Yeh Andar ki Baat hai - Shivaay : FICTION (part-1)

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Hello Amis!

I am back. This time with the weirdest concept of posting thoughts, again!

This is my first ever Fiction. I have no idea, how much bakwas I am gonna keep throwing here. So, Ya!, just tagged it as Part-1 for now!

Enjoy or No Enjoy! Just read and Divert your mind from the on-going Khichdi in the show.

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Just Another Day.

Shivaay watches Anika leave and going home, as she has completed her work for the day. Shivaay keeps staring until she disappears from the main entrance and walks towards his room for a good night sleep. Well, that's what he wishes for.

Time 1.00 AM: Shivaay is asleep.

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Sending signals...

The Heart - Tring Tring...

Sending signals...

Receiving signals...

Signal received ... Eyes - Online

Signal received ... Hands - Online

Signal received ... Legs - Online

Signal received ... Brain - Disconnected

Signal error ... Mouth - Unavailable

Signal received ... Lips - Online

Signal received ... Stomach - Online

Signal received ... Ears - Online

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Stomach - *yawns* For god's sake Heart stop calling us for these weird conferences, look at the time it's midnight bro, what has happened?

Eyes - *flatters and stretches* Yeah bro, I am so tired finally had got some rest and these nerves are banging my doors again. Please don't tell me we are going to have the same discussion here like EVERY OTHER DAY. No Please.

Heart - *Worried* Oh Shut up You two. You very well know these discussions are so important for us to function properly tomorrow. And-

Ears - *Flapping* And! And we know how much ever we discuss and share the miss communications happening between us and the dysfunction of some of our fellow organs, we still can't manage to co-ordinate with each other EVERY SINGLE DAY.

Heart - Will you shut up Ear, it's because of you we are facing this problem.

Ears - Oh really! Who told you to go all bonkers every time SHE is near. What's with the sudden "DHAK DHAK" you have started with, that irritates us the most.

Stomach - Come On Ear don't blame Heart for that, it's not ONLY his mistake. Blame the Eye. It's gone out of our control dude. The Eye just leaves us behind when it sees her around.

Eyes - Oh hello, what do you mean by that haan! The Heart dances on fire even when she is not around, even if she is in another planet. SHE is Pretty, it's HER fault she attracts me. It's my job to stare at beautiful things and beautiful people. Do Not Forget bro, it's because of me you get a chance to dance at the relishing dishes in the dining table and restaurants.

Hands - Guys don't talk food please! Otherwise I will have to wake up this man so that I get to cook some food. Yummy!

Stomach - Dude I am full please No food. I need space you know exactly for what. The butterflies this man creates every time he watches HER. HE is asleep but still just like his office employees he has given me extra work of handling this over excited butterflies in my pocket. Bruhhh! And no extra dessert has he ever gifted me.

Hands - NO FOOD TALK PLEASE. I am trembling here.

Heart - Guys will you all just shut up for a minute. Do you have any knowledge what I am going through? I have lost my power and senses. This foolish man has given my senses and powers and all the authorities I had, to HER. Somehow I have managed to gather this little sense (thanks to the spine nerves) that I am here able to share with you all that I need to get back my senses to work normally like before.

Eyes - Oh! Man lucky you brother! SHE has them. Isn't it?

Heart - Shut up Eye. I know you are enjoying my state!

Lips - Obviously. Lol. It's because of Eyes after all, that you get to go all "DHAK DHAK" when SHE is near.

Heart - Nah! This man just divided and shared me with HER, because I found my hehehe *feeling shy* "mate" in HER. Bro I tell you she is so much better in functions than me. She has regular healthy exercises, all the stuffs which I ever and always only dreamt of - laughing, smiling, singing. Wow. HER heart has all that exercises done regularly. This man has kept me all working without the required treats. I am a bit defective because of this. I was sad Bro!

Eyes - Indeed, you "were" sad lol. Now you are all dancing and singing and beat boxing. All thanks to me. No body just gives me credits here.

Ears - Talking about not giving credits. Please count me in. I am the least credited organ here. *frowns*

Legs - Morning fellas. What is this conference call about? Is it the same "SHE"? Oh god say yes! I am all awake. I can take you all THERE. *Excited*

Heart - Guys, this isn't funny yaa. I need my other half and now I need HER's too. But-

Lips - But! Ahhh! But the Brain comes in between. AS USUAL!

Heart - *Angry* Errrhhhgg! DO NOT take the name.

Stomach - Lol. Enough of this Enmity guys! We all are fellow organs staying in the same body. Let's get back to the same old friendship.

Hands - Yeah man. Enough of this fights every day. I am kind of so feeling dizzy now-a-days.

Legs - Hand, you are just feeling dizzy friend and I am going all freaking crazy here. I am so over tired dude. This man makes me run in lightning speed whenever her legs are dozing off. I mean I don't mind helping but bro think about me at times.

Hands - Bro *shy* I am sorry but I kind of like it when HER legs doze off you know *blushing* I kind of even like it when SHE sleeps, oops! I mean faints. Hehehhehehe.

Heart - How shameless can you be dude, you enjoy it and I lose my rhythm. Bro my beats get skipped. YOU DO KNOW how important my beats and rhythm is for ALL of US to work and function properly and LIVE, right?

Eyes - Okay guys, Cut this serious crap. Let me tell you heart I can't help you much, She is beautiful yaa. I kind off just cannot control my powers when she is in front, HER skin, or maybe HER eyes, or maybe HER body, ok I don't know but something has the Eye magnet installed. It just pulls me out every time.

Heart - *in disbelief* Eye you have AGAIN started with your same ranting about beauty. Gosh! We have more serious stuffs to concentrate on. OH! The word "Concentration" reminds me of the Brain. SO! Again, hmmhmm, hiding haan, From me! HAH! No wonder - every time he keeps disconnecting. Fattoo.

Hands - Hey! Where is Brain by the way? Brain's little tail is also no-where to be seen. Lol. Both are busy counting currency and dollars I guess. BUT! HOOO! One Minute! Counting currency! HOOO! That's My JOB! Gosh... They are doing it without me! No-!

Legs - Take a chill pill friend. They can't COUNT money without you, but probably just discussing Money and Blood.

Stomach - Shush! Don't talk about blood. Dude you know already, Blood is the code word to charge the brain to 100%. It's a pact right. We don't discuss blood in our midnight conference calls.

Heart - Let me try calling the brain again. No-body other than me has the guts to do that. Huh!

Sending Signals...

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Tadaaa! ...To be continued until next time

Good Night Amigos! 😳


Love,

Pritha 😆😆

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geet.a thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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eee!!! i love this!!
so cute sa, simple sa, funny sa, but bohot pyaara saaa!!!!

<3

please write more!!
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This was "HEART BLOWING"

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I Love these kind of things.

Well done as a first timer 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh god!!
From where do you get such ideas? 😆

That was really cute and exciting!

Waiting for next!! ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its so adorable dear.plz continue soon.
In this terrible time,when heart is all time in dhak dhak condition with each and every new spoiler,ur fiction is a soothing blam.
Thanks. 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww this is just BRILLIANT ❤️ 👏
I love it, please continue.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: geet.a

eee!!! i love this!!

so cute sa, simple sa, funny sa, but bohot pyaara saaa!!!!

<3

please write more!!


😳😳 Thank You for your cute sa, simple sa, pyaara sa comment😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😆😆😆
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Originally posted by: hello_786

This was "HEART BLOWING"

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Ohh wow! Thank You friend! 😳😳

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