My broken heart is your punishment - swasan os

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Hey dear...

I liked ..liked ...liked this OS..convert it to SS..would definetly read it...sanky is giving swara punishment by destroying himself...though it was sad but different...enjoyed alot...plzzz continue

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@wrizaa

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

that was really nice... i think u should turn it to ss...

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akanksha

@luvakanksha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Hey since meera is unable to log in n comment on IF she told me to post her comment on my os here. I gave her the link on Twitter. So here is what she said-

just went through your os. i loved it. if we go by current situation then loved his punishment. valid and much needed. but i am not fan of sad endings. so make it a ss. you understand all the characters of SR completely. you will be able to give a beautiful redemption to swara. may be something we will never get to see in the serial. so plz bring them together . SwaSan deserve a happy ending .

Edited by luvakanksha - 8 years ago

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Gayathri

@Gayathri93

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

its amazing.👏
plz continue dear. loved sanskar's reaction . i hope the cvs do like this way in the show

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Res Aku. 😳
I'm so sorry dear, I was out of town during Durga Puja vacation, so couldn't read it. 😭
Unresed dear. 😃
Awesome update! 👏 And heart wrenching too. 😭 This was the worst punishment for Swara. 😭 Plzz continue it and make it a TS. 😳 Will love to read it dear. 😃 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago