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Posted: 8 years ago
#71
hi thanks 4 da wonderful update! well written! dadi unwell! Maan says sorry 2 her as its his fault! Dadi upset as he didn't attend the reception party! Geet was left alone n ppl were talking! Feeling 4 Geet n hate Maan! Maan angry as he married Geet who has no family background or money that will help him with his business! he insults Geet! he refuses 2 accept her as his wife! Maan wanted 2 marry Zeenat so her dad cld help him as he is a top businessman! Dadi doesn't like Geet! Maan only thinks abe money! Maan says its everything! his mom left cos of it! Get well soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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very nice update
maan feeling guilty for daadi's condition
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
Nice update
maan vl not accept geet as his wife soon...
He loves money so he wanted to marry zeenat..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice story
Poor Geet is suffering without any mistake
Thanks for PM
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu5

Waiting for the next update

If possible do send pm when ever you update ur stories!!😊

sure dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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yes whatever maan is saying is wrong but then how to blame him fully...his mom left him for money...so for him money is everything and other things do not matter...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing update. Maan is so selfish and greedy. He wants to marry Zeenat not because he loves her but because she belongs to a rich family. By marrying her he can progress in his business. He is so angry that he left his reception part in mid. He had a big argument with Dadima and he left home. He came back after one week when Dadima's condition is too bad.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice ud
maan bursts on daadi wen daadi question him y he left his own reception in mid he told how low he think about geet he want to marry Zeenat fr hr money and status daadi ruined hid plan and he not accept geet as his wife
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Posted: 8 years ago
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a little mire
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Part 4 -



" i so sorry i never wanted to hurt you,i only wanted to hurt that girl "


After that heated argument Maan left from there and went to Singapore for business trip without telling Dadima. There he again met Zeenat in a party organized by business Associations. In party they spend good time together and that became big news.


'The business tycon MK's sceret affair with Zeenat Azmi '



all news channel telecast that with big headline and he didn't care after all he wanted to show Geet that she can't rule or control him ,he will never gonna be hers. But never thought that Dadima would see it . He cursed himself for his foolishness, Dadima is only person of his family, he can't afford to lose her.




Maan looked at Geet who is sleeping beside Dadima, looking so pale, he want to kick her out but he also know that she was the one who taken care of Dadima when he was busy in his so called business. He would never forgive her for what she did but Dadima loves her and for Dadima's sake he would accept this relation.




Geet's sleep broke hearing some noise and she saw her husband coming from washroom looking very worn out. Their eyes met for sometime, then Maan sat beside Dadima. Geet held her breath to hear some of his angry words of insult for her but nothing came.




Yes she heard what he said about her that night ' I'm sure people were saying what's true if she doesn't know her father name then can't blame anyone calling her najay... "



she couldn't believe the man whom she loves so much thinks so low about her. She realised Dadima lied to her ,but can she blame the old lady who always treat her as her own daughter, who only lied so that she can get her love. Even she can't blame Maan ,he loves Zeenat because of her he is away from his love but she never expected Maan can saying such bad things about her.




Is father's name is everything ? What about the mother who give birth to her child ? Why girls have to take their father name ? Can't she known by her mother ?. Till now she tolerated all people's talking about her background and never cared but Maan's talking like this broke something in her.



Maan look up and saw Geet standing there and finally he said " Go , I'm here for my Dadima ". She nodded and left from there silently .



Next day ,Dadima's condition gets better. She opened her eyes and saw her grandson and daughter in law looking very worried. She smiled at Geet and totally ignored Maan. She never thought her grandson would run behind that girl even after he is married. Maan understood Dadima is angry ,he took her hand and asked softly " Dadima how are you feeling now?"...


" hum jiye ya mare kya fark parta hai appko,jaiye aap yeha se".



" What are you saying Dadima ? You are my everything. I am so sorry. I didn't mean to hur...".



" sorry humse nehi Geet se kahiya " Dadima cut him off and looked at Geet sadly " first you left leaving your wife aur waha kisi aur ke saath chi... How could you do that ? ".



Maan lowered his eyes not because of shame because of anger, again his Dadima is scolding him because of his so called wife. But he can't lose his control now.



" i am sorry Dadima, i promise it won't happen again and i will do what you want" ...



Dadima smiled a little looking at her grandson "Thank you beta" she took Geet's hand and placed it to his "aap dono humesha khush rahiya,hume aur kuch nehi chahiye ". Geet looked at their joined hand and smiled a little to Dadima.




After some time Maan left from there to attend a call. Dadima looked at Geet guilty " I'm sorry beta, i lied to you ".



" nehi Dadima don't say sorry ,you lied for my happiness ".


" But Maan..".



" Everything is fine between us. Aur aap toh jante hai na media walo ko woh toh kuch bhi chap dete hai ,don't take stress because of those baseless news " .



"par aapne Maan ko bataya na ke humne aapse jhoot bolo tha ki Maan aap se shadi karna chate hai thats why you agreed for this marriage "...


Geet only her head and said " stop worrying about us and take rest ".



She went to his room which is now theirs when Dadima slept. She entered and saw Maan still talking to his phone after ending the call he was about to leave Geet stopped him ...


" i want to say something to you".




Maan looked at her angrily and said with attitude " If you are expecting sorry from me then you are wrong Geet, i never said sorry or will say it now, aur vaise bhi the girl who tricked me in this unwanted marriage don't deserve it " saying this he was about to left but Geet's next words stop him again...




"i don't expect sorry from you nor i want to bind you in this unwanted relation . Very soon i will free you from this Nikah till then for Dadima's sake i only want you to pretend as we are happy together and everything is fine between us " saying this she left from there .



She could have told him truth that Dadima lied to her but she didn't as now she know very well what he thinks about her more of all he loves someone else. Tears of pain keep flowing from her eyes, even after all this her heart is still beating for the man who reject her because of her father's name , because of some other girl and she know that no matter what she would never be able to hate him...




( updated after long ... want to clear one thing Geet didn't listen their whole convoy just the part where he said bad things about her then she left )
Edited by Keepdreaming - 8 years ago

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