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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tani_0209

U r xcptionally amzng yar..

Read 2 parts 2gdr..N I jst loved dm..
Jealousy btwn d two z beautifully potrayed..
Bt Vo chota sa romantic scn still topped d update..
Waiting 4 d nxt..

N yh about suggestion I thnk it wud b better if confession somehow comes out jealousy cz dono hi kafi tashan dete h na to it ll suit dere characters more..
Rest all z up to u😊


Thanks a lot Tani. Romantic scenes beech beech mein chipka doongi. Sabke mann ke muraad puri ho jayegi. I am about to update in a few moments.
Thanks for the suggestion Tani. I would make sure to come upto your expectations.
Glad you liked it. Thanks again.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Awesome update yaar 👏

Arey silk factory ko bas thoda hi jalaya or jalao or jalao.. Bechara cotton factory😆
I'll choose jealousy.. I will love to see that😉 higher level of jealousy 😃


Hey Anmol! Thanks mate. Glad you liked it. Arre! yeh to bas shuruwat hai! aage aage dekho hota hai kya!😉
Thanks for ur suggestion. Jealously ke main bahut levels banane waali hoon. after all i have to make it different. 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: poornima_15

Superb updates ... read all the parts in one go ... and loved them🤗


Thanks Poornima! Glad u liked them.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: aNibirFan

Read all the parts👏👏
Kaafi aag lagi hai🤣koi firebrigade ko bulao yaar🤣
Jealousy track is going superb😃
Teeka wala scene was really funny😆
Koi aane ko hai se I had thought of Viraj but aise socha naa tha
Viraj saying tu-mai😲 listening first time😉
Rainbow waala decoration on wall beautiful yaar
Factories ko aur jalao liking it😆
Continue soon😊
Mujhe pata hai abhi time hai but happy birthday in advance
Mai pata nai kab online hongi next so wishing now itself
And yeah call me Neeru btw


Thanks Neeru (finally tumhara naam pata chal gaya!) Arre fire brigade abhi kyun bulaana hai! more fire to come😆 Viraj is also different u see!😉. The rainbow wala idea was my friend's. She is a great painter and is happy all the time for no reason. I call her Rainbow. 😆. Ab factories jal jal ke thak jaayengi. 😆
Now I can say that you are the first one to wish me!😆 Thanks though. Okay no prob but please apni story jaldi update karo. Football love wait nahi kar paa raha hai!😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: angelanju

pika pika😆🤗
wah kya baat hai...silk factory bhi jalne lagi🤣
dono jalte hue kitne pyaare lagte haina?🤣
awesome update👏
hum jealousy wala confession accha hai...and main ishqbaaz se mallika ko suggest karungi...😊
but kuch aur different idea mile to main bata dungi...abhi kuch nhi soojh raha😕


Thanks Anju! Poora imagine kara hai tumne it seems.😆
Thanks for ur suggestion. Will keep that in mind. And good suggestion with the character. Malika is good for that. I will see to it. Thanks again.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Sorry guys, I was so late in updating this time. Had some real important work. I hope you guys understand. and Sorry for I am not sticking to the PRECAP because I got a much better track for now. This is not similar to the precap.


Chapter-17

Kyun Ched rahe ho?(Akshay Kumar style)😆

They went to their respective homes and after a few family discussions they were ready to sleep.

Nisha's ROOM

Ni- (to herself) Chalo bhai! It is already late. Sleep very well Nisha. Because from tomorrow we are on it!

Vi- (coming from behind) You won't be able to sleep well.

Ni- (turned) Viraj? Kya hua? Neend nahi Aa rahi?

Vi- sort of! (sit on the bed)

Nisha gives him the other end of the blanket and shares it with him. now Nisha is on the dashboard side of the bed while Viraj on the opposite and they are sharing the same blanket (kuch ulta seedha mat sochna).

Ni- (realized that he was thinking deep about something) Kya hua Viraj? I know you are thinking about something!

Vi- you are right Nisha. Actually I have a confusion.

Ni- and what would it be?

Vi- Nisha, you and Kabir are good friends it seems.

Ni- Friends? Not even by-mistake.

Vi- You hate him so much?

Ni- obviously!

Vi- Then why were you feeling jealous when Ayesha was coming close to him?

Ni- (tries to hide because she didn't even realize that she was angry at that time) there is nothing like that. I was never angry with him for such a reason. Aur tune jo mere expressions dekhe hain that are always the same when that guy is around.

Vi- But those expressions were different.

Ni- They weren't!

Vi- I'll show you. (he secretly clicked a photo of Nisha's expressions when Ayesha hugged Kabir outside)

Ni- (snatches the phone) What is this Viraj?

Vi- I knew you won't accept it that it why I clicked a photo.

Ni- Viraj aisa kuch nahi hai. We are not even friends.

Vi- Dosti bhi dheere dheere ho jayegi aur fir next step. (teasingly)

Ni- Nothing of such kind would take place. We are people with two different mindset. We cannot even think of agreeing at a point.

Vi- But still you two agreed on not getting married and not falling in love. (they talked about it on the beach)

Ni- For the very first time our ideology about something is similar.

Vi- Nisha are you hiding something from me?

Ni- (sternly) No!

Vi- (casually) Then surely you might be hiding something from yourself!

Ni- might be! (realizes what she said and what he said) Viraj!

Viraj started running in the room and Nisha started following him with a cushion in her hand. He also took a cushion and they started a pillow fight. After some time they got tired and sat on the bed.

Vi- Vaise Nisha, on a serious note, do you feel anything for Kabir?

Ni- Viraj, paglon jaisi baatein tujhpe achi nahi lagti hai. There is nothing between me and Kabir and there will never be. I do not even like him. the most irritating character of my life.

Vi- Okay! Then I must be sorry for asking such a question to you. I am sorry!

Ni- Viraj, you don't need to be sorry for such a small thing.

Vi- Okay then! Good night! (leaves but stops at the door) Vaise Nisha, Kabir is not a bad choice. (Nisha threw a pillow at him but missed because he had already ran away)

Ni- (smiles) Idiot!

Nisha goes to sleep but the things Viraj said were going on in her mind. After some time she slept.

In Kabir's ROOM

Kabir was also about to sleep when Kartik entered the room but stopped at the door and folded his hands against his chest and glared at Kabir.

Ka- (acts scared) Kitni gandi aankhon se dekh rahe ho? Iraada kya hai?

Kar- Tera kya hai? (continuation of the same look)

Ka- Mera toh sone ka hai, par mujhe aapka kuch theek nahi lag raha hai?

Kar- Kuch toh gadbad hai!

Ka- Bhai, come inside first.

Kartik went inside and sat on the bed but had the same looks.

Ka- Bolo kya hua aapko?

Kar- Mujhe? Tujhe kya hua?

Ka- What do you mean? I cannot understand. Say it clearly.

Kar- Look!

Kartik showed a picture in which Nisha and Viraj were taking a close type of selfie and Kabir was giving angry looks.

Kar- Ab kya kehna hai?

Ka- (shocked, snatches the phone) What is this?

Kar- I should ask this.

Ka- Arre bhai! Who gave you this?

Kar- Viraj!

Ka- (monologue) Yeh Viraj na, chipkoo chipkali (he didn't like chipkale much and neither did I) mujhse bhi dushmani nikalta rehta hai.

Ka- Bhai! This is nothing. I was angry with Nisha because of some reason.

Kar-And that some reason can be you were jealous of Viraj being so close to Nisha?

Ka- Bhai please! This cannot happen even in my wildest dreams. I don't even like her.

Kar- (sarcastically) Well, it seems so from this picture, doesn't it?

Ka- Bhai, now you trust this picture more than me?

Kar- I always will. And moreover Viraj told me that you seemed to be angry throughout the day, especially when Viraj was near Nisha.

Ka- (monologue) Yeh kale mungoos ko chain nahi hai. Aag bhi khud hi lagata hai aur usmein ghee bhi khud hi daalta hai. Chipkoo Chipakli ke saath saath Rumor king bhi hai!

Ka- Bhai, it's not what you think it is. Nisha and I don't even like each other. We are like the North Pole and the South Pole who can never join in any possible way. We are not even friends.

Kar- Kabir, I am not angry with you. I am happy that you have got your girl.

Ka- Bhai, for the last time, Nisha IS NOT MY GIRL. She is not my type.

Kar- Tu aur tera type are useless. I am going to sleep now.

He was almost left but stopped on the door.

Kar- Vaise Kabir, whenever you date her do tell me. (runs away)

Ka- Bhai numberi toh bada bhai dus numberi. Uss chipkoo chipkali ko toh main bata hoon kal. Good night Kabir!

Kabir tried to sleep but Kartik's words troubled him. after some time he managed to sleep.

PRECAP- HAAN MAIN HUN TUMSE NAARAZ, KARLO JO HAI KARNA!

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: 357159pikachu



Yr ab toh bata de! Please😭



Itni jaldi kya h?
Abi to Nov start b nai hua h 😈
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Posted: 8 years ago
Arent you done with the ATs yet? Aur mero curiosity door kar na please.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786



Itni jaldi kya h?
Abi to Nov start b nai hua h 😈


Ab November start hone par batayegi. this is cheating. pure cheating. Curiousity mein chod ke chali jaati hai! Not done. Please na. Okay! Ek reason toh bata de! for the next one I will wait!
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Posted: 8 years ago
i am loving this story 😃😆
do update soon😃

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