Past is Haunting.... Swasan TS (Part 2b)

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Hi guys, I have started watching Behad and I was totally inspired by the relationship between Maya and her dad in the show. So I decided hey if Swara's decision to leave Sanskar can be justified by Swara's past then that would be totally awesome and legit.
I am not gonna take credit for thinking of Swara's past as it may have a lot of resemblance to the actual show but I just wanna connect the two plots.

Background info: Same as the show. Where Swara leaves Sanskar for Ragini.

Part One:

Laksh is still missing, and Uttara's engagement plans are in full action. The MM family has been gathered at the baadi to review the plans. It was evening time. Sharmista and Shekar were in dida's house as they had decided to use Gadodia house for Swaragini's office. Swara and Sanskar had an eyelock, and it was broken by Nikkhil. Nik: hey swara, tu ja sara kaam hogaya hai na. Subha se yeh plans ke piche thi ja.. jake aram kar.

Swara looks at Ragini for confirmation, and Ragini nods in return. Swara smiles at the Maheshwaris and gets up and leaves. As Swara started walking towards Dida's house, she heard a pair of feet walking. This sound was familiar to her. Her eyes widened and sweat beads started forming on her hairline. She started walking a bit faster while clenching and unclenching her fists. She crosses the courtyard, and due to her nervousness she fell by the steps. Due to the sudden fall, a scream escaped her mouth.

This scream was heard by everyone in Gadodia house. They got up and started walking out to see what happened. Meanwhile, swara was on the floor. She heard the footsteps getting closer to her, and she started swallowing hard. She looked at her phone and decided to look at the reflection of the person behind her. With shaky hands, she held her phone and tilted it to see the reflection. When she saw the reflection, she gasped and dropped her phone again. She started hyperventilating and shivering. She slowly got up and slowly turned around. To her horror, she saw a man. This man will be played by Ronit Roy. After seeing him, her eyes started tearing up and she slowly started walking backwards with very hesitant steps.

By this time, the MM wasis were out to see the drama. They were confused as the brave Swara they always saw was behaving like this. She started mumbling incoherent words. AP gasped: Swara...
Nikkhil knew what was happening, so he ran to Swara and the man. He stepped in between Swara and the man and said: dekhiye ap Swara ko kuch nahi kar sakte. Woh apki custody mein nahi hai.

That man chuckled and scratched his head with finger and said: tumhe kya lagta hai... is duniya ka koi bhi kanoon mujhe rokh sakte hai apni beti se milse se... opps sorry sauteli beti.

Swara was behind Nikkhil and she was just looking at the ground and trying to make out silent words. She was also shaking her head while sniffing. Nikkhil: exactly woh apki sauteli beti... apke aur aunty ke divorce ke baad koi haak nahi banta apka us par.

Yes that man was Shoumi's exhusband, Adhiraj. Adhiraj was starting to get angry: tumhare parents ne yeh nahi sikhaya ke dusron ke matters mein nahi bolte...

Nikkhil was gonna say something, but before he could do so Adhiraj slapped him hard enough so that he hit his head by the pillar. Due to the pillar, Nikkhil started loosing consciousness. Adhiraj looked at Swara again, and she was looking at him with fear in her eyes. She again walked backwards and this time she safely hit her back her the door to Dida's house. Without taking her eyes off of Adhiraj, she used one of her hands to ring the door bell. With her back to the door, she used her other hand to slap on the door. She was breathing very heavy when she did so. No one opened the door and she became desperate to get the door opened. Sanskar was in shock. No body knew what was happening. Adhiraj took a step towards Swara and Swara panicked even more. She left the door and ran to Dida's window. She did that to create distance between them. Meanwhile, Shoumi finally opened the door. Shoumi: kaun hai. Itni baar koi bell baja ta hai kya.
She stepped outside the house and was shocked to see Adhiraj and Swara. She quickly stepped in between the two and raised her arms as if serving as a barrier between the two. Swara hugged Shoumi from back, and held on tight to her pallu. Sanskar finally got in his senses and said: maa yeh kya ho raha... swara itna kyun daari hue hai.
Shoumi: Adhiraj Raichand... Swara ke paas jane ki galti bhi maat karna. Is baar sirf uski maa hi nahi uska poora parivaar hai uske paas. Uske babba, uski behen, uska pati hum sab uske saath hai. Use tum target nahi karogay.

Adhiraj sighed and smiled: aww Sharmista... tumne tumhari beti ko manners nahi sikhaya kya. Apne step-dad ko hello bhi nahi bola. Such a rude child... I think tumhe punish karke hi sab kuch sikhana badega. Bilkul pehle ki tarah

After hearing "pehle ki tarah" Swara widened her eyes even more and she let go of Sharmista. She ran inside Dida's house and into her room. She shut the door and the window tight.

Whereas, Adhiraj and Shoumi were having an glare off. Adhiraj chuckled and sighed. He started leaving and he looked towards the door and said: I will be back beta... by that time learn some manners.

He shook his head and left. MM wale were just shocked as this portion of Swara's past was unknown to them.
Edited by LoveSana - 8 years ago

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OMG... it's awesome please complete it😊
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Dedicated to Purvi as she was the first to comment...
Part Two (A)

After Adhiraj left, Sanskar walked over to Shoumi and asked "kaun hai yeh admi maa... woh Swara ko kyun aise daara raha tha."

Shoumi sighed and she walked over to Nikhil. She turned his head to examine his wound, and she let out a hiss. Shoumi says "ek minute mein batati hon, pehli tum please Nikhil ko undar lajene mein meri madat karo... Aur ragini tum pani lao"

Ragini goes to get water, and Sanskar holds Nikkhil by his arms and supports him while walking. Sujata comes rushes to Shoumi and says "arrey ap kaisi maa hain... apki beti waha andar roh rahi hai aur ap Nikkhil ke liye pareshaan hain?"

Meanwhile, Shekar comes with Ayush and says "Misti... tumhe patta hai kya hogaya Swara ko. Woh rote hue andar gae aur darwasa band kar diya. Mein use bola raha hon aur woh darwasa nahi khol rahi."

Shoumi sighs and says "I know ke woh abhi is waqt baat nahi karegi... use mein kitna force karon woh nahi bolegi."

AP says "kya matlab nahi bolegi... woh humare ghar ki bahu hai woh iss halat mein kyun hai yeh pata karna humara farz hai... Agar use kisi se daar lag raha hai toh humari zimadari hai ke hum usse safe feel karvae"

Shoumi "andar chaliye"

Everyone comes inside. Ragini sprays some water on Nikkhil and he slowly gains consciousness. Suddenly he sits up and says "Aunty I'm sorry meine apko promise kiya tha ke mein Swara ko kuch nahi hone donga aur meine..."

Sanskar felt jealous hearing that Shoumi trusted Nikkhil with Swara, but not him. Shoumi smiles and says "koi baat nahi lekin ab waqt a gaya hai inhe Swara ke past ka matane ke liye."

Sanskar" Maa... woh meri biwi hai... humare bich problems hai lekin iska matlab yeh nahi ke mein usse pyaar nahi karta. Please baataye kya ho raha hai usse. Itna weak meine use kabhi nahi dekha."

Shoumi is silent for a while and she finally speaks "yeh uski yaadein hai jinhone usse iss haal mein choda hai".

Shekar comes forward and says "Mishti... humari beti ke saath kya hua hai issa... tumne kabhi zikar nahi kiya."

Shoumi looks at him with anger and says "kaise baatiti. Hum sab ki priority toh Ragini thi.. Khabhi Swara ke saath ek din spend kiya, sirf tum aur Swara... nahi na toh yeh expect maat karo ke uski life ka haar moment sirf tumhare aur Ragini se joda hua hai... Woh insaan mera pehla pati tha Adhiraj Raichand. Meine usse shaadi ke pehle hi Swara ke baare mein sab kuch bata diya tha aur tab usne kaha tha ke woh Swara ko apni beti mane ga. Pregnancy ke time pe woh excited bhi tha lekin sirf tab tak jab tak woh panditji nahi ae... Pandit ji ne kaha tha ke Swara ke ane se Adhiraj ki barbadi aegi. Pehle toh usne believe nahi kiya tha, lekin Swara ki delivery hue tab usne ek major contract miss kiya tha. Tabse uske dil mein Swara ke liye nafrat cha gae... Patta hai iss mein meri haar kaha thi, meri haar yeh thi ke 8 saal tak meri beti dard se gusre meri ankho ke samhe aur mujhe patta hi nahi chala. Woh bhaut boora tha, bhaut boora."
Shoumi is crying heavily by the end.

Nikkhil, "mujhe yaad hai Aunty... sab kuch yaad hai. Uss ladki ne 8 saal ka torture saha aur 10 saal ka treatment. I just hope ke hum firse square one pe nahi agae. Woh saara trauma aur dard hopefully wapas nahi lot aya."

D.P finally says "woh kisa hevaan hoga jo ek masum choti bachi pe itne zurlum karega."

Sujata "haye uss Adhiraj Raichand ko toh nark mein bhi jaga nahi milegi. Mein bhi pandit ji ko manti hon lekin khabhi ek choti bachi pe haath na utha sakon."

Sanskar was just sitting there and absorbing everything. He finally stands up and says "mein Swara se baat karne ja raha hon."

Nikkhil" woh baat nahi karegi... meine aur Aunty ne bhaut muskil se uska treatment karvaya tha usse ek hasti kehli ladki banaya tha. Woh abhi issi waqt tujse baat nahi karegi. Usse time de."

Sanskar "exactly... tum apni dost ko jaante ho aur maa apni beti ko... mein apni biwi ko jaanta hon. Ek dost ek beti shayad baat nahi karegi lekin Sanskar ki Swara zaroor use baat karegi."

Shekar says "lekin beta door locked hai. Kese jaogay andar?"

Sanskar" woh darwaza tod ke... usne pehle ek pathar mein se apne pati ko dhond nikala tha aur aaj mujhe apni patni ko dhond nikal na hai."


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sorry guys not a lot of Swasan here, but next part is all swasan patch up and connection revealed.
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Wow it's awesome... update sooner
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I just loved both the parts, dear. I wish something like this happens in the show. But never mind, I am totally loving this. Pls update soon. Can't wait for swasan emotional talk. Could u pls pm me for the following chapter.
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Hey dear...
Amazing update...swara suffered much in childhood because of adhiraj...now wondering what will be swara reason of choosing ragini over sanky..?? N swasan convo too..truth revealation...excited...

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Originally posted by: Nivijo

I just loved both the parts, dear. I wish something like this happens in the show. But never mind, I am totally loving this. Pls update soon. Can't wait for swasan emotional talk. Could u pls pm me for the following chapter.

With warm regards
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thank you all for the comments and likes. I really appreciate it.
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Dedicated to MysticRiver.


I am going to dedicate my parts to the first person that commented on my previous part.



Part Two B


Sanskar starts making his way over to Swara's room, but before he could do that Ragini calls him. Ragini says "Sanskar ruko... hum bhi tumhare saath jaengay."


Sanskar and Ragini are now standing in front of Swara's room. Sanskar first clears his throat and says "Swara".


There was no answer and Ragini grew more tensed. She started knocking on the door and said "Swara.. Darwasa kholo... Hum hai"


Sanskar" common tum toh meri strong Swara ho na toh darwasa kholo."


Ragini and Sanskar were pleading Swara to open the door, but she wasn't budging. Ragini turns to Sanskar and says "hume nahi lagta ke woh aise darwasa kholegi... tum darwasa tod do."


Sanskar nodds and signals Ragini to back away. He kicks the door open. Inside in all dark, all the lights are off. Sanskar is confused again because she is scared of the dark. Sanskar whispers "Swara"


Ragini then sights a rocking figure behind the bed. She holds on the Sanskar's arm and points to the figure. Sanskar gently walks over to the figure and when the face falls in the moonlight, he recognizes Swara. She is sitting on the floor, with her hands wrapped around her knees. She is frantically rocking herself back and forth. Her lips are mumbling something incoherent.


Ragini rushes to Swara and places a hand on her head and says "Swara."


Sanskar notices Swara moves her head away from Ragini's touch and sighs. He goes and sits next to her on the floor and looks at her for a second. After a second, he puts one arm under her knees and the other around her shoulders and within a fraction of second he pulled her into his lap. At first Swara pushed against his chest, and kicked her feet but Sanskar held on tightly to her. He brought his mouth to her ear and whisphered "mein hon Swara... tumhara Sanskar".


Slowly Swara started to stop figetting in his lap. Her eyes were holding back unshed tears and she slowly turned her head towards Sanskar. She slowly brought her hands to his face. First she touched his eyes while he let her feel his presence. Then she traced the rest of his face with her fingers. Her breathing was starting to slow down, and she started calming down. After a while she finally gained the courage to hide her face in his neck. As soon as she laid her face in his nape, those unshed tears were released. She started crying loudly while wrapping her arms around his neck. Swara "please... Please mujhe abhi chodke maat jana...please Sanskar please"


Sanskar caressed her hair and mumbled "mein kahi nahi jaonga... I promise... "


Ragini understood that Swara will only talk to Sanskar right now, and she left them alone.


It seemed as if hours had passed by but in reality it had only been a few minutes. Sanskar had started rocking back and forth gently as if trying to put a kid to sleep. Just when he thought that Swara was asleep, she spoke. She said "meine ragini ko uss din isiliye nahi chuna tha kyunki tum galat the... isiliye chuna tha kyunki mein daar gae thi."


Sanskar was shocked at his revealation. All this time, he thought that Swara cared more about Ragini's home than her own. Sanskar said "kyun daar gae... Mein toh tha na tumhare paas."


Swara pulled away and looked into his eyes and said "uss din Adarsh bhaiya jail gae the na usse pehle tumne bola tha ke tum mujhse rishta nahi rakhogay. Meine tab socha tha ke nahi mein apne Sanskar ko maana longi... Lekin itna time hua tha aur tum mujse baat nahi kar rahe the thik se. Lekin meine haar nahi maani thi... Fir ek din meine uss Adhiraj Raichand ko dekha tha. Pehle usse dekh kar laga ke bas ke coincidence tha, lekin fir woh mujhe ek din akele mein milne aya tha. Meine yeh socha tha ke bhale Sanskar abhi mere paas nahi hai, lekin Ragini mujhe nahi chodegi. Fir jab Ragini ja rahi thi na uss din, tab meine sirf yahi socha ke jab Ragini wapas aegi tab mein tumhe bhi maana longi."


After saying all this, she rested her forehead against his and said "mein uska saamna akele nahi kar pae... mein bhaut daar gaeti. Tum mujse baat nahi kar rahe the aur mein baas daar gae ti"


Sanskar looked at her and said "tumhe kya laga Swara... agar tum mujhe baatati ke meri biwi ko khattra hai toh mein apne ego ke liye usse chod deta akele. Agar ek baar bola hota na toh mein saara gussa chod deta."


Swara "mujhe mere Sanskar ka bharosa chahiye. Pata tha ke agar mein tumhe apne past ke baare mein baatati toh tum mujhe maaf toh kar dete lekin tumhara bharosa mujhe aese hi milta. Meine galti ki thi aur mujhe tumhara bharosa wapas pa ne ke liye tumhe yeh ehsaas karna padta ke mujhe tumhari value hai..."


Sanskar was silent for a moment and then he finally said "tumhara past ek bhaut delicate matter hai. Agar tum mujhe baatati toh mein samhajta ke tumhe mujpe itna barosa hai ke apna daar mujhe diya aur usse door bhagane ki responsibility di thi. Yeh dekh kar mera barosa firse ajata."


Swara started crying once again, and she said "meine firse galti kar di Sanskar... Tum itne perfect kyun ho... Mein tumhare layak nahi hon."


Sasnkar" shhh... Khabardar agar meri biwi ke liye kuch bhi bola toh."


Sanskar then hits Swara's nose with his and Swasan smile.



End of this part...



Edited by LoveSana - 8 years ago

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