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BarkhaSingh123

@BarkhaSingh123

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

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Hi Yasmin

I apologize for the delay

Read the whole story from 1st to 5

The plot is really nice

The difference between true love n obsession is clearly shown

In b/w at times the story git scary when Arman showed sanskaar his n swara pic

N then sanskaar believed swara it was so nice

But again Arman came n kidnapped swara n again tried to separate swasan

Thanks heaven sanskaar stopped the wedding

Well now the precap I think it's about Swara's pregnancy may be

Idk

Waiting for the next update

Thanks for the beautiful story

Loads of love

Harshita

Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 8 years ago

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

This is out standing Yasmin 👏. This armaan is so obsessed with swara. Glad sanskar came and stopped armaan. Sanskar beat that pyscho. Yipppee. Good news may be about swara's pregnancy. Just a guess. Thank u so much for writing wonderful story. Want to read more from u. Update soon. 🤗For the pm. Muah.

Love u loads

Nivi

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Hey yasmin..dear...

Read all part in one go...awesome ...enjoyed alot..you have great writing skill...

But plzzz keep pace of story little slow..i enjoyed alot...but for your skills ..i want to tell you to drag story alot..to give thrill...full of suspense n twist.it just a friendly advice...will wait for next...do pm me...

Talia

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

This is really an emotional update Yasmin. Swara is pregnant yippee. Arman is alive. Hope he don't create problems for swasan. Precap is really cute. Could u pls keep the pace of story little slow. This is just a suggestion. Hope u are not offended.

Love

Nivijo

Edited by Nivijo - 8 years ago

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Yasmin...

chapter 7...Now that i called an amazing update ...short n shocking...liked alot...

Why swara did not inform anyone??..others did not notice white sari??? How cunningly arman faked his death...atleast swara should confide sanky...

Wondering how will she tackle armaan...precap looks chilling...waiting

Talia

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BarkhaSingh123

@BarkhaSingh123

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Yasmin chapter 7 was amazing

Very interesting and interguing

Pls update soon

Can't wait to know more

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Hello Yasmin. First of all, I'm really sorry for the late reply. I was actually out of station. Coming to 7th and 8th chapters they are mind blowing. Loved everything about them. Don't know why this armaan is so hell obsessed with swara. Glad sanskar brought swara to their old haveli. What is the surprise planned by armaan. What did sanskar plan to tackle him. I'm really waiting for this revelation. Update soon. 🤗For the pm.

Love u loads ❤️

Nivi

Edited by Nivijo - 8 years ago

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Nice yasmin...

Thank God swara revealled it to sanky..that arman is harassing her...he did good by taking swara away..so they can manage n enjoy quality time...as well as plan to get rid of arman...waiting for next...

Talia

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dis_arshi

@dis_arshi

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

nice updates

sanskar and swara gonna have a baby

that is so cute

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Yasmin yaar itna suspense. I want to know the suspense about the plan soon. Hope with these 2 plans armaan picha chod de swara ka. Update soon. 🤗 For the pm.

Love u loads

Nivi

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