RaTri OS: on occasion of Karva chauth; Poem on pg 2 - Page 2

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Bhaiya and Bhabhi i have written something for you both...hope you like it...

Mere dil ki hai bas ek yehi khwaish

Bhai se behen ki hai yehi farmaish

Bhabhi ko dena khushiyan bepanah

Rahe wo kabhi bhi na tanha

Rahe aap dono humesha hanste gaate

Aasaan ho aapki zindagi ke sabhi raaste

Kabhi koi khushi chhoote na aap ke haath se

Aakhir ho bane aap ek duje ke vaaste

Originally posted by: babita..

I just wish the same ki bhabhi ki mehendi aisi hi rachi ho

What a beautiful and a lovely gift in the form of an OS 👏👏

Manisha di, U have done a wonderful job creating an atmosphere of the festive mood ! loved the festival bringing back Raghav from the bad health and the fast Trisha performed, and her prayers are paid !

Awesome, so near to reality ! Loved the love RaTri have for each other !

Loved the way U have portrayed the characters and the way U have gifted this OS to our special couple at IF : Bawa bro and Swati bhabhi ❤️❤️

Very well nurtured and well told the love of a couple related to this beautiful festival of Karwa Chauth !

Thanks di, any gift will be of no value in front of yours ! ⭐️⭐️

I am feeling so very happy to see this gift and only U could have done this !

Thanks and lovees 🤗

Originally posted by: babita..

Awesome thread Manisha di 👏👏

Loved it purely 🤗

⭐️⭐️ ⭐️⭐️ ⭐️ 👏👏 👏👏 👏

Originally posted by: nishi05

Manisha Awesome thread dear..

For your wishes and beautiful OS

Originally posted by: Sanu452

Loved the story a lot dear.and sorry for the delay,

Thankyou so...much for this awesome story and poem too.

Love you dear🤗❤️