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Posted: 17 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Morgoth

I love the ending.

One suggestion: Instead of giving us high drama from the beginning itself, build the tension instead. That way, your ending will have a better impact.



Thank you for your suggestion..I will definitely keep this in mind next time...very helpful!😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: nitu07

aww it's sad na ...but I loved ur story...do write more ...if u can😊



Thank you nitu..will write sometime..😳😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
OMG!!! holy shit tha was so gudddd....damn i am so showing this to my frends to read how sad..but reall gud=P 😃 😃 ...write more!! 😃 plzz..ur a gud writer and i liekd how u described it ..liek its different but real gud
😃 <3
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: starry_eyes29

OMG!!! holy shit tha was so gudddd....damn i am so showing this to my frends to read how sad..but reall gud=P 😃 😃 ...write more!! 😃 plzz..ur a gud writer and i liekd how u described it ..liek its different but real gud
😃 <3



Wow! Thank you starry eyes..really appreciate it ...😃😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
Omggg Naina Diiii...that's intense!! 👏👏👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: fariha17

Omggg Naina Diiii...that's intense!! 👏👏👏



Fari...Thank you 😳😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
very well written
loved it
do write sum more stories
vill be waiting 4 ur next story 😊

luv
tina
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
WOoOo aWEsme Story!! 👏 👏 to good!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: tnbedi

very well written
loved it
do write sum more stories
vill be waiting 4 ur next story 😊

luv
tina



Will definitely write something new sometime..Thank you..😳😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: dramaholic

WOoOo aWEsme Story!! 👏 👏 to good!



Thank you so much...😃😃😃

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