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Chapter-23

Mehendi Mein Baji Band (out of work) & Outing

The next day he woke up and saw the time.

"Oh my god! It is 9!" Kabir woke up with a jerk. He straight away went to the washroom and came as fast as he could. Later he came down in a hurry and was about to leave without having breakfast.

Va- Kabir! Where are you going in this hurry? To the least have your breakfast!

Ka- (putting on his shoes) No mom, I am already late! She would not leave me.

He left.

Va- (irritated) Yeh ladka! Iska kya karoon main!

Ar- (Reading the newspaper) Shaadi karado! Yeh automatically sudhar jayega.

Va- (glared at him, snatches the newspaper) Maine aapko kaha tha na breakfast table pe no work and newspaper! I have to remind you every day.

Ar- That is the reason I do it. because I want to listen to your melodious voice every morning. It gives a good start to my day. (holds Vasu's hands)

Kar- (covering his face with newspaper) Dad, I am here, so try to control.

Ar- (leaves her hand while she blushes) Aaj tu isi ki vajah se yahan hai! Dekh aaj bhi mera asar vaisa hi kayam hai teri Maa par. Abhi bhi main tujhe bhai ya behen de sakta hoon.

Kar- Dad kuch toh sharam karo. Aapke ke bete ki yahan shaadi ho rahi hai aur aap ho ki apni Family Planning returns bana rahe ho!

Ar- Kya karoon beta, sabki aati nahi aur meri jaati nahi! (winks)

Vasu blushes. They had their breakfast teasing each other. They had to reach the venue by 10 for the mehendi rasm.

Kabir in the car

Ka- Kabir beta aaj toh tu gaya! Woh tujhse bahut naaraaz ho jayegi!

He reaches the place. There she was standing in a beautiful light green gown as per the code. She had cute bangles in her hand. He went near her.

Ka- (cutely) I am sorry!

She turned her head the other side.

Ka- (goes to the other side) I really am!

"Then why did you take so much time? You told me to come here by 7:30 and now it's 8:15!" she said angrily.

Ka- (holds his ears) sorry na GF, I forgot to set the alarm.

Yes the girl is Sarah, Kabir's cute little GF who was looking like a princess.

Sa- Okay! But I want a chocolate!

Ka- (takes out one from his pocket, reaches her height) I knew it! (gave it to her)

Sa- (hugs him) Thanks BF, you are the best BF in the world. (kisses his cheeks)

Ka- That I know! And you are the most beautiful GF in the world. Now let us go. We are already late.

They reached the venue together with Sarah's parents. Nisha was already there in a beautiful dark green gown which was really simple but looked elegant on her. She was looking PATAKA. Kabir was mesmerized to see her. His mouth was left open. He was staring her like an idiot.

Va- Toh kya humare liye bahu chun li???

Ka- (composed himself) What are you talking about mom?

Va- About what you are trying to hide.

Ka- it is not like that. We are not even friends.

Va- but I have never seen anyone staring at a beautiful girl without having feelings for her unless he has lust in those eyes. So where do you fall?

Ka- Nowhere! Mom it's just that she was looking pretty so I was just looking at her.

Va- I think Aishwarya Rai Bachhan is pretty but you never stared at her like that.

Ka- Maa...

Va- (cuts him) Mujhe tere bahane nahi sunne hain. Dekh Kabir, if you like her or have feelings for her, go and tell her before it is too late. Kabir everyone doesn't get a second chance in life. Your father and I got but not everyone is so lucky. Don't fail to recognize your feelings or else it would be too late.

Saying so she went to meet the guests. The rasam was about to begin. Kabir was thinking about what his mother said. Everyone had already went near the dulha and the dulhan. But Kabir was still standing near the door.

Ka- (monologue) Maa sach bol rahi thi. She is right that we won't get a second chance in life. But I don't need a second chance till I really need it. Aur Nisha and me, I don't think we have any chance for ourselves.

God- (suddenly) Abhi bhi bol raha hoon, realize karle ki woh hi tere liye bani hai. Kab tak sab ke sab tujhe hint dete rahenge.

Kabir looked up irritated and then left to the place where Kartik and Kirti were settled.

God- karle ignore abhi par yaad rakhna sabki jodiyan maine hi banayi hai. So I know very well who is made for whom. Waise bhi ghoom phir ke tu mere paas hi ayega.

The mehendi was being done for Kartik and Kirti.

La- Nisha tub hi lagva le!

Ni- No mom, I do not like it.

Va- Beta lagva lo, it is your sister's wedding.

Ni- Okay aunty!

La- Vasu mujhe toh lag raha hai that you should keep her. she listens to you more than me these days.

Va- (looks at Kabir) Even I am planning to.

Laxmi smiles not understanding what she exactly meant. The mehendi was being applied on Nisha's palms and Kabir was staring her. By mistake the mehendi designer wrote K in between the design as her design got spoiled by a hand movement of Nisha. She was about to remove it but Nisha stopped her from doing it and she did not know the reason. Nisha sat beside Kirti and Viraj was sitting beside her. Kabir was getting angry (J). Ayesha went to her and started talking to her lovingly. Now it was Nisha's turn to get J.

Suku went near Nisha and asked her to dance with Viraj but after a lot of insistence she danced with Viraj on the song Yaari Yaari. And they showed their Jhalli Dosti.

Kabir was getting even more jealous. Then Ayesha asked Kabir to dance with her. And Kabir being in the jealous state accepted her proposal at once. They danced on the Ajeeb Dastan hai Ye. (unke dance mein Nisha took up a para)

(Mubaarakein tumhe ke tum
Kisi ke noor ho gaye) - 2

Nisha stood up from her place and started singing.
Kisi ke itne paas ho
Ke sab se door ho gaye

She looked at Kabir with a broken heart and tears in her eyes.

Ajeeb daastaan hai yeh
Kahan shuru kahan khatam

She went to Vasu and stood beside her.

Yeh manzile hai kaunsi
Na voh samajh sake na hum

She then looked at Kabir trying to express the pain she is in.

And then she went and stood near Viraj and looked at him with teary eyes. None of them in the hall could understand the reason she took up the saddest part of the song except for Viraj, Ramesh, Vasu and somewhere Kabir. Then she giggled trying to tell that it was a joke. Everyone smiled at her. Kabir knew that she was hiding something but the worst part was she herself didn't know the answer.

Later the complete mehendi function was completed. They all retired to their rooms in the hotel of the venue. The two families had also booked some rooms for themselves in order to save time of going back home and then coming back to the venue.

Nisha changed to some casuals and did not take rest as she had to look at the arrangements neither did Kabir. They both reached the hall at the same time. They looked at each other. They went inside and started looking at the works as there was very less time left.

Kabir stole glances of Nisha.

God- (sings) Thoda sa pyaar hua hai thoda hai baaki!

Ka- (looks up) Aap phir shuru ho gaye. Aapko kaam nahi hote hain kya!

God- mujhe facebook par aayi hui friend requests bhi check karni hai aur saath saath bahut saare conversations par reply bhi maarna hai. Jesus ne bhi wishes bheji hain Diwali ki uspar bhi reply karna hai. So you see I have loads of work to do.

Ka- Toh jao karo na, mere peeche kyun padhe ho?

God- (sings) Aadha Ishq, aadha hai , aadha ho jayega.

Ka- I am doing my work so don't disturb me.

God- (Katrina style, TMK movie se) You're such a meany!

Ka- Jaanta hoon!

Ni- Kabir!

God- Phas gaya! (giggled)

Ka- (shocked at her sudden appreance beside him) haan bol!

Ni- Tu yeh upar dekh dekh kar kisse baat karta hai?

Ka- Woh main god ko kosta rehta hoon!

Ni- You are such a weirdo at times!

Ka- Accha tu bol! You had some work?

Ni- (realizes) There is a rasam between the elders of the groom and bride and they have to share 2 particular sweets" Mysore Pak for the girl's parents and Kaju Katli for the groom's. but these caterers heard it wrong and made the wrong sweet. Aur 5 boxes are needed so itni jaldi banegi bhi nahi.

Ka- Nisha mujhe zyada kuch samajh nahi aaya lekin main le aaunga

He was about to leave when Nisha called him.

Ka- Haan bol!

Ni- I will also go with you or else you will make a mistake like them.

They went outside. Kabir sat on a bike instead of talking a car.

Ni- Yeh kya kar raha hai?

Ka- Mumbai ka traffic jaanti hai na and moreover it is a wedding season, andar waali shops mein hi milegi. So uske liye we need to go on a bike to get the work done faster.

Ni- Theek hai! (she went near the bike) hatt!

Ka- kahan hatt?

Ni- Main drive karoongi!

Ka- Tu? Aur bike?

Ni- Yup! I know how to drive it. hatt ab!

Kabir moved back making space for her and gave her another helmet.

Ni- Ab tu bas apni shirt pakadle kahi udd na jaaye (smirks)

She started driving. as soon as she came on the main road she started driving even faster. Kabir showed her the place. She stopped.

Ka- 30 minute ki doori das minute mein poori kar di! Kamal hai!

Ni- Arre hum kalakar hain, aage aage dekh hota hai kya!

Ka- (giggles) Accha ok! But now the shop is at the other side of the road so...

Ni- (cuts him in between) So I am going to get it!

Ka- Nisha...

She went without even listening to him. She reached the shop and started taking the sweets. She was crossing the road thinking about the incidents between her and Kabir. Kabir saw her and smiled but that smile soon faded away as he saw a car driving towards her. it was blowing horn again and again but she did not hear it. the car seemed to have got failed breaks.

Kabir shouted her name many times but she did not hear it. Kabir ran towards her and pulled her in the nick of time and they fell on the other side of the footpath with Kabir on top of her.

Ka- (shouting) Are you mad? Are you insane? Where were you looking at? Couldn't you hear the horn or when I was shouting? Do you know what could have happened to you?

Nisha was smiling like a maniac. She was just looking at his care for her. he staked his life for her.

Ka- Nisha are you even listening to me? Have you ever thought that if something would have happened to you then what would have happened to me?

Nisha was astonished about what he said. Even he was himself.

Scroll down for the next part.

P.S. only for Anjy- Anju I am really thankful to you for you did the PM work last time. Thanks again.

Edited by 357159pikachu - 8 years ago
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Chapter- 24

Kuch Toh Hua Hai!😉

Ni- What would have happened Kabir?

Kabir stood up and looked the other side. Nisha also stood up.

Ka- Chal we are getting late.

He held her hand and they crossed the road together. this time Kabir was on the drivers' seat.

Jheeni hai bheeni hai khushboo teri hai
Main mehak rahi hoon
Jheeni hai bheeni hai khushboo teri hai
Main mehak rahi hoon

Nisha was smiling sitting on the back and was looking around. Kabir set the rear view mirror in a way so that he could see her. He himself smiled seeing her.

Khatti hai, meethi hai, boliyan teri hain
Main chehak rahi hoon
Tu chahat purani shararat nayi hai
Yaqeen toh dila de, tu hai ya nahi hai

Kabir started talking to her and she was just hearing him. He was telling her about the area because Nisha had never been to that particular area.

Aaye haaye.. zubaan bhi phisalne lagi

Hui hui main toh hui shayrana hui
Hui hui main toh hui shayrana hui
Gungunane lagi aashiqana hui
Hui hui main toh hui shayrana hui
Oo.. aa.. shayarana huyi

Main shayrana shayrana shayrana hui

Kabir giggled and she blushed. She was looking at him cutely from the back but from the rear view mirror and Kabir usse bich bich mein dekh raha tha.

Chaand chhal ke chal diya hai
Din mein hi nikal liya hai
Khwaab tod laya hai mere liye naye

She looked up and was enjoying the sun. Kabir was mesmerized looking at her childlike attitude.

Aage peechhe baahein kheenche
Ud rahi hain yeh hawaayein
Raahein dhoondh laayi hain mere liye nayi
Shayarana, shayarana ho gayi main shayarana
Shayarana, shayarana sha ra ra ra shayarana..

She opened her arms to feel the air.

Tu hasrat puraani, tu aadat nayi hai
Yaqeen to dila de tu hai ya nahi hai
Aaye haaye zubaan bhi phisalne lagi

She wanted to keep her hands on her shoulder for a protection from the humps that were coming but she was feeling shy. Kabir saw it form the mirror and intently hit the breaks and she collided with his back and her hands automatically rested on his shoulders. He smiled and so did she.

Ka- Rakh le! Vaise bhi aage bahut humps hain.

Hui hui main to hui shayarana hui
Hui hui main to hui shayarana hui
Gungunaane lagi aashiqana hui
Hui hui main to hui shayarana hui
Oo ow wo.. shayarana hui

She smiled and kept her hands on his shoulders and started smiling again like a maniac. Kabir was laughing inside thinking about her behavior. They were as if lost in their own world.

They soon reached the venue but none of them actually wanted to. They got down and went to their rooms. All the guests started arriving. Nisha also reached the hall and so did Kabir but they were late. The bride and the groom already arrived.

Vi- (on the stage) Hello and welcome everyone to the Sangeet of Ms. Kirti Gangwal and Mr. Kartik Kumar! (applause) As a beginning we would start with the performance of the cute couples who are going to be in-laws of the bride and the groom tomorrow.

RaMi (Ramesh & Laxmi) danced on Suraj hua Maddham & then ArSu danced on Eh Meri Zohar Jabeen. The crowd applauded for them. Then Viraj came back to the stage.

Vi- Woah! Aag abhi bhi hai! Now let us welcome the handsome brother of Kirti Suketu with his friend, Ayesha. (applause)

They danced on the song Yeh Ladka Hai Allah. They actually tried portraying their love. Then Viraj came back to the stage and announced the names of other participants. Sarah and Kabir were amongst them and they swayed on the song GF BF. Then Viraj and Nisha also danced on the song Cutie Pie. Kabir ho gaya J. Nisha came down and started talking to Vasu when Kabir took a flower and hit her in her back and the song started playing in the background.

(Before you start reading the sequence do see the actual video of the saong Didi Tera Devar Deewana from the movie Hum aapke Hain Kaun because there would resemblance to it)

Lallala.. Lai lai la..Lala
Lallala.. Lai lai la..Lala

Nisha acted in the same Madhuri Dixit style.

Didi tera devar deewana
Ho didi tera devar deewana

Nisha went to Kirti and then pointed at Kabir as if complaining.

Haye Ram, kudiyon ko daale daana (Haye Ram, kudiyon ko daale daana)

She then acted in Amrish Puri Aao Aao style from DDLG style.

Dhandha hai yeh uska puraana
Arrey dhandha hai yeh uska puraana

She went near Vasu and then acted as if gossiping while Kabir just waved his hairs in style.

Haye Ram, kudiyon ko daale daana (Haye Ram, kudiyon ko daale daana)

Then some of her friends joined her in the dance.

Hun mushkil hai yuh mujhko phasaana
Ye mushkil hai yuh mujhko phasaana

Nisha went near Kabir and then kept her hand on his shoulder in Gunda style. And then held her ears mimicking Kabir from the day of apology.

Haye Ram, kudiyon ko daale daana (Haye Ram, kudiyon ko daale daana)

Then again she went near her friends and did the famous style of the song.

Didi tera devar deewana
Haye Ram, kudiyon ko daale daana

She again went to Kirti and made her stand up and acted like she was crying while complaining and then did the step with Kirti. and then went to her friends and started doing that step.

Hoyi hoyi hoyi haye re haye
Hoyi hoyi hoyi haye re haye

And then Kabir went near her and picked her up in his arms. And Vasu and Laxmi joining in started making the above sound while Nisha was beating him lightly on his chest.

Bhabhi teri behna ko maana
Ho bhabhi teri behna ko maana

He then took her near Kirti and placed her in front of her.

Haye Ram, kudiyon ka hai zamaana
Haye Ram, kudiyon ka hai zamaana

Then stood near Kirti and kept his hand on her shoulder. And then sang the next line.

Rabba mere mujhko bachaana
Ho rabba mere mujhko bachaana

He then looked up as if scared.

Haye Ram, kudiyon ka hai zamaana (Heyy..)
Haye Ram, kudiyon ka hai zamaana (Heyy heyy..)

Then went near Ramesh, Arjun, Viraj, Suku and took Kartik along and they danced together.

Hukum aapka tha
Jo maine na maana

Khatavaar hoon main
Na aaya nibhaana

Then Ramesh went and stood in front of Laxmi whereas Arjun sat in front of Vasu and looked down.

Sazaa jo bhi doge
Woh manzoor hogi
Aji meri mushkil
Tabhi door hogi

They then stood up in front of their respective wives asking forgiveness for all the mistakes they did.

Bandaa hai yeh khudse begaana (Heyy..)
Bandaa hai yeh khudse begaana (Heyy heyy..)

The wives the started dancing and smiling with Nisha, Kirti and Ayesha.

Haye Ram, kudiyon ka hai zamaana (Heyy heyy..)

And then Kabir, Kartik and Suku joined them and started dancing.

(Haye Ram) Kudiyon ka hai zamaana (Repeat 3 times)

And the couples started dancing together (Barati Dance)

Then Nisha went to the DJ and asked him to play the next song of her choice. Everyone started smiling and now everyone was on their seats.

Baari Barsi Khatn Gaya Si Khat Ke Leyandi Tuggi
Golak Chhad Ke Groove Pakad Lai, Movat Phukki Phukki
Ke Mehfil Ta Sajjdi, Ke Mehfil Ta Sajjdi
Sab Karde Bukki Bukki, Ke Mehfil Ta Sajjdi
Aangan Mein Bukki Bukki, Ke Mehfil Ta Sajjdi

Ni- Before we start I must tell you that this is a competition between the bride and the groom's sides and after the dancing let us see who wins.


Baari Barsi Khatn Gaya Si Khat Ke Leyandi Gond
Dulhe Ka Taya Twist Kare, Vibrate Ho Moti Tond

She went to Kartik's Tauji (Father's elder brother) and took him to the main area instead of the stage. (since there was place between the audiences' seat and the stage)


Baari Barsi Khatn Gaya Si Khat Ke Leyandi Khajoor
Dulhan Ki Tayi Bold Badi, Challenge Kare Manzoor

She then went and brought her Tayji (Father's elder brother's wife) to the main place.


Ke Mehfil Ta Sajjdi, Ke Mehfil Ta Sajjdi
Je Nacche Taya-Tayi, Ke Mehfil Ta Sajjdi
Je Nacche Taya-Tayi, Ke Mehfil Ta Sajjdi

And then the three started dancing.

Baari Barsi Khatn Gaya Si Khat Ke Leyande Zevar
Paan Chhupaye Naughty Naughty Zeh Dulhan Ke Devar

She then went to Kabir who was eating some snacks. She pointed at him showing how Bhukkad he is!


Dulhan Ke Devar (Aaja), Dulhan Ke Devar (Come On)

He didn't come at first but then she dragged him.


Baari Barsi Khatn Gaya Si Khat Ke Leyandi Daali
Dekh Ke Unko Naak Sikode Jo Dulhe Ki Saali

She then did some steps to praise herself while Kabir gave an OH PLEASE' expression.


Mehfil Ta Sajjdi, Ke Mehfil Ta Sajjdi
Je Nacche Devar-Saali, Ke Mehfil Ta Sajjdi
Je Nacche Devar-Saali, Ke Mehfil Ta Sajjdi

And then they started dancing in a face off style.


Move Your Body, Come On Nach Le Ve
Shaava Shaava Shaava Nach Le Ve

Abhi bhi face-off is going on between the two.

Baari Barsi Khatn Gaya Si Sabar Zara Sa Keejay
Turn The Table, Base Bana Chal Jaldi Move It Dj
Ke Mehfil Ta Sajjdi, Hip Hop Da Chaska Leejay
Ke Mehfil Ta Sajjdi, Jab Naach Nachave Dj
Ke Mehfil Ta Sajjdi

She then went to the DJ and he himself did some groovy moves.


Baari Barsi Khatn Gaya Si Khat Ke Leyandi Chaabi
Dekh Shakira Jaise Thumke Le Dulhe Ki Bhaabi

She brought Kartik's cousin brother's wife.


Baari Barsi Khatn Gaya Si Khat Ke Leyanda Pizza
Style Mein Desi Disco Karta Ve Dulhan Ka Jeeja

Then brought her cousin sister's husband.


Mehfil Ta Sajjdi, Ke Mehfil Ta Sajjdi
Je Nacche Jeeja-Bhaabi, Ke Mehfil Ta Sajjdi
Je Nacche Jeeja-Bhaabi, Ke Mehfil Ta Sajjdi

Groovy dancing.


Baari Barsi Khatn Gaya Si Khat Ke Leyanda Macco
Dulhan Ki Mummy Bhool Ke Gidda Ab Ke Chede Tango

Then she brought Laxmi but she did not want to.


Dulhan Ki Mummy (Aaja), Dulhan Ki Mummy (Come On)

She teased her as she blushed when Nisha tried to make her focus on the grinning face of Ramesh.


Baari Barsi Khatn Gaya Si Khat Ke Leyandi Gaddi
Two For Tango Karne Aaye Lo Dulhe Ke Daddy

She then brought Kabir's father while doing bhangra.


Mehfil Ta Sajjdi, Ke Mehfil Ta Sajjdi
Je Nacche Mummy-Daddy, Ke Mehfil Ta Sajjdi
Je Nacche Mummy-Daddy, Ke Mehfil Ta Sajjdi

And then they started dancing.


Sab Ki Hogi Wah Bhi Wah, Nahin Kisi Ki Tuk Duk Doo
Sab Ki Hogi Wah Bhi Wah, Nahin Kisi Ki Tuk Duk Doo
Banno Banno Beech Nadi Di Haye
Banno Banno Beech Nadi Di Gaddi Hoyi Shuru
Sab Ki Hogi Wah Bhi Wah, Nahin Kisi Ki Tuk Duk Doo

Sab Ki Hogi Wah Bhi Wah, Nahin Kisi Ki Tuk Duk Doo
Sab Ki Hogi Wah Bhi Wah, Nahin Kisi Ki Tuk Duk Doo
Banno Banno Beech Nadi Di Haye
Banno Banno Beech Nadi Di Gaddi Hoyi Shuru
Sab Ki Hogi Wah Bhi Wah, Nahin Kisi Ki Tuk Duk Doo
Sab Ki Hogi Wah Bhi Wah, Nahin Kisi Ki Tuk Duk Doo

And then everyone came in the middle and started dancing. Kabir and Nisha didn't know when they started doing close type of bhangra. And the best part was that they were loving it.

PRECAP- FINALLY EPILOGUE!!

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Viraj ?? Sayad another guess 😆


Tum guessing karlo but I wont tell. 😆Wait for the Epilogue!😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Thanks Niha! Glad u liked it.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anu012

Fantastic ...
beautiful story concept
all chptrs r superb ... read all chptrs in one go
loved it ...
cont soon


thnks for pm


Thanks a lot Anu. I am new to you and so are you. Glad u liked it. And for the PM you should thank Anju. she was the one behind it.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie_ammu

Sooo nice update..

Nibir was just superb
Hope both will realise their feelings soon
Pls update jaldi...cant wait


Glad u liked it mate. Thanks. They will have to now. And will update really soon afterall kal apilogue dene ka promise kiya hai. 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tani_0209

I thnk I read it after a long..

U dint pm me d links I thnk..
Abi dekha to sare parts saath m hi read kia .
But trust me saath m read krna z always mre wndetful..
Superb yar..
D way he apologized full Bollywood masala 😉
Dn d moment dy shared..oh god dat was my fav
Nyways Vo gf wala hi mast tha. Evn mjhe lga as if koi gf hi hogi but Vo to uski sis hi nikli..lol
Dn viraj ka nisha ki realise krwana..Bhut imp tha..
For d Vry frst time em liking him 😆
N finally unka terrace pe gup shup..I loved it..!!
Both r in love n m in love wid dis fact only 😳🤢


Actually I did not PM anyone. Rather Anju did it for me and I am really glad that she helped because i was really stuck in some work. Thanks a lot for you liked it. I know really ek saath padhne mein zyada maza aata hai. 😆Aaj kal ke bachon ke liye maine Sarah ko GF banaya Kabir ki. Mujhe uski age par ABCD yaad karne mein dikkat hoti thi. 🤢Jabse ye story lik rahi hoon trust me, mera main aim Viraj ko good character batana ho gaya hai but before writing mujhe khud ko bharosa dilana padhta hai that Viraj is good according to the FF. 😆 Two so-called romantic scenes isiliye daale the because i felt that Nibir scenes are a total must warna interest nahi aata hai. 😆
Thanks once again.
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Posted: 8 years ago
👏Thanks fot a fast update..
And both the chapters were as superb as always..
The fance perfomance was...👏
But epilogue...you're gonna end it???😭
No problems...waiting eagerly for the epilogue...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie_ammu

👏Thanks fot a fast update..

And both the chapters were as superb as always..
The fance perfomance was...👏
But epilogue...you're gonna end it???😭
No problems...waiting eagerly for the epilogue...


Thanks a lot Ammu! (I think that is ur name) Glad u liked it. Fast update was necessary because i have to post the epilogue tomorrow. Sorry that i cant extend it anymore because main Nisha type hoon, anti-love, so cant write much. Moreover I have promised to update the epilogue tomorrow.So, will update tomorrow.
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Posted: 8 years ago
bang on 😊👍🏼two updates were superb👏👏

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