how good writer u are?

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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok here i am going to give u an outlinejust make a story out of it

after sendig albus severus to hogwarts...................................harry and ginny set off to home.....................while in the way ..............................ginny screamed when she saw the face of harry............................................his scar was back........................................................ ...................and harry was........................................and after sme time hef felt he prickling ...............................................and the signs of.............................................

hope u will write a paragraph out of it

enjoy😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Saying goodbye to Ron and Hermione, the Potters made their way towards their car. Halfway through the ride, Ginny spied something peculiar about Harry's face when he used his hand to brush a stray peace of hair out of his eyes. Her eyes bulged as she realized what that something was. Harry's scar was back. She let out a high pitched sound, something between a scream and a whine.
Hearing this, Harry spares her a glance before averting his eyes back on the road.
"Something the matter, Ginny?" He asks.
"Your scar..." she whispers.
"What about..." He didn't get a chance to finish that sentence as just then his scar tingled, then just as instantly started burning.
"My scar…" he hisses, grabbing at his head, just as he is plunged into a memory not his own…

A paragraph *shrugs*, kindof hard, considering, I tend to ramble on...
Though out of context, Harry does still have the scar, it just hasn't "pained him in nineteen years".
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Posted: 17 years ago
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After sending Albus Severus off to Hogwarts, Harry and Ginny went to 'The Leaky Cauldron'. It was what they had been waiting for through the year. Every year after dropping off their children at platform 9 3/4, Harry and Ginny would meet up with Ron and Hermoine at The Leaky Cauldron for some drinks. Nothing brought more joy to Harry than sipping on a frothy glass of firewhiskey and reliving the good old times with his friends.

They strolled down Diagon Alley en route to their destination. In the way Harry all of a sudden collapsed onto his knees. He clasped his forehead and winced. A terrified Ginny dropped on her knees to see what was wrong with her husband. Ginny screamed when she saw Harry's face. His scar was back, and it was deeper and prominent than ever. It glowed searing red and Harry was writhing on the road in agony.

The sign was pricking harder and harder now as Harry looked mournfully at a teary eyed Ginny. It could not be, but it was happening right there. Harry recollected, last night he had had a dream, a dark and dreary dream the kind he had not had for a long time now. He had dismissed it as a bad nightmare but now it was evident. All the signs of the Dark Lord's return were there.

Ginny screeched for help, but no one was paying attention to them. All eyes were glued to the skies which had all of a sudden turned dark and stormy at mid day. Ginny looked up and there glowing green in the sky was the skull and serpent, the mark of the dark lord.

In the distance she could see a group of shadowy figures on broomsticks heading straight towards them. She had to act fast now and do something. If only Hermoine and Ron were with them too.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lot more than my expectations
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yaar cme on post sme thing
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Posted: 17 years ago
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after dropping albus to hogwarts harry and ginny set off to home while in the way ginny screamed at harry
harry asked ginny for what was this now he has already cleaned the toilet and washed the dishes and alll........ and even polished her shoes so now for what was that creep
ginny said shut up and by the way congrats ur scar is back
harry said thank god voldy bro is atleast better than you
ginny repl,ied thank god you will set off for a fight now
yayaya said harry
and after reaching home harry took out his hank and cleaned the scar which he made by ginnys favourite red hot fashionable lipstick and lipgloss by maybelline
may he is born wid it
may be its maybelline 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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after dropping albus to hogwarts harry and ginny set off to home while in the way ginny screamed at harry
harry asked ginny for what was this now he has already cleaned the toilet and washed the dishes and alll........ and even polished her shoes so now for what was that creep
ginny said shut up and by the way congrats ur scar is back
harry said thank god voldy bro is atleast better than you
ginny repl,ied thank god you will set off for a fight now
yayaya said harry
and after reaching home harry took out his hank and cleaned the scar which he made by ginnys favourite red hot fashionable lipstick and lipgloss by maybelline
may he is born wid it
may be its maybelline 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i am actually so funny thats why i wrote funny hope u will enjoy it 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very good,i liked urs purple shine 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: purple shine

after dropping albus to hogwarts harry and ginny set off to home while in the way ginny screamed at harry
harry asked ginny for what was this now he has already cleaned the toilet and washed the dishes and alll........ and even polished her shoes so now for what was that creep
ginny said shut up and by the way congrats ur scar is back
harry said thank god voldy bro is atleast better than you
ginny repl,ied thank god you will set off for a fight now
yayaya said harry
and after reaching home harry took out his hank and cleaned the scar which he made by ginnys favourite red hot fashionable lipstick and lipgloss by maybelline
may he is born wid it
may be its maybelline 😉



🤣 That's hilarious purple shine. Love it.

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