unconscious", Naira replied
"He will gain conscious soon", Naitik assured her keeping a hand on her shoulder answering his daughter's unansked question.
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Morning came, Naira wanted to stay back at the hospital but Naitik denied the request and told her to go back home and rest and promised to bring her back early in the morning as possible. But then got late as the police had arrived for questioning.

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Karthik gained conscience the doctors checked him and announced he was perfectly okay and could be discharged in an hour. Also told him not to drink and drive the drive the next time, which Karthik didn't understand at first, then he realized his friend might have spiked his drink as he remembered the different taste of the cold drink.

When Karthik was alone in the room thinking about how the accident occurred, he remembered the phone call and him driving fast, wanting to meet her thinking about her and than crashing into the trees to miss a passing car, he then felt something vibrate under his head, pushed his hand under the pillow and found a phone, he didn't recognize it. It vibrated in his hand this time, he noticed that the name which flashed on it read Karthik Goenka, so he picked it up wondering who could be calling.

"Hello", spoke Karthik
"What are you thinking how can Karthik Goenka call you when you are Karthik Goenka. Main Karthik Goenka nahi hun, I just saved this number by that name on the phone in your hands so that you pickup my call when I call you. I had taken so much risk to sneak into your room and place the phone there and if you hadn't picked up I would be very disappointed.", a mechanical girly voice sounded as if the voice had been modified.
"Who are you", asked Karthik an unknown fear gripping his heart.
"Someone who can take away all the happiness of the girl you love", the voice was now high pitched and manly.
"Keep her out of this, do with me anything you like, but don't harm a hair on her head", Karthik threatened but he was choking on his words.
"Don't worry I won't let a single scratch upon her, but I will take away every single person she loves, every single thing that she lives for, I will make sure she begs for death and she never gets it. Don't think I am just all words I have already carried my word starting with her beloved mother. Don't you believe me, why don't you ask your little lover where is her mother and she will tell you that she is missing, but I will tell you that she dead.", the voice said which was changed again it sounded deep, hollow and scarry.
Karthik felt himself gasping for air as the information reached his ears. He had lost his mother once again and this time she had lost hers too and she didn't even know it.
"I took away one I can take away more, her father, her brother, her chachi, her grandma, her grandfather, one by one. But you can stop me if you want. All you have to do is pay a little price. Something very small for the girl you love", the voice was now sickly sweet.
"What", was the only thing Karthik managed to let out lf his mouth, he still wasn't over the shock that Akshara could be gone forever.
"Your life lover boy. All you have to do is say that your ma'am met with an accident by your car. You take the blame and make sure you a death sentence or life imprisonment as a punishment. I want you away from your love and your death this is the only way I can assure it.", the mechanical voice spoke
"Why not just kill me first?", he choked on his words as they escaped his mouth.
"You would be out of this world but still in her heart, if I did so. I will ask you again, are you willing to pay the price", the voice replied again changed
"I will pay the price, but how do I know that you want back track on your own words", asked Karthik cautious.
"I think I will take her father from her as well and then you can decide", a deep thundering voice replied a chill would run down the strongest human's spine if they heard it.
"I will do as you say but if anything happens to my Naira or her family, I will make your life miserable", Karthik warned.
"Bye for now loverboy, any call on this phone you get will be mine and if you try any tricks, I assure you hell will break loose for your beloved.", The voice sounded a last time and the call ended.

Karthik lay frozen, his heartbeat raced faster than ever, he had no idea what just happened. The woman who had treated him like her Son had supposedly lost her life, the girl who he loved so dearly had lost her mother after attaining her love after seven long years. The worst was he had to go up and take the blame, he didn't care for punishment death or imprisonment didn't matter, but the tears that would roll down her eyes knowing her lover killed her mother is what scared him. Seeing the trust she has for him break is what made his heart thump so loudly, but he would have to do it. For Her.

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A while later Naitik and Naira entered with the police, who came along to question Karthik.

"Mr Goenka, Can you tell me what exactly you were doing on that spot and how did this accident happen and do you know anything about where Mrs Akshara Singhania might be", the officer asked
"I was going to meet my girlfriend, I was drunk, I was driving fast, suddenly I saw ma'am, I mean Mrs Singhania infront of me, I applied the breaks a second late and hit her before crashing into the tree", he said calmly Naitik and Naira both looked shocked as the words left his mouth. Naitik's look was murderous but Naira's was well focused, she looked into Karthik's eyes, it didn't hold an ounce of guilt, but exhibited pain and extreme fear. No matter what even if unintentionally ne would have been guilty of the crime and that would have reflected on his entire face, but not a single hint of guilt was to be seen not even in his eyes that mirrored the feelings of his heart. He was hiding something, she knew it at once.

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Will be waiting for your reviews.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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You have managed to create suspense very nicely.
Loved how Naira could read Kartik's face easily and guess correctly that something was up.
Will be interesting to find out who is behind it and their motive. Waiting for the next part.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Janvi, this is better than the original. I am loving it.. Please update soon.. I already got the chills that Karthik got, Update fast please...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Janvi.. My Jaanu
Superb dear...
As u always know I am fan of your writing...
semma update
cant wait for the next update

jaldi updte karna.. hugs

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