My broken heart is your punishment - swasan os

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys u must have noticed I have not written anything on Swasan for a long time infact I discontinued one of my ff, well that's because I didn't got any inspiration and motivation from the idiotic track which were forced on us by the cvs. The current track looks promising so I decided to write an os on Swasan.
My broken heart is your punishment

Sanskar finally did it. He found Lakshya. And here he was standing with him in mm with everyone present. He called swara, ragini, ma and baba. Ragini saw lakshay and ran towards him.
Ragini - kahan chale gayye thai Tum?
Lakshya - I am sorry
That was it ragini slapped him across his face.
Ragini - Lakshya tum sabko kyun chod kar chale gayye thai?
Lakshya - papa nai kahan tha Mai galat hun hamesha ki tarah, par Mai apne aap ko yeh vishwas hi nahi dila payya ki I am wrong.
Ragini - Matlab?
Sanskar - he was in Mumbai
Dp -Mumbai?
Sanskar - Lakshya k pass jab aapka phone aaya toh he didn't believe u he thought swara brainwashed u too along with ragini. So he tried calling Adarsh who's phone was switched off and then he called parineeta, and she very cunningly messaged him to meet one of her friend in Mumbai who was a lawyer and told him in the message that I framed Adarsh in a fake case for property.
Lakshya stood there with his head bowed down.
Sanskar - jab Adarsh jail pahauncha toh he asked for a phone call and the police inspector allowed him. He called the person in Mumbai to kill lakshay and the money would be transferred in his account. Parineeta transferred the money through her mother to that lawyer aka contract killer. Lakshya sold his car for flight tickets n other expenses n reached Mumbai. He met that person in airport itself who took him to lonavala n pushed him off the cliff. He was fortunately saved by the locals who took him to the hospital and there he was unconscious for 6 months the police tried finding his family members in Mumbai n ofcourse failed since he belonged to Kolkata. I found him 2 weeks ago. Arranged best doctors for him n he gained conscious about a week ago. Apparently it was plan b of Adarsh n parineeta in case they fail.
Lakshya - I am sorry.
Ragini - sorry kehne Sai kuch nahi badlega Lakshya.
Lakshya - ragini Mai woh...
Ragini - tumhari ek galti ki sazza pure parivar nai bhukti hai, khaskar k swara aur sanskar nai.
Sanskar - ab Inn sab baton ka kya fayda?
Sanskar went up to swara who was numb. She was wrong it was never sanskar, he was not responsible for lakshya's disappearance. She didn't trust him. And she has done it yet again.
Sanskar - Toh Mrs swara sanskar Maheshwari are u ready for ur punishment.
Swara said nothing just kept looking at him, begging him to forgive her for the last time.
Shomi - sanskar beta...
Sanskar - Mai aapka beta nahi hun
Shekhar - sanskar?
Sanskar - agar aapne dil se apna beta manna hota mughe toh swara ko mughse jhoot bolne k liye kabhi badhawa nahi deti aap.
Sujata - sanskar sun chore...
Sanskar - mom aapko Meri kasam aapne bich Mai kuch bola toh.
Sanskar took out few papers and handed it over to swara. Swara saw them and was shocked. They were divorce papers which were already signed by him.
Swara - sanksar yeh...
Sanskar - Mai Tumse bohat pyaar karta hun swara par tumne mughe maar dala, zinda laash banne pai majboor kar diya. Aur ab yeh Murda insan, sharabi aur nashedi ban chuka hai aur tumhare kabil nahi raha. Waise bhi sindoor mangalsutra toh tumne utar hi phenke hai, toh legally alag ho jatein hai.
Ragini - sanskar tum yeh... Manna ki swara se galti hui maaf kardo usko please.
Sanskar - tum iski galti sudhar sakti thi ragini par hamesha ki tarah tum selfish nikali, jab Maine yeh kaha ki agar swara Ghar se chali gayyi toh Mai zindagi Mai usse nahi apnauga toh tum bhi ruk sakti thi. Kyunki swara tumhare saath rehna chahti thi, Tum apna decision Ghar chod k jaane ka badal deti. Lekin tumhe toh apni padi thi, ki tumhe iss Ghar ki Har cheez Mai lakshay dikhayi deta hai toh tum apne aap ko takleef nahi Dena chahti thi right ?
Ragini stood numb, he was right. She is responsible too.
Swara- I m sorry sanskar, I know Maine jo kiya nahi karna chahiye tha, aise tumko akele chod kar nahi jaana chahiye tha, par Mai ragini ki Khushi k liye...
Sanskar - Mubarak ho swara behna ki Khushi Mubarak ho
Swara- sanskar
Sanskar - swara papers sign karke mughe bhej Dena.
And sanskar left. Swara's knees buckled and she fell down. This was it she thought. Shomi shekhar n ragini ran towards her, n picked her up.
Shomi - sab thik ho jayega shona hum sab sanskar ko samjhayenge
Dp - Haan beta sab thik ho jayega.
Swara- kuch thik nahi hoga, Maine uska bharosa Toda hai aur bina bharose ka rishta uske liye koi mayine nahi rakhta.
Shekhar - nahi swara aise haar nahi maante beta
Swara - Mai haar gayyi baba haar gayyi ab kuch nahi ho sakta
Ap - beta aisa nahi bolte rishta aise nahi tutta
Swara - Maine hi Toda tha yeh rishta badi ma, Sanskar nai toh aaj bas formality nibhai hai.
Swara walked away from everyone, she stepped out of mm n saw the garden sanskar cherished which was all filled with broken pots and dead plants. Sanskar must have destroyed it thought swara. She looked up n saw him standing on the window smoking away. He had a bottle of alcohol in his other hand. What has she done to this man? She destroyed him. He was right she killed him. Sanskar looked down to see her. He closed the window n went away.
This is the punishment Sanskar was talking about. His broken her was her punishment. Nothing else. How will she live with it. She walked away with a heavy heart and divorce papers clutched tightly in her hand.
She didn't knew what to do? She had no solutions. She had no way.


The end
Hey I am leaving it on a sad note if u guys want I can turn it into an ss. If u guys like it pls comment and like and also suggest me if I should continue or not.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ths z d worst punishment 4swara whn she realize she z responsible 2break the heart of tht man who lv her uncnditnaly,who once upon a time mend her heart,who live for her..
Swara stay in tht guilt & tht slowly kill her 4m inside..
Amaizing updt.
The pain thy r suffering z jst so heartwrenching..
Pls turn it 2ss.ths trk z amaizing &wd lv 2read ff on ths trk.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Continue... continue...😛
It's too good😳

Tani
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Posted: 8 years ago
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its amazing yaar aku
I am really looking forward to read more from our lovely writers of the forum on this track
plz go ahead with as I promise will comment whenever free.

ishita.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi akku. This is amazing.. I'm loving it.. hope it'll be his punishment for her in the serial too.. Nothing needed more for her to die in guilt.
Make it as a SS. Sagar to read more. And let her cry more. Carve for him more. And I want more attitude from Sanskaar..

Please write it in English..

With love..

Kam..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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this is awesome..
please make it an ss, I really wanna ead how swara will solve this blunder.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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plz make it as ss...wanna see how swara solves this n how sanskar would show more attitude n swara realize what blunder she did...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fantastic...really want swara to suffer...she actually cannot think beyond pyari behna...
Sanskar loves her immensely but she has no respect for the man or his love...really wsnt swara to beg for her love n sanskar should not forgive her that easily.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing 👏
I wish you would write this track instead of the CVs. Pata nahi yeh CVs kya kya stupidity dikhayengi.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome and so much pain definitely turn it into a as. ..loved to read more...
Raz

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