OS: Perilous Pursuit - Page 3

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hi Sharon, 😊
Superb update!! 👏 Except Sanskar ------ Ragini part, bcoz how much they were hurt and angry at Swara and Laksh respectively, at least Swara and Laksh didn't deserve Sanskar ---- Ragini wedding, nor they deserve not knowing the truth about Shanaya (Sanskar's ---- Ragini's adopted daughter), about which both Swara and Laksh couldn't bear and ended their life!! 😭 😭 Coz how much Sanskar and Ragini tried to punish Swara and Laksh, they still loved them. 😕 Mrs. Ragini Sanskar Maheshwari, I just couldn't bring myself to this fact!! It sounds so creepy!! In fact, I always thought Sanskar and Ragini to be like brother-sister! 😆 😉 I was crying at the end of the chapter. 😭 But I liked reading it. 😳
With love,
Aheli.

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Hi Aheli ,

I suppose this OS has been bitter sweet to many SwaSan fans. I am sorry if I have not written to your expectations. It's the first time I am writing in this outline. So I wanted something that will keep me fast forwarding the whole story. If it relieves you, my fingers shook as I typed it too but then isn't that the ultimate sword to kill both Swara and Lakshya ?

Swara and Lakshya never delved to know the truth of their decisions nor were they interested in knowing how Sanskaar and Ragini were living away from them. So all four are at fault in a way or the other.

Good luck with your exams.

Cheers

Sharon

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

No need to say sorry Sharon dear. Its just a story. 😳 And u r right, all the 4 r at fault here. And thanks for wishing me for my exam. 😃

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Thank you so much Aheli😊

Every since I posted this OS, I am apprehensive to even read the comments coming in. I have been feeling guilty of spoiling everyone's mood whoever dropped by to read this.

Your words are really consoling! !🤗

Originally posted by: anotheranfan

amazing writing.. even with the title i didnt see this coming... Such an sad ending... but still can totally imagine this with the way swara-sanskar-ragini-lakshya work.. i still cant figure out if what you brought out in each character is their weakest or strongest behavioral aspect but it definitely is them.. may it be swara's pursuit of idealism or sanskar's vengence it was dark and sad yet somewhere gives me hope for it cant for sure be happening in the serial... ohh wait.. no you have successfully planted fear that it might... that i think is success of your story telling :) Great job

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Sharon...dear

This was marvellous...something i never imagined...brilliant...ragsan as couple i cant even imagine in my dreams..but u did it here ..ragsan married just for revenge from swalak...it was a painful journey for four of them...they never moved on..just pretended...it was very unique n different...climax broke my heart..but every story can not have happy ending...you are an out of box thinker..giving different n realistic endings...enjoyed this alot..thank u

Talia

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Hi Talia,

Glad you liked it. It wasn't a happy ending but their decisions and actions could have given them a different ending..

After reading the comments by other readers, I am thinking of writing an alternate take to this. Would you be interested in reading that?

Cheers

Sharon