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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Awesome update..

Nibir fight 😆
Really loved it.. Factory ko thoda hi jalaya or jalaba tha na..
Ab cotton factory ki baari maza aayega...


Thanks Anmol. Abhi itna jala dungi toh baad mein kya karoongi😉. Baad mein toh jal ke bhasm ho jayega fir and that i dont want, u see. 😉 And cotton factory toh jal rahi hai hi but abhi silk bhi jalna shuru hogi, 😆
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: 357159pikachu



Ek aur ke liye ready ho jaa.😉 Most probably by tonight.😆



Posted: 8 years ago


usko to bahut time h!! 😆
kitne saare parts baki hain ? I wonder 😲
waise I m happy that u r November born 😃
uske two reasons hain but I will not tell that now 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago

Darr mat not confirme. If not possible then tomorrow. Tera AT work abhi tak nahi hua?
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786



usko to bahut time h!! 😆
kitne saare parts baki hain ? I wonder 😲
waise I m happy that u r November born 😃
uske two reasons hain but I will not tell that now 😛


Parts toh bache hain kaafi to make it different. 😉Yr dont increase my curiosity. Tell me why are u happy that i am November born?😕 Wait! are you November born too??😲
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Posted: 8 years ago
pika...so nice yaar ...tu to har din update deti hai😆
accha hua wait nhi karni padi...
waise loved the NiBir scene😉
kabir J ho rha hai and use bhi nhi pata🤣
ab viraj nibir ke saath kaam karega...😆
ab update soon kehne ki zaroorat nhi hai right?😳
Edited by angelanju - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: angelanju

pika...so nice yaar ...tu to har din update deti hai😆

accha hua wait nhi karni padi...
waise loved the NiBir scene😉
kabir J ho rha hai and use bhi nhi pata🤣
ab viraj nibir ke saath kaam karega...😆
ab update soon kehne ki zaroorat nhi hai right?😳


Thanks Anju. Meri haalat wait karte hue jo hoti hai usse prob se tum logon ko bachane ke liye jaldi jaldi update karti hoon.
Glad u liked it. Thanks a lot.
haan 😆 mere khayaal se zaroorat nahi hai for UPDATE SOON line. I will update asap. 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: 357159pikachu


Thanks Anmol. Abhi itna jala dungi toh baad mein kya karoongi😉. Baad mein toh jal ke bhasm ho jayega fir and that i dont want, u see. 😉 And cotton factory toh jal rahi hai hi but abhi silk bhi jalna shuru hogi, 😆


Sorry sorry I get lil confused 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Chapter- 16

Silk Factory bhi Jalna Shuru ho Gayi Hai!😉

They went to sit inside the car. Kabir sat on the driver's seat. Nisha was about to sit on the passenger seat when Viraj came.

Vi- Nisha tum peeche baith jao. We two buddy duo will sit together.

Nisha agreed. Suddenly Ayesha came running. She went to Kabir's side.

Ka- What's the matter Ayesha?

Ay- Kabir, actually I needed a help from you. I got a call from my friend and she has asked me to meet her now, she has got some really important work. Actually Suku got a call from some people who conducted his audition and have asked him to come again for another audition. That is what Suku told me. It comes in the way of your caterer. So I thought if you could drop me in between?

Ka- Sure, why not? (looks at Viraj, in a low tone) Viraj tum peeche baith jao. (pleading eyes)

Viraj chuckles and goes to sit beside Nisha. While Nisha felt bad rather angry but she did not know the reason. Ayesha went and sat on the passenger seat. Kabir out his seat belt and started driving.

Ka- So Ayesha, why did your friend call you?

Ay- I told you, she has some important work which she told that she will tell me when I reach there. Must be a surprise! (excitedly)

Kabir and Viraj chuckle at her excitement whereas Nisha frowned.

Ka- Wait! (stopped the car) Ayesha you didn't put your seat belt?

Ay- I am sorry, I will. (she was trying but it was not locking properly)

Ka- I will help you.

Kabir goes near her side and helps her in locking the seat belt. They were quite close only according to Nisha but in reality they had a distance between them.

Ay- (side hugged him with a distance) Thanks Kabir! (Kabir smiled and started driving again)

Ni- (monologue, unknowingly angry) Kitna chipkegi! Aage ke liye bhi kuch chod de Chipkali! She is so irritating. Okay, Kabir helped her with the seat belt but what was the reason for her hugging him. she could have thanked him just by verbally saying it. Such a chipkoo.

Vi- (realized that she was a bit angry though she was hell angry) What is the matter Nisha? Everything good?

Ni- (fake smile) Yes Viraj! Everything is great. awesome! Perfect!

Ka- Ab toh paake se kuch jhol hai varna yeh itne acche words kab use karti hai.

Ni- Dekh faaltu ki baatein mat kar. Mera dimaag vaise hi bahut kharaab ho raha hai.

Ka- (laughs) ye le nikaal diya sach. Tu sirf mujh hi se sach bolti hai na! (giggles)

Viraj and Ayesha also laugh.

Ni- (arrogantly) Whatever! (looks outside)

Ka- Muh andar karle warna tera chota sa muh aur chota ho jayega. (gives hi-fi to Ayesha which infuriates Nisha even more)

Ni- (angry) Tere bade se muh ka bhi kya faayda hai. Faaltu hi toh karta hai.

Ka- (cute tone to irritate her obviously) Jaanu, I do not say Faaltu, it's just you feel it is. See Ayesha is enjoying.

Ni- (Even more angry, glares at him through the rear view mirror which is set in such a way that Nisha can see Kabir and vice versa by default because of Suku and Ayesha.) I dare you to call me with that word again or else I will kill you.

Ka- Haaye! Teri adaon ne toh pehle hi maar daala hai ab jeekar bhi kya faayda! (like a romeo)

Ni- Meri jooti ka size jaanne ka bahut sahuk Aa raha hai tujhe. Abhi bata deti hoon. (angrily takes out her slipper)

Ka- (acts as if he got scared) Nahi Nisha, please nahi! (Casually) Oh hello miss! You would get killed if you try to hit me because as a reflex action I would get my hand off the staring wheel in front of my face in order to defend myself which would definitely lead to an accident causing injuries to you as well as the others so better SHUT UP! (teasingly) Aur waise bhi tujhse nazar toh vaise bhi nahi hat ti aur upar se ye. Tu gusse mein bhi kitni haseen lagti hai.

Ni- Tu rukk! Utarne ke baad first kaam hi tujhe maarna hoga. (looks outside the window again)

They dropped Ayesha. Ayesha thanked Kabir and hugged him when Kabir came out to see her off just for fun and Nisha got more angry rather jealous because of this. They reached the caterer and talked about everything. The caterer accepted and one work was done now. It was already 4 by now because the caterer took a lot of time. They started to drive back home with Viraj driving and Nisha on the passenger seat and obviously an angry kabri on the back seat.

Ni- Yaar Viraj, I am feeling hungry. (puts her head on his shoulder)

Ka- (monologue, unknowingly angry) Aaj yeh bhi bahut chipak rahi hai! (gabbar style) Bahut yaarana lagta hai dono ke beech! (his style) Chipkoo Chipkale (female word for Chipkali invented by Kabir) ko hata dena chahiye usse but Mr. Don't Say No ko toh nahi bolna aata hi nahi hai! Irritating people!

Vi- Let us go to the restaurant where we used to go earlier.

Ni- (gets up) Great idea! I have missed going to that restaurant with you.

Ka- (monologue) Viraj just took the name of some restaurant and look what a 440 Walt smile is seen on her face! Dimwit!

They reached that restaurant. They called the waiter.

Vi- Please bring us a thali, a plate of noddles and (looks at Kabir) You?

Ka- I will go with Biryani. (monologue) Bhukkad! Kitna khata hai! Noodles bhi aur thaali bhi. I cannot finish the thaali alone and this guy can have noodles over it!? Great bhukkad!

Vi- And a biryani. (the waiter left)

Ka- (confused) Nisha ke liye?

Vi- That noodles was for Nisha. She loves the noodles of this place.

Ka- How do you know?

Ni- Come on Kabir! We have been best friends for a long time and have visited this place quite often with each other. So obviously he would know what I like and what I don't. Moreover not only for this restaurant he might still remember my favorite dishes for almost all the restaurants we visited.

Vi- And her favorite ice cream flavor is Belgian chocolate. She won't eat any other ice cream in Mumbai except for this one.

Ka- (Angry but says with a fake smile) You two know quite much about each other.

Ni- That we do! (laughs and gives hi-fi to Viraj)

Ka- (monologue) Abbe kitna chipkega Chipkoo Chipakale! Aage ke liye bhi kuch chodd de.

They had their lunch but when Nisha insisted they went to an ice cream parlor and had their favorites. But to Nisha's surprise Kabir's favorite was also the same.

Ni- Tujhe bhi Belgian Chocolate pasand hai?

Ka- Nah! (serious aashiq type) Sirf tere liye khaa raha hoon. Teri pasand meri pasand.

Nisha and Viraj were shocked. Kabir couldn't hold much and started laughing holding his stomach at their expressions.

Ka- (laughing) Obviously I love it. I love almost all the chocolate flavors.

Nisha hit him on his arm while Viraj joined him. They had the ice cream. It was evening.

Ni- Viraj you have come after so long. Let us go to for some fun which we used to have earlier.

Ka- (monologue, jealous) Dost the ki BF-GF!

Vi- Okay! Kabir are you okay with it?

Ka- Only if you promise me that you will get the diesel tank filled after that!

Vi- (chuckled) You are very funny Kabir!

Ka- (monologue, fake smile) Abbe saale! Main mazaak nahi kar raha tha.

Nisha laughed because she knew Kabir was serious about it but Viraj made it a joke. Kabir ki tucchi! They went to a Gorai beach. They had fun talking to each other. Viraj was talking too much with Nisha which irked Kabir even more. The sun set was over. It was 7:30. They left the place.

They finally reached to Nisha's house. Viraj went inside while Nisha hoped that Kabir would come out to see her off, why she wanted that she didn't know. But to her disappointment Kabir was ready to leave.

Ni- (monologue, angry) Uss Ayesha ko chodne bahar Aa gaya but mujhse pata nahi kaunsi dushmani nikal raha hai! Idiot! (thinking so she left)

Ka-(monologue, angry) Pehle Viraj se itna chipak rahi thi and now she has not even waited for me to see her off. Ek to yeh seat beat aur atak gayi. I don't want to talk to her.

PRECAP- KAAM PE KAAM, KAAM PE KAAM, KAAM PE KAAM MILTE HAIN KIRTI AUR KARITK LEKIN AARAM NAHI!


P.S.- Guys, I need a sincere suggestion from you all. What do you guys want, Jealousy wala Acceptance or Some other way out (Go maine abhi tak socha nahi hai😆)?

If it is jealousy then I want you all to give me a character from our show, Swaragini, Ishqbaaz, Beyadh (except for Maya and Arjun, because I dont like them) or Icchapyaari Naagin for the jealously track. These shows only because I was a regular viewer of NAUC and am a regular viewer of Swaragini. Rest are the ones which I see quite rarely. So inke characters ko I can use a bit, not completely because mine is different 😆.

And if not a jealously track then you can suggest me some ideas or I will use my idea!😉

Give me ur suggestion please.

AND DO NOTE THAT JEALOUSLY TRACK WILL ALSO BE ENTIRELY DIFFERENT, NOT THE NORMAL JEALOUSLY TRACK, SO SOCH SAMAJH KAR JAWAAB DENA. 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago
pika pika😆🤗
wah kya baat hai...silk factory bhi jalne lagi🤣
dono jalte hue kitne pyaare lagte haina?🤣
awesome update👏
hum jealousy wala confession accha hai...and main ishqbaaz se mallika ko suggest karungi...😊
but kuch aur different idea mile to main bata dungi...abhi kuch nhi soojh raha😕



Edited by angelanju - 8 years ago

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