SuKor OS: A Riddle in Nine Syllables

Aradh_27

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hello guys!

So I was supposed to PM this fic (which has been sitting on my computer for a couple of days, now) and not post it on the forum, but I was far too lazy.

So here is my take on a trope I hate like no other-an unplanned pregnancy.

Warning: Mature content ahead. Also this fic is and will remain incomplete. I was supposed to write a brief epilogue but I grew to hate the story so much, I couldn't bring myself to finish it.

So read at your own risk!

The title is a line from Sylvia Plath's "Metaphors".

Liked what you just read? If so, then do check out my other fics!

Multi-chapter fics:

Cat among the Pigeons: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/udann/4668842/sukor-ss-cat-among-the-pigeons-discontinued

The Name of the Game: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/udann/4695557/sukor-ss-the-name-of-the-game-discontinued

My OS series- As mushy as it gets! 😛

Starry Night: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/udann/4677395/sukor-os-starry-night

Sunflowers: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/udann/4683678/sukor-os-sunflowers

Almond Blossoms: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/udann/4703502/sukor-os-almond-blossoms

Stand-alone OS:

Four Times Suraj Saw Chakor : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/udann/4739160/os-four-times-suraj-saw-chakor

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Aradh_27

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Sid

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Aaru...are you seriously planning to quit writing that's why you gave such a mammoth OS? Don't think like that..pretty please.😳

This is probably that 'Suraj-Chakor, please get into bed together crying for lost loves' which we had once discussed in AT. I never thought Chakor would get pregnant after that...wah re Suraj.😆

Overall. it was a well-written, crisp piece of writing focusing only on Suraj-Chakor. It's good that you don't plan on continuing this one because it's complete..no need for any additions.

I hope this is not the last one though..

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SofiaIshVeer

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Posted: 9 years ago

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It's really beautiful, keep writing 😊

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SukiDakanya

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Wow this is the 1st time I have read your works.

You have captured the essence of the TV characters like Suraj running away and drinking after their night together seems very much like Suraj would. Of course Chakor would sell her soul to the highest bidder the "Noble Idiot" Trope in alll K dramas!

When it comes to the unplanned pregnancy I completely believe in pro choice. In the same way, this is a very well written story given the current dynamics of the show and the mystery of Imli's baby daddy... (though it's not hard to believe that Suraj is despicable enough to sleep with Imli and lust after Chakor and Tina's wealth. We all like him cuz he is a very very very bad boy😳) It would be great to see where you flesh out the characters.

Good work... :D

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Immaturebookie

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Posted: 9 years ago

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I'm lost for words to me this whole one shot was such a phenomenally penned work of art 👏. I swear your stories are so intriguing and addictive. Thank you so much for sharing this with us 😆

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maaneet_michi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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I did like ur story.mych closer to current storyline

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Namita

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Holy crikey!! That was amazing. Aru, you keep raising the standards, girl. I can't get over this. It is so well written. Brilliant, bravo and beautiful. I sincerely hope, you don't give up writing.

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vinlora

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Posted: 9 years ago

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OMG ...it's outstanding dear...i read it in one go and forgot the world...loved loved loveddd it so much...thank u so much for the wonderful piece of work. ..and plz continue your writing. ..😊

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Radhika_r

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Posted: 9 years ago

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aaru, u simply cannot stop writing!!! plsss dont do this to us!!! i know it is tough but believe me your writings are simply fab and so awesome to read

have read each of them so many times and walked witha stupid grin on my face throughout the day after reading it . both yours and sanya's bring out this reaction in me😳

loved this OS. awww !! am actually waiting to see them consummate their marraige on screen.i will kill the director if he shows two flowers dashing against each other or candles glowing brightly. 😆. u and sanya have raised the bar!!😆

actually love your chakor. she is inclined towards suraj , wants him , wants his child which is so lovely, i simply loved the hospital scene.

and of course the explanation he gave on imli was simply too good , waiting to see that happen on screen

loved it aaru and hoping u will continue to write.

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