swasan os : intezaar

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sanskaar coming home after ages

S- maa...badi maa... Sanskaar aane wala hai...

Bm- haa haa beta hum jante hai

M- swara chori...hume pata Sanskaar aane wala hai...

M- jiji...je chori pagala gai hai...har 2 minutes me Sanskaar aane wala hai... Sanskaar aane wala hai keh keh ke poore ghar me fudak rahi hai..

Swara still busy in telling everyone

Bm- suju...Kai saalo ki tapasya hai ye uski jo aaj khatam hone ko hai...to khush to hogi na

M- haa jiji...dekha hai maine...je chori ne har paal sirf intezaar kiya hai mahre chore ka...

M- bhagwan kare...aaj iski tapasya...ar intezaar dono khatam ho jaye


S- ragini... ragini...kaha ho baba
Ragu coming out of kitchen...

R- oofo...swara hum kitchen me hai...kya hua

S- ragini...Mai bahut bahut bahut khush hu...

R- hum jante hai swara

S- accha ragini mujhe tang mat karo Sanskaar aane wala hai mujhe uski manpasand chizen banani hai..

R- ye lo...ulta chor kotwal ko daante ...swara...

Swara grinning seeing ragu face...

S- accha baba mai to baas majak kar rahi thi...

R- ab thik hai...accha batao kya hai aaj ka menu...

S- gajar ka halwa...matar paneer...aloo parantha lassi...ar aalu sum ar...

R- swara...baas itna saara khana tum bana to logi pr Sanskaar itna ek baar me khayange to phool ke gubbare jaise ho jayenge...

S- ragini...bahut pitengi...

R- sorry swara hum to baas majak kar rahe the

So the food is ready...ragu came in kitchen running and jumping

R- swara sanskaar ki flight land ho gai hai...wo baas ek ghante me pahuch jayenge

S- saachi ragini...

R- haa swara...jao ready ho jao jaldi se warna sanskaar bolenge ki unki biwi se kaam karwate hai...

S- dhaat ragini...

Swara enters the room...
(Tu aata hai seene me...jab jab sanse bharti hu)

She looks at sanskaar photo and goes towards it
(Teri dil ki galliyon se... mai har roz guzarti hu)

She took photo in her hand and started caressing the photo
(Hawaa ke jaise chahta hai tu...mai ret jaise udti hu)

She was rembering all her sweet moments with him
(Kaun tujhe yu pyaar karenga...jaise mai ye karti hu)

She thought to wear sanskaar favorite colour saree
(Meri nazar ka safar tujhpe hi aake ruke...kehne ko baki hai kya kehna tha jo keh chuke)

She came out of washroom wearing the dress and started adoring herself with the gifts sanskaar gave her
(Meri nigahen hai..teri nigahen ki tujhe khabar kya be khabar)

At the same time her phone rang
(Mai tujhse si chup chup kar...Teri aankhein badhti hu)

She saw it was from Sanskaar...she picked up hurriedly...
Hello Sanskaar...
Nai mam wo aapke pati hai kya...
Haa aap kaun kya hua hai..
Wo unka accident ho gaya hai...aap jaldi she ABC hospital aa jaye...

Her phone slipped out of her hand just like her world slipped out of her hand...
(Kaun tujhe yu pyaar karenga...jaise mai ye karti hu)


Done...sab roo lo ab...

Edited by elsanna - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Tani yaar this is mindblowing...
Jyada lamba nahi likhungi...
Wish to see something lk that on the show someday(fk death though)
Lv u tani for writing this os
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Posted: 8 years ago
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tani this is awesome 👏👏

but sanskar accident 😭 . continue dear want to see the swasan union
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pari_1995

Tani yaar this is mindblowing...
Jyada lamba nahi likhungi...
Wish to see something lk that on the show someday(fk death though)
Lv u tani for writing this os

Yes pari me too wanna this soon on my dabba😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dear...
Im inshock..plzzz continue soon..i want closure with swasan reunion...overall nicely written...

Talia

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