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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Yasmin,

This is really amazing. So plan A was to get hold of armaan's properties through kavita. Plan B is kidnapping his dadi and little daughter. What are sanskar's three conditions. Swasan rain dance 😳. Waiting for it eagerly. 🤗For the pm. Update soon.

Love u loads

Nivi

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Priya

@All_A_MooPoint

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

I'm really sorry for the late comment!I was actually busy wid my exams!read all the parts in one go!it's jus fantastic!

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elsanna

@elsanna

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Read all 10 parts its awesome

Cont soon

Tani

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Yasmim,

This is superb. Tip tip barsa pani aww my fav song 😳. And cherry on cake, swasan dancing on that. Hopefully we may get a rain dance in serial also. Oh looks like armaan is going to realize his mistakes.

U know I want twins for swasan. One like swara and other like sanskar. And chubby chubby babies. Continue soon. 🤗 For the pm.

Loads of love

Nivi

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Hey yasmin...

Sorry could not comment had busy days.i have resserved so many stories...now unreserving.

I read all part from 9 to 12...n liked it...you finished quickly...but it was nice effort..will wait for next from you...

p.s...Word of advice...drag story alot.dont rush it quickly...give detailed view to everything...

Talia

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Res Yasmin. Will unres soon

Unres

This is superb, Yasmin 👏. Poor armaan. He thought swara was his sanjana. So that is why he was so obsessed with swara. Glad he accepted his mistake and surrendered himself. Twins for swasan, omg. Thank u so much for accepting my request. Cute babies of cute parents 😳. 🤗For the pm. Want to read more from u. A small piece of advice. Try to give a deep view in every scene. Hope u r not offended.

Love u loads

Nivi

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