Bus yunhi...new update jodha ka khayaal on page no.7 10/11/16 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: jiya.k



Shukriya shukriya aapki taarif ke liye bahut bahut shukriya...
I m glad that u liked it shagun n relive those beautiful akdha moments in these lines that is very big compliment 4 me...
Love u baby... ❤️ 🤗


Love you too...🤗

And please do write more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jodha's feelings after watching jalal's face in water -

http://imgur.com/a/yjBxE

Pani mai dekha tha naa jaane kisska woh aks tha par yun laga jaise dil ke jharoke se koi rooh mai jhaank raha tha...
Unn aankho mai naa jaane kya tha par kuch toh tha jo iss dil ki dhadkaney badha gaya tha...
Labo pe naa jaane usske dheemi si woh muskaan thi ya phir kuch sawaal the jo bin kahe humse hi hume chura lene ki ijaazat maang rahe the...
Bus ek pal pani mai dhikha tha jo aks dusare hi pal aankho se aujhal ho gaya par apne saat naa jaane kya le gaya aur naa jaane kya de gaya hume...
Naa jaane kya badal gaya hai iss dil mai par kuch toh badal gaya hai kuch badle huye se ehsaas hai iss dil mai jaise kuch mil gaya ho aur kuch kho jaane ka adhura sa ehsaas bhi hai iss dil mai...
Aur sawaal hai kuch aise jinke jawaab sayad maloom hai iss rooh ko par dil hai ki sab jaankar bhi anjaan bane rehna chahta hai...

P.S. thank u all for liking n commenting n special thanks to my sweetie shagun aka akdha lover for incouraging me to write more akdha feelings in poetic way which i start Bus Yunhi... 😊
Edited by jiya.k - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33


Thank u kavya...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congratulations dear... 😃 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: avika444

Jiya🤗loved it dear

Tye lines r so beautiful dearie👏



Thank u avi dear...
I m really happy that u loved it...
Thank u again budy for beautiful comment... 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Beautifully written
Plzz update other stories also
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: ishagupta

Beautifully written

Plzz update other stories also



Thank u isha... 😛
Trying my best to update my other stories may be update ishq ibadat tmw...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Awesome...perfect for that situation 👏
Edited by cute.ritu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jiya ...so beautiful lines dear... i can clearly visualise the scene while reading these line...u have written so perfectly dear ...loved it ...thanks for sharing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jodha ki yaadein Jodha ke khayaal -

Laut aaya tha main phir ussi apni par begani si duniya me par iss baar jo lauta hoon toh tanha nahi lauta mere sang sang aaya hai khuda ke uss khubsurat karishme ka noor jissne mere dil ke saat saat meri puri zindagi meri puri duniya ko apne husn ke noor se roshan kar diya hai,...
Jisski khusboo hawa me milke meri saanso ko mehaka rahi hai...
Jisski naram saanso ki aahante mere dil ki dhadkano ko dhadka rahi hai...
Jisski woh sitaaro si jhilmilati aankhein aur woh chaand sa roshan cehra mere khawabo main aakar meri neende chura rahe hai aur aankein kholu toh phir se unnke dedar ki chaah me mujhe neend ke aanchal tale khawabo ki aagosh me liye ja rahe hai...
Jisski woh khubsurat hasi jo farishto ko bhi unka imaan bhula de kabhi dur se awaaz dekar kabhi mere pass aakar mujhe har pal apne pass bula rahi hai...
Bus yunhi khoya rehta hoon usski yaado me usske khayaalo me har pal,
kabhi usski hasi,kabhi usski aankein, kabhi usske lab,kabhi usska cehra toh kabhi woh khud aakar yeh kehti hai mujhse wanhi kar rahi hu main tumhara intezaar janha pehli baar mili thi humari nigaahein chale aao phir wanhi pe aur le chalo mujhe bhi apne saat aur main mushkurake keh deta hoon bus meri jaan thoda sa intezaar ...

Edited by jiya.k - 9 years ago

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